Date: Sep 28, 2022 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
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Date: Aug 24, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 45: New Beginings
i can't wait!! xD
Author's Response: It's coming soon!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 12:55 am Title: Chapter 44: On The Line
pretty please continue the next chapter!!! :))xx and i hope you'll keep write this story!xx
Author's Response: Thank you I will! Sadly to say, the following chapter will be the last for this story. However, a sequel will be posted soon after. Thanks so much for your support!!
Date: Aug 17, 2013 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 44: On The Line
Awww! I'm happy they made up. I know they'll make it through. :)
Author's Response: Yes!! Finally they've made up!!!Thank you so much for your constant support!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2013 04:00 am Title: Chapter 43: Listen To Your Heart
Just caught up. XD This story is so exciting omg.
Katherine is right; she should listen to her heart. She can't just leave after everything Michael's done for her. Shamone Meli! You're not thinking straight gurl. :P
Can't wait for more ^_^ , <33
Author's Response: Maybe Meli's recovering form shock. Thanks so much for your endless support! Much Love!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2013 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 36: I'm So Blue
congrats on your one year mark! my first, story was that it was really good and that it had a lot of drama to catch my tension :D my favorite character is Meli because she's a strong woman even though she went through some really rough patches she stayed strong. I don't think Tatiana should have stayed in the story the way she exited the story was just fine :D my favorite chapter is all of them too hard decision to make :p but if I had to choose a chapter I would choose chapter 22 I love Meli because it's when Michael figured that he loves Meli and he's been such a fool to cheat on her. another favorite was when Meli had a miscarriage the chapter was really good and it showed the emotion of the characters very well and I like that a lot!
girl I love the story and I cant believe its almost done! you done a magnificent job!
and oh my goodness I love I'm so blue too <
<33 when he does the woaahhh part at the near end I melt ^____^
can't wait to read more! love always, Emma
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your endless support!!! Yes, I love I'm SO Blue!!! It's the best track from Bad 25!! Thanks so much!! Much love!
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2013 02:31 am Title: Chapter 37: 420 Willow Ave
Gosh I couldnt stop reading, this story is addictive. XD
I'm glad they have the potential address, and it's great Michael's getting all the help he can, and putting his time into finding Meli! :)) He really must love her.
I'm gonna read more later, I'm happily anticipating Michael whooping Anthony's ass omg
Amazing story Dear. ^_^
, <33
Author's Response: Yes, Michael loves Meli more than she thinks. That's one step closer to annihilating Anthony!! Thanks so much for your support!! Much Love!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2013 02:16 am Title: Chapter 34: Can't Let her Get Away
HE KNOWS!!!
And ANGRY MICHAEL FTW XD He's so sexy when he's mad and he means business omg
I can't wait for him to rescue Meli and kick Anthony's ass. XD
Great chapter Honey , <33
Author's Response: Oh my Gosh yes!!! Angry Michael = Sexy Michael times 10!!!!!! Michael will come to the rescue soon enough!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2013 02:07 am Title: Chapter 32: Everybody's somebody's fool
D: Meli you shoulda told the truth. :'(
What an emotional chapter though... Well written girl, it had me in tears and I imagined everything like a movie. A movie where I was reaching for the screen and yelling "NOOOOO!"
OK I'm done ahah XD :)))
, <33
Author's Response: The truth will make you free. Meli could be free right now. Wow. I didn't know it was that emotional. Trust me, I know what you mean. Some moments in my favorite stories I'm yelling at my computer screen!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2013 01:53 am Title: Chapter 31: Need you in my life
Whoo things got heated. XD
But I'm glad Michael didnt take advantage of Meli; however a great outcome from her being horny was that he saw the bruises! He needs to find out whats going on to help her.
They need each other, and I pray Michael doesn't go ahead with the divorce she's finalized... Ah I NEED them to be together. :3 :))
, <33
Author's Response: Oh yes, they did! The bruises being seen was a great plus to the action. Trust me, they will be together.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2013 01:47 am Title: Chapter 30: I Want You Back
I loved the flashback, giving us a glimpse of how the couple were:))
The gated slowly opened allowing her entrance. It was like their way of saying, "Welcome home Meli. We've been waiting for you."
Gosh I just... Love the way you write :') Its beautiful and poetic!
Meli needs to tell someone about Anthony :S I understand she wants to protect Michael but she's hurting herself in the process; and I'm sure THAT would hurt Michael even more than anything. D:
Great chapter PYT , <33
Author's Response: Before everything happened, Michael and Meli were quite a pair.Thank you so much!! I try. Yes, She's so protective of Michael that she'll let anything happen to herself. Thanks so much for the endless support!!!
Date: Jul 08, 2013 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 43: Listen To Your Heart
I'm glad Meliana's ok. That was scary.
Author's Response: It was! Thanks so much for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 10:11 am Title: Chapter 29: All because I love you
D: I wanna bust in there and shoot Anthony OK. Now!
I sure hope someone does kill him, just to save his ass from me. Lol >.<
This is how far I got but I can't wait to read more tomorrow morning. XD XD
You're an excellent writer and this story is deffo one of my favourites. :D
Much LOVE , <33
Author's Response: Lol!! I love the gif!! I always loved Home Alone! Everyone who has ever read about Anthony has it out for him! Lol!! Trust me, he's going to get it!! Thanks so much for your support!! Much love!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 10:07 am Title: Chapter 28:Threatened
D: Anthony just HAD to come and ruin it, just when things were running so smoothly!
Omg he's such a freaking creep, gosh I feel like crying because of what Meli has to go through to protect Michael... She loves him so much that she'll take this abuse... Omg *tears*
GREAT chapter Darling, I fail to see why this has so little support. It deserves more honey, you're amazing. :))
, <33
Author's Response: Lol!! Everybody just hates Anthony! He ruins everything! The love Meli has for Michael is tremendous, if she would go through all of this abuse. Thank you so much! This story used to be pretty popular but now it's like a haunted house covered in cobwebs. Anyhoo, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 10:03 am Title: Chapter 27: Persistance
AH I LOVED that opening paragraph; you're such a talented writer! ^.^ Your writing is a pleasure to read. :D
I think the easter egg hunt was sweet! It at some point showed that beautiful soft side of Meli wihch we havent been exposed to for a while. :-))
^.^ I loved the chapter. :D , <33
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! You're too kind!! I seriously thought this chapter was so cheesy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!