[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2015 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
Oh goodness. Honey, you need to bring this story back! Lol. I'm just being honest. I refuse to update until you do. Ha.
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2012 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: Wanna be where you are
Aww poor Michael getting picked on by his brothers. I liked this chapter very much and i already knew that Michael had a thing for Patricia. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: I know,you gotta love brothers though! :) Anyone could tell from the very begining. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 9: Ain't no sunshine when he's gone
Aww the last part of this chapter was sad. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: I know. Michael is the sunshine of Patricia's life! I will!
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
Listen here,you! You should have TOLD me you've been updating. I love this story. Would you believe me if I told you that I teared up at the end? I really did.:'D And, it's high time, we wrote a story together! (I mean that) Keep writing!
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry:)Thanks so much for all your support! I teared up at the end too. It was painful to write. I going to be out of school in two weeks so I'll have pleanty of time to write a story with you. Thanks for aways reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2012 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 7: Kiss me goodnight
Awwwww! They are so cu-ute! I love this story. It deserves more reviews.:*
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2012 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
Yay! Have I mentioned how sacred pinky promises are? Lol, you can't break them. I love this story with a passion! Lol, one of these me and you are going to collaberate on a story! That's a promise. :*
Author's Response: We really do need to collaborate!! And yes Pinky Promises are very very sacred!! Thanks for reading I might have another chapter up by tonight. I feel the story hasn't been progressing as it should so now that I'm on spring break is the time to update. Thanks for the lovely reviews!
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2012 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: The talent show
This is a good story and I like how it's about friendship where most stories are all about rated R stuff. I think you've got a good idea and I'd keep reading if you continued the updates.
The detail was good. You didn't over do it nor did you under do it. Sometimes you missed a few letters/periods here and there but it's just minor typos so maybe you should proofread your work so you catch those little mistakes.
Also, when theres dialogue, you should start a new paragraph when you switch speakers. Most of the time, thats what you did, but sometimes it was not the case.
All in all, this is one of the better written stories I have read so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'll try to edit the typos and I'll work on the dialogue more. Thanks for taking the time to read and thanks for the criticism!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: You're my best firend
Good. I mean the way you write is really good... :) but you need to concentrate more on presentation like writting the dialects in seperate paragraphs.. love Rose :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I will work on that!
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
wow... well written girl! I mean i dont know why it doesnt have more review, but i think MJ Fan fiction reader dont like sad startings... But to me its still good! I gonna read 2nd <3
Author's Response: Thank you!! I really didn't like to start it off sad but this story has a sad vibe. Make sure you check out the video on the story notes, it's a tear jerker. Thanks for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
I have a confession. I downloaded the audio of 'Michael' from An American Dream, singing that song. I just played it as I read that chapter. It's so cute! Why is it, Michael is always witnessing 'crayon incidents'?;)
Author's Response: I was thinking about that that too when I wrote this chapter and I also got some info from Moonwalk too. Lol!! I guess Michael needs to join the crayon witness protection program;)
Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2011 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Anything I'd do for you
I see you took my advice,and continued.:D Your story is a-m-az-ing. I see you have a 'Mary Lou Jenson' in here.lol,Bullies are always messing with Mike's best friends. Mike will show them!>:D
Author's Response: That's right!! Thank you so much!!
Much love>3
Date: Nov 24, 2011 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
Haha, I'm not accusing you of accusing me.(If that makes sense) Yes, I'd like another chapter! Don't let lack of reviews get you down. I think you're a great writer. I kind of understand your pain, my story doesn't get very many reviews:D You should never let that get you down,though. Do I have to sing Don't Let It Get You Down?
Author's Response: yay!! Sometimes lacks of reviews do get you down. I'd like to become a writer someday so I like to know what people think. Thank you!! I think you're a great writer too! Lol!! Thanks!!
Date: Nov 24, 2011 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: A love like no other
So I see alot of my story in your story, which I find ironic. Lol, I'm NOT stealing anything. I pinky Promise;)
Author's Response: No I don't think you are:) I posted this story before you posted yours I just kept erasing it by accident. I've been wanting to do a story like this and the first few times where successful but no one reviewed on the third time. Anyway I really like your story and I'm not accusing you of stealing I am just grateful you reviewed:)
Would you like another chapter?