Date: Jan 27, 2013 02:04 pm Title: Making Up
Update soon! :)
Author's Response:
I plan on it: ) Continue to read!
Date: Jan 27, 2013 07:52 am Title: Making Up
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: Sep 13, 2012 08:14 am Title: The Call
I really like it :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. LOVE!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Mike got mad over some dancin!? I thought niggas liked to dance.?? That's no reason to get mad.
Author's Response:
We Know Mike BiPolar!!! Lmao
Date: Jul 03, 2012 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
Was I da only 1 lookin forward to dat foursome? ...just sayin ^_~ , and u wrong for dat gurl puttin dat idea n my head n then not doin it ! ! ! Plz continue :-) ,,
Author's Response:
Blame It On yanagirl07!!!!!! Lol
Date: Jun 30, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 12: Truth Is Out Now
I love this...keep goin plz... !
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you're enjoyign the story!
And lol at the review that you left on Chapter 13!
I wasn't in a foursome writing kind of mood lol! Maybe in another chapter we'll see them again ;)
-YANAgirl07
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2012 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 12: Truth Is Out Now
Erica is a fuckin mess!! I knew I wasn't wasn't going to like Dementria I didnt let her on BGC either. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2012 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 11: Something's Up
Wow! She whupped Demetria's ass! Cassidy and her friends are something else. Michael had better get himself together and tell Cass what's the deal with Demetria.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2012 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Haters Be Hatin'
ohh shoot Mike said he could smell her coming lmbo! stanking ass! hahaha anyway Cassidy better watch out for Demetria. Good chapter :-)
Author's Response: Lmao. Yup she is definitely stank. Even though Mike definitely don't want her, Cassidy has competetion. <33
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2012 09:19 am Title: Chapter 10 : Haters Be Hatin'
Oh lord! Demetria about to start shit.
Author's Response: Yup. Of course there has to be the hater that has to ruin everything. <33
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2012 12:08 am Title: Chapter 10 : Haters Be Hatin'
Demitra needs Michael back.? Bitch you never had him.!! All she did was get on her knees!! Ugh Slut!!
Author's Response: Lmao. It looks like Cassidy is gonna have to put her in her place because shes not listening to Mike. I think Demetria needs a bath. Hm. >:). Lol <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2012 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
they are just so cute...the boys were wrong for busting in the room like that though
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2012 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
I hope Michael doesn't play her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2012 11:21 am Title: You're the One
*_* they might as well go ahead & hook up
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2012 07:50 am Title: You're the One
That was hawt!! Hopefully they will become a couple after this not just a hit it and quit it!
Date: Mar 20, 2012 09:17 am Title: Not a Chapter!
ok these are some of the sex chapters in my story She Got It (19, 23, 33, 40, 45, 50) now some aren't all that great because I didn't really go into detail but I will go more in depth eventually
Date: Mar 19, 2012 06:21 pm Title: Not a Chapter!
lol i could do it but i'm not so sure how heated you want it...do you want me to tell you which of my sex chapters to read so you can see if they're good enough?
Author's Response:
Yeah and Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2012 07:11 pm Title: Preparations
i hope this date goes well...the chapter was great just too short but you already apologized for that so no need to do it twice *hugs*
Author's Response:
I feel so horrible for it being so short!! Im so sorry. *hug*
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2012 05:29 pm Title: A Day With The Homies
Smokin weed does you the munchices!! Lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2012 10:06 am Title: The Call
:) Alright! Here's my HONEST review...
So good idea for a story, but here's the thing...
I think five girls on one stoy is too much. There might be too many ideas going on at once and (I'm not 100% sure snce I'm not working on this story myself) that you guys are trying to fit every single one is, and it's making this pretty confusing.
The writting is confusing too. Sometimes I noticed the dialogue will be like so:
P1 blah blah blah
P2 blah blah blah
P1 blah blah blah
But sometimes it CHANGES to sometihng like this:
P1 Blah blah blah P2Blah blah blah P3 Blah blah blah P2 blah blah blah P1 blah blah blah
and it doesn't always say who's talking so when you do it like that it makes it really hard to follow.
All in all, good story idea, but ideas seem to be scattered everywhere.
Author's Response:
....k..
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2012 10:38 am Title: The Call
I hate Demetria on BGC lol She irritates me. But damn she must've been giving it to him good, he couldnt really talk to Cassidy Lol Love this chapter, update soon. Cant wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2012 03:51 pm Title: The Call
This Demetria character is similar to the Demetria on Bad Girls club rightt.? Anyway Cassidy is finally giving Mike a chance! I can't wait to see how it turns out!
Author's Response:
Lol! Yes thats the demetria!! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2012 07:37 pm Title: "Fuck That Nigga"
He just ruined his chance with that damn attitude of his lol love this. You guys are doing great
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2012 07:33 pm Title: Party
Michael is a trip lmao!! This is good
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Keep Ya Ass Off My Territory
This seems like it'll be funny