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Reviewer: IngridC Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2023 08:34 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Good start looks like this is going to be a nice story. Best part: She was an unsolved mystery even to him, the mystery himself. hehehe good one

Reviewer: Jdream Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2023 12:49 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥

Absolutly beautiful written Story! Please continue writing...

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2022 09:00 am Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥

I've been away for 7 years, but I'm back now! Was thinking to myself "oh I have a lot to get through, but I see the updates have been gradual. This was a nice chapter..Nita would make a good drill sergeant  with how stern she could be..hahaha..I hope time will let you write more soon.

Reviewer: MJMVP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2022 09:24 am Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥

i love it so bad huhuhu wishing for a sudden update ;((((

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2020 05:25 am Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

This chapter made me laugh so much! Michael was both adorable and hilarious in his drunken state. I think that so far your story has the perfect balance between the childlike side and the manly side of Michael (and this was one of the chapters that showed it the best).
It is sweet how both Nita and Michael admitted their love for each other:) I am looking forward to seeing how Nita will cope with being the girfriend of a superstar (because being Michael Jackson's girfriend is not an easy task). An amazing chapter, which totally deserves the title of the milestone chapter of TRD!

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2020 09:01 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

I must confess that I liked Michael and Bill's conversation about Nita in the previous chapter more than Nita and Jenny's conversation about Michael in this chapter. I found Michael's conversation with Bill to be deep and funny, and to better fit the chapter and the story. Bill is also a wise guy - I loved it when he told Michael that Nita is the kind of girl rare to find and easy to miss. (I am sorry I did not write this in the review for the previous chapter, where it belongs; I totally forgot to write about it).
Nita and Jenny's conversation didn't have the same flow or impact on me, it seemed a little artificial and contrived (not to mention that Nita hadn't answered Jenny's calls in a long time, and now the first thing they do when they meet is to talk about Nita's love interest). The conversation seemed to be a bit forced in there in order to have Nita admit her feelings (after Michael had already done it).
But it is nice to see that Nita has such a good friend in Jenny, who made some good points about Michael.
The best part of the chapter was of course Michael dropping the 'I love you' bomb to Nita:)

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2020 01:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Back to this wonderful story... I loved the previous chapter, with their first date, it was special (with the hilarious part where Nita asked Michael to buy Thriller for her).
This chapter was lovely as well:) Michael is adorable and funny as he is so scared to let Nita know he is in love with her, lol. I don't think anything happened between Nita and that guy Stevie.

Reviewer: KarenR63 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2020 04:47 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

I loved this story so much!

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2020 02:00 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 14: Between The Sand And The Sky ♥

I love the flashback, Michael and Rita's interaction was so cute:)

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Date: Dec 22, 2019 01:04 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥

"Please don't give me competition, sweetheart. Hell, I don't like competition!" That pretty much sums up Michael's entire attitude throughout the whole chapter. He made me laugh when he was mocking that guy. It was a sight to see him acting that way and realizing he was being all territorial and jealous, lol. Glad he and Nita are on better terms:)

Reviewer: KaylaR123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2019 08:02 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

❤️❤️

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Date: Nov 23, 2019 12:46 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

😍

Reviewer: KaylaR123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2019 12:46 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

😍

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Date: Nov 23, 2019 12:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

😍

Reviewer: alicexavier Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2019 03:41 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

What a good take on what bad michael could really be :D

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