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Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 11:27 am Title: Two Parts Of One

Hi :) are you coming back? I love Serhat's personality.... So irreverent and out-spoken. Keep going!!!

Reviewer: Luckystar456 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2013 09:00 am Title: The Road To Thebes

I need an update please lol:) I love this story too much!?!

Reviewer: Thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 04:09 pm Title: The Road To Thebes

Sounds vedy interesting. I love ancient Egyp, and look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie... I promise I would update soon... Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Luckystar456 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2013 01:18 pm Title: Two Parts Of One

Love this chapter. This story is just all kinds of amazing. I like Merankhet. It is like she does not take any kind of bullshit, but is still approachable. Update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Hee hee hee, thank you so much sweetie... thank you so much for the review. Yes I would update soon. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Ania WMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 09:08 am Title: The Road To Thebes

Here it is, this time I hope you can see this handsome gentleman

 



Author's Response: Yep I see the picture. He looks so adorably cute in this one!!! Le sigh... Thank you again sweetie... Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Ania WMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 09:04 am Title: The Road To Thebes

I love it enormously and you know it. Each time I read it I feel as if I was moving in time to Ancient Egypt, which is wonderful. This is really an amazing trip and reading this is like a delicious treat.....

I cannot wait for Menefer's and girls first official meeting....

Please update soon.....

 

Look who's coming to give you these flowers....

 

[img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/7518/michaeljackson134276top.jpg[/img]

 



Author's Response: Ania darling I missed you!!! Oh thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you guys like this even though Michael barely made an appearance. I promise you more. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours...

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 04:52 am Title: Two Parts Of One

This chapter made my morning ^_^

It may be a weird compliment but I just love the conversations! Even if this didnt have Michael I think I'd like it haha. :D

But omg Serhat, my oh my what a tough nut! 

Serhat frowned at him. "Well I certainly find it disturbing that you believe you are more experienced in handling a woman's jewelry than she does it herself..."        --------------- LOL! :')

I couldnt stop laughing at Maggie's review, the part about the sisters not being separated. XD

Can't wait for more. , <33



Author's Response:

Oooooh Sabrina.... reading your reviews makes my day!!! You'd be seeing Michael in the next chapter. I promise you that. Thank you so much for all your kind encouraging words. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours....

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2013 08:59 am Title: Two Parts Of One

I have a feeling that. He is the long lost brother lol. but iam not sure yet... Can't wait for the next chapter to find out tho! :D kEEP IT COMING!



Author's Response:

The long lost brother? Ha ha ha... seriously...? I didn't see that coming for an assumption! You're so cute! I'll update soon. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2013 08:53 am Title: Two Parts Of One

lol their little debate was so cute!

 

Ser has such a diiiiiiiiiifficult personality haha! Makes everyone go crazy :P even the priest!

 

So, shall the sisters never be separated..... u_u Manefer, you listenin' here?

 

 

 

lmao!

 

 

Now things are gonna get heeeeated right? There will be Manefer, his mom... the other princesses.....



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, poor Manefer... dealing with not one but two wives at the same time??? Osiris have mercy on his soul! Ha ha ha ha... Yeah, you bet things are going to get exciting... in fact i hope to stir things up more than I once intended to! Mwahahahahahaha.... I'll update soon! Thank you so much for your review. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2013 08:01 pm Title: Dust And Ash

That is nice of Serhat :) i love this book btw! keep it coming lol



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie... Thank you for the review.. I'll be updating soon... Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Luckystar456 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 06:39 pm Title: One Fleeting Moment

I have a sudden urge to watch and jam to Remeber the time all of a sudden:0

Love this setting and the description make everything sound so....real:)



Author's Response:

Awww... thank you sweetheart... I'm so happy you like this story... I was really worried when I started off that this story wouln't fare well. Guess I should spice up the romance a bit... tee hee hee... Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours...

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 02:35 pm Title: Dust And Ash

Aww, poor Mer :(

 

*sighs* I feel her, lol.

 

Apparently the obsession started when the daughter of that noble man told her about the encounter she had with the charming prince. And I have to add, the prince didn't lose any time at catching his prey! lmao. Makes me wonder... how his behaviour towards the ladies will be like in the next chapters :)

 

This chapter was very useful to the story, because it deepened the relationship between the sisters and the emotions they feel towards certain subjects. Ser for now looks like she doesn't care, but she's obviously intrigued as well by Manefer.

 

We'll see what will happen!

 

 

Much LOVE for you my dear <333



Author's Response:

Thank you Maggie... your reviews always help me in what I should write next... thank you so much. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours...

Reviewer: Missbabyblue333 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 06:32 pm Title: One Fleeting Moment

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you Missbabyblue... tee hee hee... Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 04:13 pm Title: One Fleeting Moment

XD I found that gif on Tumblr haha :3 There are so many MJ gifs and blogs there its amazing omfg. 

Aw you and Maggie are awesome for coming up with it!! I didnt know she helped ^_^ Bravo and girl of course more people would be interested. XD I absolutely love this story so far and it's stories like this that keep me on this site.

This story is so different and it makes me think and imagine. Its like a sweet escapism. :))

Can't wait for more! But Maggie tells me you'll be busy with studying a lot? :( I guess I can wait... *gulps*

3

... No I'm not trying to make you feel guilty haha. Schooling is important so I understand x) I'll be patiently (well I'll try) waiting. ;)

Much LOVE , <33

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 08:40 am Title: One Fleeting Moment

Btw I almost used the name 'Michael', when I noticed I quickly replace it with Manefer :P So prior warning, if I do make that mistake in future chapters do forgive me. :))



Author's Response: That doesn't matter! Lol Michael - Manefer, we know who we're talking about... ;) I'm so glad you like this story so much! I'm so glad so many people do...! Megs and I came up with the idea together. Actually Megs suggested I write a story of this kind where there is Michael and a lot of princesses vying for his attention... and we thought the two of us would be the only ones who'd like this idea... Glad this is faring otherwise... thank you so much for all the L.O.V.E. MJ HUGS!!!

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