[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2011 12:27 am Title: Chapter 42
Sigh. It took me some days now to get used to the thought that the story came to an end. Mike and Val were with me this whole 2011 'till now - like friends, like a soothing constancy during an year that contained many difficulties and much sadness in my personal life.
BreakOfDawn - thank you a million times for bringing this wonderful story to us. Checking your blog for an update belonged to my mornings like the daily cup of coffee. You thrilled me with this story, made me smile, cry, laugh out loud; my heart ached, recovered and broke again along with Micheal and Valerie. Thank you for this wonderful way to keep Michael close and thank you for the wonderful, dreamy, comforting ending, so far away from the heartbreaking reality.
If this story should ever be released as a book - let me know <3 . Hugggssss and much L.O.V.E. to you!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2011 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 42
bravo huney, was so awesome, i'll treasure this story, i always thought he'd end up back with grace but alas it was not to be, i'm so happy with the way you made us take Val in to our hearts, from her place of being the "other woman" we grew to love her and route for them as a couple! thank you so much, it was so entertaining! xoxoxox
Date: Oct 24, 2011 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 42
BOD
Thank you for sharing your story with us. I will miss reading about Mike and Val
I love your message to Michael:)
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 42
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :'(
I hope you will write more stories!!!!
Date: Oct 24, 2011 11:23 am Title: Chapter 42
Love this so much sad to see it go
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 41
What happened to the picture here, did you delete it by mistake?
And what is wrong with you people these days? Do you read, but forget to leave a well deserved review? Or do you like those shitty stories with no plot, just five hundred words in the chapter, and where it’s usually written “we fu*ked, and I was moaning so loudly for five minutes, it was so great… and then I came, and fell asleep…the end”? Is that what you like?
You are AMAZING writer, and you didn’t lose your touch! In my opinion this story is getting better and better with each written chapter!!!
This is one of the most HOTEST chapters! You hear me guys? So come, and leave your reviews!!!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2011 11:10 am Title: Chapter 40
*dabs tears away* I can't believe it. They're married, together, and happy. The couple who used to only focus on working and fucking are happy, together a family and married. I'm so happy for all of them.
I can help but feel alittle heartbreak for Garcia. For some reason I kind of see Val as his Diana. Maybe one day he can love Pat just as much or find true love. He's a great man he had Val's back for the longest.
BOD I'm sorry for not commenting as much. Truth is since school started back I haven't been here as much. But this story remains one of the best here. And you havn't lost me!
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2011 10:57 am Title: Chapter 39
I'm so happy you ignored me pleading for Diana chapters and saving it for now. OH MY GOD!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!! Mike's past and future interlocked and rocking his world AT THE SAME FUCKING TIME!!!! And He asks for Marry and his true love..Val gives him the happiness he finally deserves. I cried and was horny at the same time. Goodness BOD lol this chapter was truth.com for me. How come I feel like you just spilled some good Diana and Mike tea. Lmao
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2011 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 40
So the ending is approaching soon? You better to come up with another plot, because all the good stories seem to end at the same time! What am I going to read? LOL I need Michael happy and in love at least in the fantasy world!!! Unless I’m going to write one of my own, which is not the greatest idea lol. … Though, I have to admit that lately different ideas come to my mind, and I just can’t get them out of my head :)
But you my dear are very talented in writing romantic and passionate stories, the last chapter just proves it for the million’s time!!! Keep writing girl!!! Love ya! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2011 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 40
that was the most beautiful thing i've ever read, so awesome! it made me wanna cry too and it wasn't even me getting married, lol! i'll be here to read the last of it when it happens, i'll miss it when its done, that was my wish for michael, i hope where he is now is exactly as you just described it, wrapped up in love!!!!
Date: Oct 10, 2011 05:28 am Title: Chapter 40
Beautiful, Beautiful chapter. I'm sad that another favorite story is coming to an end. Do you have any more stories in the works?
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2011 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 39
update now!!!!!!!!!!11
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2011 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oo weee...I might have to change panties arfter this chapter....
*sigh* I wish I got a chance to fuck him biggest regret in life :(
I think Val really fell in love with Mike was when his lupus flared. They were so hot, I might read some sugar daddy later on.
Yes, yes, yes tell us about Diana Michael! I think my ass has been asking about her since the first story. Yeah this chapter is everything...
Date: Oct 01, 2011 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 37
"Oh, gurl," "I wanna fuck you so badly" *faints* love it.
Author's Response:
thank you so much joy for catching up with the story and leaving me your comments! i love them all... and i feared you'd stopped reading! l.o.v.e. & big mj hug! BOD xoxoxo
Date: Oct 01, 2011 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 36
I read the whole thing with my mouth open in shock, pain and elation for hem. wow intense. wonderful.