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Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2015 09:06 am Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

Woa thank you for your story. I like it very much. It's so romantic and beautiful. Their love is true and forever.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!!! They were meant to be even across time!! <333

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 06:22 pm Title: The Neteru

You have an incredible way with words. I am absolutely in love with the dialogue here. Everything is so visual, like a real fantasy come to life. I have to admit, I'm really enjoying this bold Michael you've created. He makes me blush. My favorite part was when he whispered to her, "I know your secret". LOL So daring and a huge turn on. It made me wish I was her. Well done here.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this. I appreciate it. I love the assertive Michael too. Lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. <333

Reviewer: Pleione Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2015 12:11 am Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

 

Holy cow! This story was A-Mazing! Remember the Time was my favorite music video so this definitely sung to my heart. SIGH! A+ would read again. ♥♥



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much!! I appreciate it! Remember The Time holds a special place in my heart.  I'm a huge Egyptology buff so the storyline spoke to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it! <333

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2014 07:37 pm Title: The Neteru

I finally caught up on the story and absolutely adored it, this was amazing you really did your thing. I'm a big fan of your works and they all are amazing just like this, the ending made me so happy for the both of them and to hear how they were reborn into this time was incredible.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much hun. I appreciate you reading my stories!! I had to give them a happy ending so I figured the best way was to have them meet again in another life. <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2014 11:34 am Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

First of all,

 

You just can't do this to me when I'm already an emotional wreck. I actually cried. It was just so beautifully written. I'm just so happy they're finally able to be together. And the baby! My mind is a mess right now and I swear I can't even give a proper review. There's just so much, ugh.

Point is, though, I'll be reading this more than once and I'm sure i'll leave reviews then too

I'm adding it to my favorites.

I love love love love love you!

Random, but whenever you meesage me these alerts i be like

 

I'm not even being dramatic. That's exactly how I act.

I said all this to say that this story is exactly what it should be. I love it when I'm left wanting more and wondering where the rest of the characters are going. I love it.

 

Thanks for this great source of inspiration.



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure you now my admiration for you already. Every time you say well done. I'm like super grateful.  Your GIFs light up my life BEW and you know it!!!!! Thank you to you too for the full on support you always show. I appreciate you!! <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2014 08:28 am Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

I was all like Nooooo!!!!! and then oh? and then YES!!!!!! A happy ending!! Them meeting again in another time had me gushing so bad! It was so sweet!

Very well written. I loved this short story! Hell, I love all your stories!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much BB in pretty sure you know the affection I have for your stories as well. I.Love.Them!!! I thought I would throw in a twist for the end and I'm glad you guys liked it. That's exactly what I wanted you to feel...Nooooo then Huh? Then Yayyyyyyyy. I love a happy ending. Thank you for reading hun. I truly appreciate the support you always show me from my first time here till now!!! <333

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2014 02:02 am Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

Why doesn't this story have more reviews is confusing to me. I cannot believe the perfection held throughout your story. I applaud you for creating something so beautiful and enjoyable to read. I have always enjoyed Akhenaten's story, I'm actually planning to go visit his tomb as well as King Tut's tomb :) anyway, I'm not gonna lie.. I cried during the reincarnation part 😭😭 I got the feels! Especially because Whitney Houston's Saving All My Love For You song came on. Though people said that song was dedicated to Jermaine and the affair they had when he was married to Hazel Gordy, it was such a perfect fit for the time Michael and Kiya met once again. Seriously, THANK YOU for creating this story it was magical and beautiful--



Author's Response:

First of all I have to let you know how touched I am by your review. Thank you so much. I put my all into my writing and when the reader gets it, it's an awesome fulfilling feeling. To be able to pull conjure emotions enough to bring tears to your eyes I feel I accomplished what I set out to do transporting you from Egypt into the present. It was a journey for me laying down the words and in happy you where able to come along. Saving All My Love is a beautiful song and you can tell the emotions Whitney put behind the lyrics. It was fitting for the whole chapter!! Thank you again so much. And I have two other stories here as well if you ever want to take a look at them. I try to switch up my style a bit so all stories carry different energies!! <333

Reviewer: JMcKellar Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2014 10:20 pm Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

I literally read the first two chapters a day or two ago & wondered if you would ever update the last chapter. and you did! it's like you just took us to another lifetime. It was very different; very beautiful. especially that michael & kiya came full circle in the end. I just love your stories; you capture their thoughts & emotions so well 😭😭😭



Author's Response:

Yeah it took me a while to come up with a fitting ending. I didn't want it to be predictable at all. I'm always happy when I accomplish pulling the reader into my stories.  It's a great feeling to know you get what I'm trying to do. Thank you so much. I'm updating Cradle To The Grave tomorrow just giving you a heads up 😁 <333

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2014 09:31 pm Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

I had a feeling you'd go the reincarnation route! Excellent job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. With the tregectory of he story and the nature of it reincarnation seemed the best fit. I'm glad I went through with it. I thought long and hard on it. I really appreciate you reading!!<333 

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2014 08:08 pm Title: Lost And Found Across Time And Space

So excited for the next update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading this story too hun. Unfortunately this was only a three parter so this is the last chapter. I am updating Cradle To The Grave tomorrow tho. I hope that makes up for it a little. <333

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2014 08:08 pm Title: The News

Loved it! :)

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Date: Dec 19, 2014 08:07 pm Title: The Neteru

Great!

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2014 12:32 pm Title: The News

She's pregnant omg *cries*

One more til the end? Why do you do me this way? I love you and you shouldn't do me like this. I got you flowers and pancakes. I'm hurt.

You hurt me again :(

 



Author's Response:

Yasssssss she is pregnant.  It's about to be drama. :( You know I love the flowers and the pancakes bew!!!! I wrote this a Looooooooooongggggggggg ass time ago as a one shot but I decided to extend it a little so that's why its so short.  Forgiven? <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2014 11:33 am Title: The Neteru

Okay, first off!

 

When bread and butter isn't my bread and butter, this is. I've been obsessed with Egyptian history since I was little. This is an awesome story. It's just so perfectly illustrated and you're definitely taking us somewhere with it. I'm glad you decided to post this one too.

The scenes are so beautiful. You can just feel what they're feeling and just ugh! I love you so much for this. Sincerely, PSA for everyone else, Tut is riding that main crush cloud of mine. Pray for my heart.

I have to upgrade you to being my other wife. I HAVE to.

 

That's all I gotta say for now. But let's move on 

 



Author's Response:

Hops in the car.  Where we goin?!!?!  LMAOOOOOO gurl you are a trip! As you can tell from my name I'm very much into Egyptology.  *Lemme Lemme upgrade ya 'Yonce voice!!

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2014 08:07 pm Title: The News

She's with child!! Oh my goodness they have to get out of there!! Fast! I still have a bad feeling about the ending... is it going to be a happy ending!? I gotta know!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for the compliments on the writing!!! Theri situation is so tricky because they the Pharoah's reach is so far where could they run you know?  I have my lips zipped about the ending.  I'ts coming soon I promise!! <333

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