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Date: Feb 24, 2020 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story

The king is about to meet his prince and itll be something

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton

Her son has the health condition of his father, def the genes and now that she has to tell michael

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Sudden Change in Direction

Their stubbornness and Michaels zealous jealousy would both get them into trouble.

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Love, Lingering & Legalities

Ah she is making a huge mistake w the merging

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 03:58 am Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light

OH the secret is out

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 03:10 am Title: Chapter 4: Curiousity, Cover Ups & Cleverness

Mysterious and why the secret?

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Date: Feb 24, 2020 02:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Nearer to Disclosure

Theyre both finally pregnant!!! As the good news. Michaels joy in this chapter was truly felt.

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Date: Feb 23, 2020 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tainted Discovery

I never thought it would be Mac as the guest! That is a surprise😂

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 08:34 am Title: Chapter 28: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part III

Loved tgis entire story 

Lol at Diana not saying 'I do' til Michael said she's beautiful got me thinking for a moment shed say no 

Happy for Jasmine finally being pregnant 

Will miss them they were one of my favorites here 

The guest book is beautiful

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Haha, yes that was her being bratty!

YES, she is expecting again! That was a surprise!

Aww, they will miss you too! But don't worry, they will be back one more time! ;)

I'm glad you liked the book - it took me forever to create it but it was worth it!

THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING! :)

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 06:34 am Title: Chapter 28: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part III

wow such a lengthy chapter..

here I was expecting something to happen to keep Mike and Diana from having the wedding ceremony and it happening after all is a great surprise! Mac could be such a card, haha. all in all that was a beautiful wedding and a great fic. Can't wait to see more from your other fic!

XO



Author's Response:

HAHA, YES IT WAS!

It took about 3 weeks to bring it all to life - but I think it was worth it.

My readers begged me to be as descriptive as possible about everything since they waited 5 years to see this wedding happen. I couldn't let them down!

Plus with the addition of photos, it makes it even longer. But I hope you still enjoyed it.

I'm glad you were surprised. I wanted to make it seem like it may or may not happen. ;)

Mac is hilarious, haha. I enjoyed writing about him.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I look forward to hearing from you again when my other fics are completed.

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 01:40 am Title: Chapter 28: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part III

Awwwwwww **sniff sniff ** this was a truly unique story **sniff sniff ** and I was cute 😂😂😂 lol its a beautiful writing and I can't wait for more from u 😂😂😂👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I hope you enjoyed being in it.

I look forward to hearing from you again soon when my other fics are posted.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2015 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 28: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part III

beautiful story it was truly an amazing story keep up your amazing writing cause i look forward to reading other beautiful stories from you 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Please be sure to check out the guest book. :)

I'll be working on my other story It Happened One Night this Wednesday. The next chapter should be posted by this weekend or sooner!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 27: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part II

truly beautiful chapter i look forward to reading another great chapter i nearly broke down when marie revealed herself to michael i cant wait to read the next beautiful chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, sweetie!

As always, I LOVE hearing from you.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Theres's only one left! I hope I can put a smile (and maybe few tears) on your face! :)

I look forward to hearing from you again.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 10:26 am Title: Chapter 27: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part II

Awww I am so cuteee lol😹😹😹😹 mj look gud lolll I didn't cry yet thank gudness but I almost did lolll man this done got me cheesing so hard frfr one more one more!!!!

Good Update!!!👏👏👏👏😂



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it sweetie. I was glad to put you into the story.

Warning: The last chapter WILL make your cry! :D

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 12:52 am Title: Chapter 27: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part II

The guardian Angel part was so beautiful

Glad Joseph cane around,  but still im not trusting him very much 

I hope they're both say the famous I do and be a happily married couple 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I was afraid people would think that part was dumb or fake. I'm glad to know I was wrong.

Yes, he changed his mind and came to the wedding. More about him will be revealed in the next chapter.

Aww, I hope so too! Let's hope for the best!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)

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