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Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2015 09:00 pm Title: Changes

I wander what's going on with home girl. It's either drugs or her man is forcing her to turn tricks or some destructive combination of both adding in him abusing her. Either way it would be sad even though she started out as a bitch. 

Let me find out Michael named his daughter after Lauren. lol. Interesting. 

More soon <333

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2015 06:46 am Title: Damn Kourtney

First of all...YAYYYYYYYYY welcome back.  I love this story. 

Second Booooooooo what kind of mess Kourt got herself into where she don't even remember how she got where she is. What kind of irresponsible shit is she up to. SMDH!!!

If she make Michael miss his pool date I'm causing a riot in your review box!! Lmaoooo. 

Glad you're back and inspired. More soon <333

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:10 pm Title: Past.. Indulgence's

Liyah is adorable!!!! I wonder who the douche is that lost his chance with Lauren?  Great chapter!!

More soon <333

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 11:59 am Title: Past.. Indulgence's

I really like this one. Can't wait to see how it goes!

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Date: Jan 24, 2015 11:39 am Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

I was surprised! Good job!

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Date: Jan 24, 2015 11:34 am Title: Small World

Interisting. This could be interesting. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 12:33 pm Title: Let's Catch Up

That little girl that played in that movie old as shit now!! Damn 😂😂😂😂 but awwwwwww she's cuuute! But ahhhh best friends together again! "I see you fate"

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 12:24 pm Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

Awwwww he has a daughter?!!! A baby girl??? Cries!! That's cute though. I wonder what lala would think of it 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 11:57 am Title: Small World

YAAAAAY IMMA read this! Michael is a trip! Lmaoo the voice and eyes always get em 

Reviewer: Roadrunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 10:47 am Title: Let's Catch Up

This is going good so far! You got me hooked on this, and I didn't mind the way it ended, that was actually kinda cute lol. Update soon please!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 03:37 am Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

I thought Aaliyah was a girlfriend so I was surprised.  Good chapter. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 02:56 pm Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

Wow!!! Wouldn't have though Michael would have a daughter. That was surprising to me. 

Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 02:37 pm Title: Small World

I thought Aaliyah was his girlfriend!! lol I like this story, keep it coming :) 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 08:02 am Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

I had no idea Aaliyah was his daughter. That whole time he was sizing up Lauren I thought he was a player. Lmaoooooo. Anyway Liya is ADORABLE!!! Just from how you write her. I hope at some point he gets to remedy her living situation without too much trauma to her but at the sound of Kourtney's attitude I doubt that. Also can't wait to delve into LaLa and Micahel rekindling their friendship. Chapter 2 was great!!

more soon! <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 07:07 am Title: Guilty Conscious...Baby Girl

Yeah I was totally surprised but happy at the same time. Kourtney sounds like a real winner.... I hope Michael eventually gets full custody of his little girl. 

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