Date: Nov 10, 2015 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ya like i just did! Did u just follow me? I messaged u too? Well theyre idiots mpls is her second home. Yass she slayys on this new albumXD
Author's Response:
I'm following you now gurl and yeah I got ur message! I'm in looove with her new album! Can't stop listening to it! Pretty much every track is my jam lol I'm also finding myself listening to 'Rhythm Nation 1814' a little more now as well...never realized how great this album was when I was younger haha it still is very relevant to what's going on in our world especially now
Date: Nov 10, 2015 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
YES i am from there! Its not worth seeing trust me lol. Thats where her guys r based here so thats where she went. Nah it was just nov 1st of this year. I tweeted u i think. Yes she is fucking gorgeous for real i was mindblown. I have a huge girl crush on her now
Author's Response:
That's still soooo cool though! I remember on Twitter ppl were like "why is janet sayin Minneapolis is her hometown...she ain't even from there?!" Haha I'm super excited for the show!!! And wait you tweeted me before?? Lol I hope I follow you girl! And ugh ikr?! The girl crush I have on that woman is REAL haha she doesn't age!!! I'm seriously in love with whoever does her makeup and hair lol Do you like her new album so far?
Date: Nov 10, 2015 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
I LOVE this!!! Lovvvve how she turned him on then threw him in the pool! Shes badass😎. Then his mummy catches them hahaha she probably ripped his ass apart😂😂😂. Wtf is he doing leaving autumn soaking wet & crying for janet to take care of him? Dude ur mummy is not more important at the moment. Get w/ the program bro! Janet tho yassssss she gives good advice. Btw i saw her perform. Holy fuck. She is AMA-ZING!! Shes fucking gorgeous! Looks like shes 25. AND looks and acts just like MICHAEL😱 They have the same gorgeouss eyes!! I swear she looked at me and smiled LIKE HIM!! You know that prayer thing he did with his hands when he was embarassed? She does it too! And the crotch grab but in her own sexy ass way!! She has such a gorgeous and angelic voice too! And is so high energy! She lovves to dance! Ya and since she thinks of where im from as her home as she recorded all her albums here so the mayor names that day she came into town, janet Jackson day! And she was sooo grateful and humble just like michael and thanked us forher success! Terry lewis & jimmy jam
came out on stage too. I had to post all this on Twitter. Its like looking at his twin😍. Loved how when he said im gonna go get the kids terell and janet run in 😜😂. I knew katherine would love her! Haha of course he would think it was a funny story how they met😂. Grace stfu. Attention whore😒. Lovved how Autumn responded. Did that cunt just admit to eavesdropping autumn & mj having sex! Wow.... I agree with the Kat, grace needs 2 leave like fucking now and maybe get eaten by a shark on her way out. I lovve how he tries to make her forget about her being made at him, just shut her up with a mindblowing, pussy soaked kiss. Gotta admit he is awfully good 😏. Paris actually said in court that, he felt so bad for grace even though she showed up in his bed that hed send her on errands to india and as far away as possible. 😂 But didnt have the heart to fire her. Anyway i really really lovve this story!!
Author's Response:
Lawd wait a minute...hold up...YOU SAW JANET PERFORM AND YOU'RE FROM MINNEAPOLIS?!!!! I didn't know that!!!! Gurl I know you must've gotten your entire LIFE at that concert!!! Ugh I can't wait to see her slay feb 19th when she comes to Bethlehem it seems so far away!!! :( but believe me when I say I'm countin down the days haha and ikr?! Honestly feel like her and Michael should've been born twins. It's kinda scary how alike they are, especially when it comes to stage presence! Love the relationship she has with Jimmy and Terry it reminds me of Michael and Quincy in a way :) The music they make is BEAUTIFUL!!! It's official! Nov 1st is now Janet Jackson day!!! Yasss!!! That's so freaking cool haha One of these days I'm gonna visit Minneapolis (still can't believe you live there) especially on November 1st haha I swear, I have such a girl crush on Janet Jackson it's ridiculous haha I know she's gotta be a thousand times more beautiful in person!!! Lawd ima prob cry and pass tf out when I see her in concert! Now back to the story lol it seems like Terrell and Janet are always at the ranch so I thought it'd be funny to have them pretend to be Michael's 'kids' when he said that lol and I agree! Michael should've been more worried about his girl rather than his mother at that moment. It was almost like Janet had to step in and take his role, reassuring Autumn that mama Katherine wasn't gonna hate her ass haha She definitely does give good advice! It's cute how close her and Autumn are! I think it's safe to say Katherine warmed up to her completely! As for Grace...smh girl she really is an attention whore and CRAZY AS HELL rofl Autumn handled her ass with so much class tho during that dinner :) Grace did pretty much admit lowkey that she be listening on Michael and Autumn's sexcapades....like girl whaa?? That's just creepy af Loved how Terrell and Janet responded with their mumbles, continuing to eat their food haha. Mama's definitely know best! Katherine knows that Grace ain't no good yet Michael continues to keep her ass around smh Just like in real life, he doesn't have the heart to fire her lol Btw what's ur twitter?? I'm on Twitter too girl!!! Who knows we might already be following each other and just not know it :O rofl
Date: Nov 03, 2015 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
Grace was really jealous of Autumn. Maybe she is in love with Michael. She will only continue to try to cause trouble for or between Michael and Autumn.
Author's Response:
Hmmmm I think you might be right about that ;) lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2015 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks love <333
Date: Nov 03, 2015 10:25 am Title: Chapter 16
I don't think that they should have to explain anything. They are grown. Doing what grown people do at their own home.
Date: Nov 03, 2015 09:49 am Title: Chapter 15
I like the way you write. You did a very good job of letting Michael tell his story. And the way that it affected his life.
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much Kay!!! I hope I'm improving lol but seriously that means a lot :)
Date: Nov 03, 2015 09:35 am Title: Chapter 14
You did a good job!
Date: Nov 02, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
I think that she will be overly excited.
Date: Nov 02, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Good job! Keep up the good work. Slow and steady wins the race.
Date: Nov 02, 2015 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
SShe realized that she had feelings for him. And, Chris had lied to her about a family emergency , unless the woman was his wife. But, Autumn realized that he was not going to spend her birthday with her and he lied to her so easily. She started thinking maybe her whole relationship with Chris was a lie. Besides now she knew that they both felt the same way about each other.Neither she, nor Chris had deep feelings for one another. She found that her and Michael had feelings for each other.
Author's Response:
Yep! I guess it's safe to say in a lot of ways Chris was sort of a 'distraction' for Autumn. The feelings she had for him weren't that serious, especially compared to Michael. Michael definitely has her heart now :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2015 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
Grace so needs t get fired. She disrespected Autumn and in front of Michaels mother.
Author's Response:
Preaaach!!! Grace should've been got fired! But there's actually a reason why she continues to stay around....I won't say what it is tho ;) lol
Date: Nov 01, 2015 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Very good! Good descriptive writing.
Date: Nov 01, 2015 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Maybe chris is really Mike's friend. Is Mike sending a limo to pick Autumn up for her birthday?
Date: Nov 01, 2015 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
He asked Nadia if Autumn was all right. He also told Nadia not to tell Autumn that he asked about her.