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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2015 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2015 10:57 am Title: Chapter 4

Omgomgomgomg I love it!!! Keep going!!

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

WOW, Michael is so...mean in this chapter, lol.

I can't wait to read more!

 

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this so far! It's well written and interesting!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much <3

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 11:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Omgomg omg! Michael ,u idiot!! Arrghhhh! Great chapter! Keep going!

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 01:24 am Title: Chapter 2

Omg thanks for updating! This is gonna be one of those stories where I wanns punch Michael Hahahaha! I love em! Keep going!

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

wow that was so harsh of Michael, he have to really make it back up to Evangeline for forgivness  

Reviewer: Michaelslovelymistress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa Michael really blew his stop at Evan. I think he's just using his anger to cover his feelings because he still loves her. Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

First, I'd like to say I ADORE your writing style! You've only written two chapters so far and I am already hooked to this story like a fish on a rod. WONDERFUL JOB SO FAR!

Secondly, I believe Evan when she said she told Joseph to tell Michael. However, I don't think Joseph cared enough to relay the message to his son. Therefore, Michael's anger is justified.

I can't wait to read more! Thank you for a great story so far! :D



Author's Response:

Awe thanks so much! (:

Reviewer: Michaelslovelymistress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg it's so good! Please continue! I love how you write! 

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omgomgomgomgomg!!! I love it! You betta keep going girl! I love the flashback!



Author's Response:

thanks so much (: there will be plenty more flashbacks throughout the first several chapters to help you undertand evangeline and michaels past relationshp more

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS!

You are my kind of writer!

Please continue!



Author's Response:

Awe thanks so much (: the next part will be up tomorrow!

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