Date: Oct 14, 2015 12:24 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
No problem at all. I love reviews and criticism so I'm trying to offer that more
Date: Aug 29, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Family Drama/ 3 more days of summer/ My future husband
Perfect
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Aug 29, 2015 09:36 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
Oh wow this is great! I love this so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: Aug 06, 2015 10:27 pm Title: Means to an end/ Follow your heart interlude.
Wow!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm wondering if she made the wrong choice.
Date: Aug 06, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Tell me/ Mind warping silence pt 2
The truth comes out. You say things when you are drunk (truth) that you wouldn't say sober.
Author's Response:
I know, you let everything out lol
Date: Aug 06, 2015 09:55 pm Title: Tell me/ Mind warping silence PT1
They have to talk.
Author's Response:
They really do
Date: Aug 06, 2015 09:43 pm Title: Old Baes/ Meet My Lips!
Just take your time and let the ideas and words flow.Listen to various types of music to give you inspiration for writing your stories.. Or go to your favorite park and watch people.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I needed that!!
Date: Aug 06, 2015 02:38 am Title: Party preview/ Show me your moves!
Nice party!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: Aug 06, 2015 02:31 am Title: Feelin's/ Da Place Ta Be!
Good job!
Date: Aug 06, 2015 01:59 am Title: KFC?/ The Disrespect
I hope that The doesn't get too stressed out about her dad or she won't be able to function.
Author's Response:
Right
Date: Aug 06, 2015 01:43 am Title: You squad now/Spaghetti on da fit!
Wow. Awful! What a way to start the first day, splattered with food!
Date: Aug 05, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Not a Chapter!
Great job.
Author's Response:
I had run out of ideas and wanted to see if my readers wanted to chime in.
Date: Aug 05, 2015 08:19 pm Title: Family Altercation pt. 2/ Going in!
Great first day at school.
Author's Response:
Thanks, very unlikely though lol. And Mark and Yoni can't get enough of each other lol. Somebody need to put the fire out!
Date: Aug 05, 2015 08:05 pm Title: Meet the family/ Family Altercation part 1
I enjoyed reading this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it lol
Date: Aug 05, 2015 07:55 pm Title: Stake out/ Ones I like
She had to make sure that what she heard was true.
Author's Response:
Yes she did and she dragged Michael right with her lol