Date: Sep 05, 2015 01:48 am Title: Chapter 12
She will fight her way out of their like the badass she is. Thank you for updating! I love this story! He should fight for her.
Date: Aug 14, 2015 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
It's getting very interesting :)
Keep up the good work !
Date: Aug 09, 2015 07:55 am Title: Chapter 11
Just her luck to be kidnapped and to be the wrong girl taken and this biggie character needs to get a hold of himself , cocky ass smh she just can't get a break
Date: Aug 09, 2015 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: Aug 05, 2015 11:22 am Title: Chapter 10
Nice chap', can't wait for the next one :)
Date: Aug 01, 2015 10:08 am Title: Chapter 10
- Wtf who took my baby lOl and why did they take her ????!!! Omgoodness just when she wants to start a new life this happens
Date: Jul 26, 2015 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really like your story, the kiss scene was just so cute *w*
Continue ! <3
Date: Jul 25, 2015 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really cool fiction !
Just found it and I love it !
Keep up the good work mate ! ;D
Date: Jul 25, 2015 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved how u described what she thought of his kissing, her inner conflict etc. glad hes coming around:)
Date: Jul 24, 2015 07:54 am Title: Chapter 8
- oh shit , it's getting interesting
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 10:03 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow... very neat, as well as very well-written, too. I like it, especially this part:
I simply sat on the ground and stared at Lucy like an idiot, trying to examine her features. Large, bright and hazel eyes, protected by long, curly eyelashes. Light, caramel, soft looking skin. Playful blonde curls, as vivid as sunbeams. Perfectly endowed, full lips. Even after being slapped and abused so many times, these features couldn't be hidden. I got to admit, she looks pretty without all that make-up. She looks so... Beautiful... But I don't regret beating Lucy. She was worth it... I sighed. Nevermind. Her limp body was still laying down. She was still covered in bruises and cuts. Did I really do this? Why was I feeling a bit guilty now?
I hope that Michael will see sense and realize that he messed up bigtime, and that Lucy will find it in her heart to forgive him, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Date: Jul 10, 2015 09:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Whoa. That was insane. Yea not doing much better there dude, he only cares now because she doesn't 'look' like a whore to him, and she's pretty.
Date: Jul 10, 2015 07:31 am Title: Chapter 6
He's sprung 100% he knows there's more to her
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2015 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
THIS IS SO GOOD!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2015 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow... I hope that Lucy will be OK, and that Michael will be able to snap out of his mindset and see her for the beautiful soul she is (and, of course, think of a way to help his friend Chris), too.
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing... :)