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Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 01:59 pm Title: Chapter Seven

wow, I really hope you continue the story because it is so good! please 🙏

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Five

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Four

Jesus Christ, I really like Michael's attitude, many forget that he sometimes had a cold side, an intelligent businessman, although always at the hand of his inner child aww

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Two

I like it!

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 12:55 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh I love this!

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Date: Jun 19, 2019 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I wished you could finish this. I got pulled into the story, only to be disappointed that it isn't finished. I want to know if Michael and Prince become friends, or maybe lovers

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2019 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Please, Please, Please! Do more!!

Reviewer: InvisibleBookReader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2018 05:14 am Title: Chapter Seven

Love this so much

Reviewer: LS15 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2018 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Seven

i wish u update sooooon! its a good start for a story

Reviewer: Everlast Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Seven

This is interesting.  Honestly, I'm not sure what the real motivations here are.  So we will have to see.  It feels like there is something there though... Somewhere, under teh surface. <3

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Five

Prince is so annoyed.  lol  I like this.  Keep going.

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Date: Feb 17, 2018 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Three

"Here's how it is," Michael started, "the media puts us as pure emenies."



Something they wouldn't be wrong about, Prince thought with an eyeroll.

 

LOL!

 

This sounds complicated.  To be honest... I think MJ knows that the line about 'the press will leave us alone' is nonsense. Which makes me think he has a crush on Prince maybe??  

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 09:39 pm Title: Chapter One

I kind of want to eat this story: mahogany, butterscotch, Index finger. I like the way you use words.

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