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Reviewer: Lamaishere Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2024 04:26 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow This was a wild ride & I loved every second of it. Thank you & your brain for coming up with such wonderfully brilliant story

Reviewer: Lamaishere Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2024 04:11 am Title: Chapter 5

Im so evil I can’t help but feel like I want more scenes of Michael and evander together lol

Reviewer: Lamaishere Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2024 02:19 am Title: Chapter 2

Im only on chapter 2 and im obsessed with this already ????

Reviewer: leyley298 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2023 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey there! I just started reading and I'm hooked already. I really like your writing style, very intriguing. Onto the next Chapter I go ????

Reviewer: Strawberry01 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2021 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1

This looks good, can't wait for more

Reviewer: ctrlher Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2021 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very descriptive! looking forward to reading💗

Reviewer: Charlotte Lily Taylor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2021 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

The story is excellent!The plots dragged me into your wonderful imagination.So perfect!

Reviewer: Felicia11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2021 06:31 pm Title: Epilogue

Excellent story, very good, its plot and the mystery, although I suffered a little for Michael but it was an incredible story that you wrote continues like this

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feedback! I am glad that you enjoyed this story!

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2021 07:28 am Title: Chapter 12

Lost in this story....Such a beautiful emotional moment.After all these sad traumas which probably lead to a sad ending ,finally Kane recognized what is the most important thing.Totally beyond himself maybe though he was never a selfish man. My heart clenched from time to time until I cried with happy tears reading these lines. I always love this psychological description which could give a deep satisfaction for the moods’ needing . Much love.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2021 04:17 am Title: Chapter 15

No.... it’s really sad ...What if thee brother hadn’t attacked Kane?Would he leave Michael or when would he made up his mind ?Just wander... I really don’t want this story to end here ...in this way . Oh god I lost in your story thank you so much for all the emotions you brought.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2021 01:14 am Title: Chapter 14

No....you need to calm down and you need a plan Kane... I feel so sad

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2021 12:43 am Title: Chapter 13

A betrayer .Now Kane had no more reason to trust anything.Meanwhile he would not be afraid of anything.Just live for Michael.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 11:19 am Title: Chapter 12

Oh my gosh... I am crying.....just love love love this chapter

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 09:25 am Title: Chapter 11

You are an amazing talented writer .

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 08:18 am Title: Chapter 9

Such a great story .... I love it so much

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