[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2019 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this story just got a lot more intense. I feel really bad for Michael and I want to see how (or if) he'll get out of this one.
Author's Response:
;) hopefully this story manages to keep you intrigued, I really hope you will give this a chance and complete this story :) thanks for commenting 😘
Date: Jul 21, 2019 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hold up, hold up, hold up, hold up, hold UP! NOBODY told me that Smoke was finished?? Okay, I have to find out where I left off ASAP. Can't wait to dive into these juicy chapters. I think I'll start Monday night and continue from there. Very excited.
Author's Response:
Yes it’s compleeetee finally :) I really hope you like how it ends 💕
Date: Jul 21, 2019 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG nevermind! It's just a new cover--I panicked too quickly. Carry on :)
Date: Jul 21, 2019 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Ms. Apricot. Ummmmmmmm....ahem....WHERE is "Smoke"?(nervous laughter). Sorry to use a comment box for another story, but I can't find Smoke on your stories page and I'm freaking out because I was going to catch up on it!
Author's Response:
😂 you are so funny, welcome back to the story I am glad you found it again! x
Date: Jul 17, 2019 08:05 pm Title: Epilogue
I really, really enjoyed this story. You’ve kept me on my toes since chapter one till the end. The plot was unlike anything I’ve ever read and was refreshing to read something new. Excellent job and I hope you’ll keep making more amazing stories:)))
Author's Response:
I am happy to hear that Saiii! And of course i will continue writing more stories, it's so much fun!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 01:13 pm Title: Epilogue
Thank you. The ending is perfect, I got goosebumps while reading it. You've decribed that ultimate kind of love, everyone is secretly yearning for. The whole story is so so beautiful. Bravo! P.S. I believe Kane is my ideal man haha. I also love your Michael, you perfectly captured both his fragility and strenght.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, im very happy that you enjoyed it and i'm glad to hear Kane is your ideal guy ;) ha! I loved writing him and Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 07:37 am Title: Chapter 15
What a rollercoaster of a chapter, I didn’t know which way the story was going to go. I was on edge the whole time. I’m so glad in the end, Kane pulled through. He is one tough mofo! Aww but so sad he had to leave :’( I look forward to the epilogue. You did an amazing job with this. One of the most well written stories I have read on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Eva and for your kind words and your support throughout these updates! I very much appreciate it! & I am happy you liked it xxxx
Date: Jul 15, 2019 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was so bittersweet, but such a beautifully written story. Honestly I enjoyed every chapter and I look forward to reading the epilogue soon:,))
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for keeping up with these story updates I am very happy that you enjoyed it Saiii! xxxxx
Date: Jul 15, 2019 04:47 am Title: Chapter 14
I hope you have a chance to update this story soon. <3
Author's Response:
Hey Eva! How does today sound for an update? lol :) I updated! Thank you for caring about this story <3
Date: Jul 01, 2019 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
Waiting is gonna be hard! Lol
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long but the next chapter is finally up xx
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2019 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
It’s about to go down, I have no idea what’s going to happen. I’ll be anxiously awaiting the next update!
Date: Jun 29, 2019 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope Kane goes John Wick on their ass!
Author's Response:
Loool!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2019 11:35 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow I didn’t see that coming. Neil working for Evander?? Holy $&@t! Michael and Kane really are on their own, aren’t they. Goodness, waiting for the next update!
Date: Jun 27, 2019 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh nooooo Evander found him!!! I can only hope Kane can find him in time:((
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2019 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow! This is one of the most fascinating fanfictions I've ever read. Your deep understanding of human emotions and great attention to detail make the story unbelievably realistic. I just could't stop reading it! Thank you so much, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Strega, your positive comments mean the world to me! Hoping to post the next part later today x