Date: Jun 23, 2019 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh!! Michael got hit! It can't be from somebody good. Thanks for the update: I'm literally so behind XD life caught up w/me. How is the writing going, Ms. Apricot?
Hey! I wandered what happened to you :) Glad to see you back on the site, the writing is going great! I'm patiently awaiting your next creative piece of fiction btw x
Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
I’m glad Kane finally told Michael his true feelings! But gosh darn it Kane. Going back there for Evander is too risky, a lot can go wrong. I wonder what will happen...and I’m curious if we’ll eventually see Scalisi in the picture at some point...so many questions!
I know, just like Kane unable to resist deadly action smh. So many questions, just lay back and watch the story unfold :)
Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Awww I know Kane means well by killing Evander, but Michael doesnâ€™t necessarily agree at all. AND YESSS HE FINALLY ADMITTED IT!!!!:))
Yes he just couldn't resist showing michael some lurve in the end :)
Date: Jun 15, 2019 10:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Im checking often for any updates, you’ve got me on pins and needles with this story :)
Yes sorry about that, I have been doing the most not updating this story lol. Next chapter is here though! xxx
Date: Jun 02, 2019 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Iâ€™m looking forward to seeing how things are gonna play out since Evander knows about everything, and poor Mikey:(((
I know, don't worry all will be revealed, thank you very much for your support on this story <3
Date: Jun 01, 2019 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
So much happens here, omg Evander is such an evil man. I just love your writing as I’ve said already it reads like a novel or a movie. Sooo good! I’m always excited when I’ve seen you’ve updated this story. Michael is meeting Scalisi?? Can’t wait till you update again!
Thank you so much :)
Date: May 25, 2019 08:32 am Title: Chapter 10
You’ve got me going crazy leaving us with a cliffhanger like that! I must know what happens next, please please update soon!
ðŸ˜ I uploaded eVa! Thank you for your continued support on this story ♥ï¸
Date: May 24, 2019 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
DAMMNNN MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!! I hope you update soon, things look like theyâ€™re getting serious!!
Hehe yes I just had to leave you in the edge ðŸ˜ ðŸ‘€ yes things are mounting up, but never fear the next chapter is here xx
Date: May 17, 2019 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Another great update! Great that Kane was able to locate that tape, but maybe Evander made copies?? I’m really enjoying this story very much! Keep up the good work!
Date: May 16, 2019 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1
if you don’t mind, what’s your wattpad name? this story looks really good but i’m just on wattpad more these days lol
Sure, my username on there is: peacefulnarrative
Date: May 14, 2019 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
i really hope youll consider putting this story on Wattpad!!
Hey Susie, this story is already in wattpad however I find not that many readers on there have discovered it yet. I’ts tricky getting it in front of the MJ fans specifically.
Date: May 13, 2019 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Keep up the good work I live this book so much!!!!!!
Thank you so much, new chap coming soon x
Date: May 10, 2019 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
"The whole world knows it's a sin in the eyes of God to be that way."
Leviticus 18:22 : "You shall not lie with a male as one lies with a female, it is an abomination." (NASB)
I enjoyed the angst between Michael and Kane when he was about to leave Michael. Michael did realize that he gave his life away to too many controllers.
Thank you for your review & yes Michael really did :)
Date: May 09, 2019 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am absolutely smitten with this story. Please continue it.
Thank you for your review and for reading :) x
Date: May 08, 2019 05:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Omg such an amazing update. I just love this story, so many layers and intrigue. I hope Kane is able to make it back to Michael before anything bad happens. Can’t wait for the next update!
Thank you so much for reading eVa, your support is much appreciated and cherished!