Date: Jun 23, 2019 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh!! Michael got hit! It can't be from somebody good. Thanks for the update: I'm literally so behind XD life caught up w/me. How is the writing going, Ms. Apricot?
Author's Response:
Hey! I wandered what happened to you :) Glad to see you back on the site, the writing is going great! I'm patiently awaiting your next creative piece of fiction btw x
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
I’m glad Kane finally told Michael his true feelings! But gosh darn it Kane. Going back there for Evander is too risky, a lot can go wrong. I wonder what will happen...and I’m curious if we’ll eventually see Scalisi in the picture at some point...so many questions!
Author's Response:
I know, just like Kane unable to resist deadly action smh. So many questions, just lay back and watch the story unfold :)
Date: Jun 17, 2019 09:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Awww I know Kane means well by killing Evander, but Michael doesn’t necessarily agree at all. AND YESSS HE FINALLY ADMITTED IT!!!!:))
Author's Response:
Yes he just couldn't resist showing michael some lurve in the end :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2019 10:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Im checking often for any updates, you’ve got me on pins and needles with this story :)
Author's Response:
Yes sorry about that, I have been doing the most not updating this story lol. Next chapter is here though! xxx
Date: Jun 02, 2019 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
I’m looking forward to seeing how things are gonna play out since Evander knows about everything, and poor Mikey:(((
Author's Response:
I know, don't worry all will be revealed, thank you very much for your support on this story <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2019 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
So much happens here, omg Evander is such an evil man. I just love your writing as I’ve said already it reads like a novel or a movie. Sooo good! I’m always excited when I’ve seen you’ve updated this story. Michael is meeting Scalisi?? Can’t wait till you update again!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2019 08:32 am Title: Chapter 10
You’ve got me going crazy leaving us with a cliffhanger like that! I must know what happens next, please please update soon!
Author's Response:
😠I uploaded eVa! Thank you for your continued support on this story ♥ï¸
Date: May 24, 2019 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
DAMMNNN MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!! I hope you update soon, things look like they’re getting serious!!
Author's Response:
Hehe yes I just had to leave you in the edge 😠👀 yes things are mounting up, but never fear the next chapter is here xx
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2019 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Another great update! Great that Kane was able to locate that tape, but maybe Evander made copies?? I’m really enjoying this story very much! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2019 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1
if you don’t mind, what’s your wattpad name? this story looks really good but i’m just on wattpad more these days lol
Author's Response:
Sure, my username on there is: peacefulnarrative
Date: May 14, 2019 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
i really hope youll consider putting this story on Wattpad!!
Author's Response:
Hey Susie, this story is already in wattpad however I find not that many readers on there have discovered it yet. I’ts tricky getting it in front of the MJ fans specifically.
Date: May 13, 2019 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Keep up the good work I live this book so much!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, new chap coming soon x
Date: May 10, 2019 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
"The whole world knows it's a sin in the eyes of God to be that way."
Leviticus 18:22 : "You shall not lie with a male as one lies with a female, it is an abomination." (NASB)
I enjoyed the angst between Michael and Kane when he was about to leave Michael. Michael did realize that he gave his life away to too many controllers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review & yes Michael really did :)
Date: May 09, 2019 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am absolutely smitten with this story. Please continue it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and for reading :) x
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2019 05:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Omg such an amazing update. I just love this story, so many layers and intrigue. I hope Kane is able to make it back to Michael before anything bad happens. Can’t wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading eVa, your support is much appreciated and cherished!