[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2021 04:39 pm Title: The Hedonism II
I think they both love each other, I really hope these secrets don't ruin them 😩😩
I can't wait to see how the next chapter comes out! You're welcome my dear ðŸ™ðŸ¾â¤ï¸ðŸ”¥
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2021 05:13 am Title: Secret Service
PS, you're doing Jamaica great â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Awww thank you!!! â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2021 05:12 am Title: The Hedonism II
Ok first of all, why does that shady Jeremy person sound like "Wade" to me. Also, why is Michael having a pi follow Karima 👀😩👋🾠Michael what is going on with you? And what else are you hiding from Karima cuz I haven't forgotten that convo between you and TJ 😩 giving me heart failure. First of all, I couldn't go to hedonism so these girls are braver than me cuz I couldn't deal with naked people rubbing against me 😂😩😂ðŸ˜ðŸ˜‚🤣😠I think Karima really loves Michael. Also, how does this Jeremy guy know she has sex with older men.... I just know it's Wade ugh.
I love that this is a chapter I can relate to lol being Jamaican. It's really cool, never read a story about Michael based in Jamaica... when not based but has a chapter or two dedicated to my country. I don't like Karima's friends at all. Those women are toxic..... and only care about themselves and making it up the social ladder, really thinks she should leave the show and focus on her business and her relationship with Michael.
I cannot wait for the next update. Can't wait to see what the PI tells Michael .
Author's Response:
Yep that Jeremy dude sounds shady as hell. I am wondering what Michael is going through. Why doesnt he trust Karima? Yea and Michael is def hiding something of his own. I wonder what it is? I think Karima loves Michael as well. I am so happy you can relate to the chapter! I am happy to represent your country well. I dont like Karima's friends either. They are toxic and very self serving. I also think they may be jealous too. She is better off on her own and being with Michael. Thank you dear I always appreciate your comments. It lets me know at least someone likes my story and I should keep going! xoxoxo I also appreciate your understanding in my late update xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2021 05:29 pm Title: The Hedonism II
I am soooooo sooo glad you're back!!! I will reread to leave my comment on the chapter!! The funny thing about this is, I actually live in Jamaica 😂😂😂😂😂😂
glad you're back â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you soooo much that is super sweet of you! I am glad you are enjoying the story! I am happy to be back and will try my very best to update when I can and OMG wow that is soo cool you are from Jamaica!!!! I hope I am representing Jamaica the best as I could possibly. Its so beautiful there and the people there are lovely! I would love to go back some day! Thank you love! â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2021 09:13 am Title: Secret Service
Awwww I am so glad to hear that hun!! I hope you are safe and healthy ðŸ™ðŸ¾â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Thank you dear, glad your safe too!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2021 07:12 am Title: Its All About Me
I miss this story so much ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
I know!!!! I have been working on an update don't worry!!! Its been busy at the hospital!! Thank you for reading my story!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2021 02:26 pm Title: Secret Service
OMG!! I just know that everything will blow up in Kerima's face! I just feel like the other women are setting her up ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
Thanks dear! That is a good point. There does seem to be some undue influence the other girls have on Karima.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2020 10:23 am Title: Its All About Me
An update!!!!!! I been waiting for this!!!
Wades being sneaky af... as usual of course.
Author's Response:
Aint he? He is a sleaze and he always got something sneaky up his sleeve. He got a child and a fiance the whole time SMH
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2020 11:40 pm Title: Somethin' is Up
I don’t think she should go to the trip, those girls are up to something. She doesn’t need a stupid show to help her career, she’s a smart girl. I think Michael might genuinely be busy with the O2 tour but the whole money thing is still weird to me. AND WHY DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT WE WANT SPICE XD
Author's Response:
I agree, I am skeptical about their intentions as well. Karima seems very hard working and driven. She doesn't need the show and knows what she wants and gurlllll lol that was just a lil taste of spice this chapter but there is more to come don't worry ;) LOL
Date: Aug 12, 2020 06:21 pm Title: Secret Service
You know, I like this! This is really solid yeah. I enjoy that it feels realistic, that just because you have chemistry, doesn’t mean that everything is perfect immediately. Relationships take work and understanding and communication and I feel like a lot of authors have Michael and the lady fall immediately and then all the conflict is from outside sources. It feels like the story is driving the characters rather than the characters driving the story and I feel like you’ve hit a good balance of letting the characters have established personalities and lives and allowing them to fall into a situation and the events flow from that. This is all really to say that I’m enjoying this so thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much I really appreciate the compliments! :) I am so happy you are enjoying the story. Relationships definitly take time and can be very complex.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2020 10:14 pm Title: Having Second Thoughts
And for Maria.... I honestly don’t know, she confuses me
Author's Response:
She is a polarizing character. I am not sure where she stands or what is really going on with her.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2020 10:11 pm Title: Having Second Thoughts
I think it’s a misunderstanding, I don’t see why he wouldn’t be paying... unless he’s broke.
Just reading Wade’s name makes my blood boil... can’t wait for the drama he’s gonna start in this lol. I don’t want him on that tour.
Author's Response:
Yea... I find it strange Michael still hasn't paid. I am hoping its a misunderstanding and he can pay it and keep his promise. Wade is a lunatic ughhh I cannot stand him! I don't want him NO where near Michael or this tour!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2020 12:50 pm Title: Never Make a Promise
I want to know what Michael is hiding!!!!! And for the whole virginity thing, I see both sides. To some people it’s not a big deal, but I also see why Michael would have wanted to know.
Author's Response:
I want to know what Michael is hiding too!?!! Why do you think Michael was making it a big of a deal that Karima didn't tell him?
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2020 12:50 pm Title: Never Make a Promise
I want to know what Michael is hiding!!!!! And for the whole virginity thing, I see both sides. To some people it’s not a big deal, but I also see why Michael would have wanted to know.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2020 01:47 pm Title: Never Make a Promise
Whew glad they got over that argument. I was worried for a second.
Five times in ONE NIGHT!!!!
I love that they are both willing to at least compromise.
Ew Wade. Karima's cousin is a bish. She obviously hates her cousin and is jealous.
Michael- what secret are you hiding? 👀👀
Author's Response:
I hope that things can work out and they can learn to compromise moving forward. I hope that this is something that is maintained. Yea ughhh Wade!!! What is Maria doing with him!? She also has a lot of hostility and jealousy towards Karima that is misdirected. I too wonder what is Michael hiding? He wants Karima to be honest with him but he is hiding something...