[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2020 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hoped we'd get an update on the story. I'm sooo glad you had the chance to continue! This is such a unique story and you write so well. I wonder what the story behind MJ's bruises are, I hope Mark will help him out of his tough situation. And the fact that Mark is Police chief makes it even more interesting. Both have secrets to hide. Wonder what will MJs reaction be if and when he finds out. I love your story! Please continue
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this long review!💜💜 I so love reading them and I hope i won't disappoint you😊
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2020 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
WOW !! XDD THAT WAS EVEN BETTER THAN THE FIRST CHAPTER. I'M GLAD MARK REALLY LIKES MICHAEL. I HOPE THEIR RELATIONSHIP GROWS AND MICHAEL LEARNS THAT MARK IS A GOOD GUY THAT HE CAN TRUST AND LOVE. BTW I LOVED THE SEX SCENE THAT WAS REALLY HOT !!
Author's Response: WOOP WOOP!😄 thanks for your screaming enthousiasm as always ILoveMJ777, and again thanks for the loving compliments💜💜 Yes.. Michael needs to learn how to trust and love but that's easier said than done.. for now at least😘
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2020 11:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I love your story !This is so good. I just want to hug our precious Michael tightly
Author's Response: Thank you so much Wings!💜 Yes.. our sweet Michael does need some hugs in this story..
Date: Aug 21, 2020 10:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Love this story so far and this is very well written, can’t wait for more! I wander who has been hurting MJ!
Author's Response: Thank you so much again Ms Apricot. I really adore your own writing style, I think I can learn a lot from you so thanks foe the compliment! Next chapter will explain a lot, I'll upload soon😘
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2020 07:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg I am screaming over here, you're back! That makes me so happy because your stories truly are the best :) I swear I came here everyday just to check if you updated one of your stories.
I am really curious how their relationship will continue and where Michael got his bruises from. But Mark seems like a great guy. And I know I've said it before but your writing really is the best.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Awww Sunkid you're making me blush..!💜💜 Thank you so very much again for this amazing reply, it's made me smile in a rough week so thanks!â˜€ï¸ next chapter will explain the bruises, I promise I'll upload soon. In the meantime I've just uploaded the bodyguard as well, so hopefully you'll enjoy it!
Date: Aug 20, 2020 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm intrigued. This is very well written. I look forward to finding out what MJ is hiding about the bruises.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much Thatkliqkid! 💜 next chapter will explain a lot..
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2020 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh snap, I really hope Micheal bumps into Mark again 😖 I love thiss and I hope you keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Ofcourse they will bump into eachother again🤗😊 thank you so much Janis!💜
Date: Jul 08, 2020 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG count me in. I couldnt stop reading even though I was blushing so hard.
Author's Response: Lol ms Apricot, well I'm afraid the blushing is only going to get worse😉 thanks so much for reviewing!💜
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2020 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I'd say I like this new and different approach please do more! ☺😊
Author's Response: Thank you so much Stacie!💜 Just put a new chapter onlineðŸ‘ðŸ¼ðŸ˜Š
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2020 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Michael...I want to give him a hug ....Love your new story
Author's Response: Yeah.. he really does need a hug in this story.🙈😢 thanks for reviewing!💜
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2020 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY THIS STORY HAS PEAKED MY INTEREST ALREADY. XD I LOVE THE STORYLINE. IT'S VERY INTRINGING & INTERESTING. PLEASE CONTINUE. XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much💜💜 I will def. continue!ðŸ‘ðŸ¼
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2020 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is intriguing and your writing is great. I really hope you continue this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Eva!💜 I will continueðŸ‘ðŸ¼ðŸ˜Š
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2020 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Gwendahi. You did a wonderful job with this first chapter. Everything is so realistic and intriguing. That John guy seems a bit fishy to me, like he has some trouble with self-control. Quite scary actually. I hope you'll continue with your stories they're both amazing. And many thanks for the bad era Michael :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this kind review Strega! Yes, Mark in the first chapter is scary.. I will continue with both of my stories, just been so busy but I'll try and upload more soon💜 and you're very welcome: bad era Michael to me was really sexy, so perfect for this fic😊
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2020 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg yeeesss you started another story :D that makes me so happy because you write really really great. And wow this really sounds like a dark story but I really like it! I love Hurt/Comfort stories. Poor Michael I hope Mark and him will meet again soon. Anyways thank you for starting another story, this has to be my lucky day :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sunkid, your kind review warms my heart :) I'm sorry it took a while to update. Yes, this will be a lot darker than my other fic🙈