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Reviewer: sofiirh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2023 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Luck of It All

I just found your story and I already love it

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you - I'm happy to hear this! Hope you continue you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Pimboli Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2023 07:51 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Sun Shines Again

I hope there will be an Update

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Don't worry, more on the way soon!

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2023 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Luck of It All

I don't really read too many stories where Michael has a secretary, so wondering why I haven't come across them much. I like how you write not too much for things to get boring with details, and I also like how the dialogue moves or slows the pacing. And the dialogue gives clues about what the person is thinking, like how Michael says Marren will be good at her job when she reminds him to get back to practice from being in her office. There's a lot of examples like that in here. You also weave in how the characters feel about each other or their traits in only a few words, like how Michael doesn't like the way Frank treats the staff, and how he struggles with undereating. Wonderful chapter, and I enjoyed the read so far.

Author's Response:

Hey there!

Thank you so much for your comment, I never expected to recieve one! Especially not one so pleasant and kind! I'm happy to hear you liked my writing style and elements of the story - I am adding new chapters this week so I hope you enjoy them should you continue to read the story! Thanks again!!

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