Penname: Zendaya [Contact] Real name: Breanna
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Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
Real Name: Breanna
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Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27326
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 90: Episode 20b

Whew... this chapter this chapter. I just had to mention “i have to get my ass on the ass” is a CLASSIC😂😂😂😂😂😭😭😭😭😭😭💀💀💀💀💀 okurrrr. Maannnn i was lmfaorotfkml #DEAD but I actually enjoyed Ava and Mike in this chapter ALOT being that it was her one on one time with him. I think Ava could handle his lifestyle but hehas to give her that chance to prove if she can. They have a lot in common and I swear i felt as if they were slready a damn couple. I strongly feel Ava should be crowned queen. I love Chelle too dont get me wrong but Chelle and mike are gonna constantly butt heads as they did plenty of times and it get very tiring arguing so much all the time. Been there done im a testimony of that. But he and Ava are meant as friends and as significant others. I vote ava but if not I’ll still be happy for chelle. As long as it wasnt sasha. Just wish mari would come back i miss her big bootylicious self. Ugghhh you killin me girl lol. Cant wait for you to update the finale. 🤦🏾‍♀️😩😩😩😩



Author's Response:

"I have to get my ass on the ass" is ICONIC!! I could not NOT throw that in there somewhere, lol. 

I LOVED writing for Mike&Ava here. This is actually a dream date of mine so glad Ava got to enjoy herself, lol.

Sorry it took so long for me to update :(. I had classes, but I FINALLY finished and added.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback :). 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 85: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

Yassssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! The bitch is finally gone. I just knew today will be a great ass day. I just knew it. And i was praying he gave my girl Mari her damb crown. Shiii he alreafy claimung her as his than Michelle and Ava. Anywho... Sasha ass up to no good and im here for it to see her get her ass jumped by my top three favs. Why the driver didn’t just drive off? 🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️

Cant wait for the next update and soon the reunion. Lawd. 



Author's Response:

Yes, girl, just 2 more episodes after this!! After she had that boy stuttering the way he was, you know Mari was getting a crown!! 

Chhhhild, Sasha loses it at the beginning of the next episode. Makes you wonder how she's going to act on the reunion.

THANK YOU, Zendaya!!!! I appreciate you reading and leaving feedback!! <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Episode 18c

Whew chile Sadha and that big ass mouth. I died 😂😂😂😂😂😂 i never laughed so hard picturing Mike looking like ‘bih you crazy’. Sheesh. And Laurent threw me in for a loop. I thought he was flamboyant lije Prince, but not actually into the penises. But hey, im glad he’s coming out with his true self. Now.... the medium/meditator really sid a wonderful job reafing everyone. I loved the idea you did there and of course, my girl Mari got the best read out of all. I feel content. Last thing, Ava was right anout that picking a girl to be eliminated the most. Sasha ass went on a date but hey im not complaining she damn neared ruined it . LMFAO!!!!

cant wait for you to update soon im so anxious for eliminations now. 😬😬😬



Author's Response:

Girl... and she had the nerve to say it with her chest. "It's my right." 

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Michael was extremely uncomfortable during the date. She's so out of touch, she kept telling him "I love you" thinking it would make him feel better when it was doing the opposite.

Lolll, yes Sasha was actually right about Laurent. I can't wait for this to be discussed at the reunion. 

So glad you liked the set up with Manish!!

Chhhild, eliminations were so dramatic, part of it will carry on into the next episode as well. But you'll definitely find out who loses their crown by the end of this current episode. 

 

Thank you, Zendaya (she slays the red carpet)!! I love love LOVE your reviews!! Happy Independence Day :D. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Episode #2 Part c ELIMINATIONS

Somebody come get Mari!!! That girl is a real trip I crack up every time. And why is Sasha acting exactly like Momma Dee talking about "I'm the queen and peasants and shit". Girl you killing me already got my mama asking me what's so damn funny. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Episode #1 Part c ELIMINATIONS

Girl I cracked up so loud at Samora when Mike asked to check her neck. DEEEAAADDD!!!! I'm honestly loving this Love For Mike/Bachelor concept. I get to see Michael in a different light. I remember coming across this a couple years ago but I never finished reading but I'm staring over and now I remember the craziness that's already staring. I can't wait to finish reading and catch up on your newer updates. 



Author's Response:

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Awwww, glad to have you back, love!! Yea, Michael's definitely portrayed differently here. This Mike here is more so based on the stories and tea spilled I've read/heard about him over the years, lmboo.

 

So glad you're reading again!! XOXO!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Episode #4 Part c ELIMINATIONS

Thanks God he gave Lyric and Bree the boot. Bree was getting on my everlasting nerve with them flash flood tears. It's bad enough we share the same damn name (exception mine is with one 'e' Bre short for Breanna) as for lyric she just wanted a come up. Glad her ass is gone. 



Author's Response:

Ohh noo, you have the same name?! lmbo. It's such a cute girly name. But yea, Ms. Lyric was there for her career and Ms. Bree would not survive in Michael's world. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 86: Episode 19a

Girl sasha took me out but good riddens. ✌🏾✌🏾✌🏾 I couldn’t deal with her at akl and i see Michelle was finna beat dat ass real quick too. Mike why you had to push her behind you. 😩

in to this challenge, i had a feeling Michael was gonna use his nieces and nephews for this one. And the way Brandi and Michelle bobded was the highlight of this chapter. Im so glad she won she deserved it tho but Mari still #1 for me. 

I cant wait for the next chapter. The sneek peak got me wondering who is ginna get into it but why do i feel it may be Mari and Ava instead Of Chelle and Ava? 🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️ I hope it isnt and she doesnt get sent home. Mari out ya game face on and focus on yo man to be girl. Dont get side tracted. 

 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 88: Episode 19c ELIMINATIONS

As i predicted my girl Mari was going home. I should strangle you for that 😭😭😭😭😂😂😂😂. I hope you pull a flavor of love 3 move when Flav brought Thing 1 or was it 2? Whoever but when he brought her back cause he felt he made the wrong decision 👀😂 make my day. But at least Michelle And Ava are bottom two and no one else. 

I wonder where this new location is gonna be at and yess who doesnt lnow Brooke Valentine Girl Fight🙌🏾 Was the shit back in our day. Theses chillen dont know nothing anout that. I ccant wait for the last episode then reunion. Oh gawd 👀



Author's Response:

I'm sorrrrrrry, I know she was your fav!!!! *hugs*

Flav and those nicknames, chile, lol. 

Yasssss I LOVE Girl Fight. Still play it to this day. I feel so old saying this, but they don't make it like that anymore!! 

So much drama ahead... buckle your seats cuz we got a BUMPY ride ahead. 

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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 89: Episode 20a Series Finale

Whew chile it went down huh? They was having a battle of the mouths at Elizabeth m’s place lol. But im glad she was able to cut it out in the most elegant way there is. But still, they could have kept that bull for the floght not the brunch. They ticked me iff with that. But im sooooo curious as the name Liz told Mike. Like who does she see fit for him? Abd i perped Ava’s flickin her damn wrists to blind folks. PETTY! Im just patiently waiting for mike to call back Mari. Girl you think im playing im dead ass😂😂😂

cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Yes ma'me, it certainly did go down and at Elizabeth the Taylor's house smh. 

Exactly! They cut up at Michael's dearest and closest friend's house. MESS!!

The Dame will be a special guest at the reunion and she'll reveal then :). 

Yassss, Ava was showing her petty side, proudly flickin' her wrist lol!! 

I honestly do miss Mari. Writing this episode is SO different without her witty perception!! 

Thank you, Zendaya. You know I love your feedback and input, sis <3. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Episode 12d ELIMINATIONS

Although I love Mari and her big ass (I'm not lesbo just appreciate a big natural ass lol) I love Michelle as well and her I don't got time attiude. On the flip side, I just need Valeria and Sasha to go home.



Author's Response:

No, I get it. I'm not les either, but I always have to pause to appreciate her ass everytime I post her banner. Yes, you described Michelle's attitude perfectly. <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 92: Episode 20d THE CROWNING ~The End~

Wow !!!!! I honestly thought he was going to chose Ava but inwas dead wrong. Im glad he chose Chelle because they are alike in so many ways its crazy. She is right they sre twin flames but i feel that Ava was is peace when things got tough because Michelle can be a little intense and things can spiral out of control between them but he went with his soul so i have to accept it although i wish Mari stayed and won. 😒😒😂😂😂 is till hate u . Nah i love u girl 💕💕💕. Please please PLEASE do the reunion it’ll be so nice for the story to end that way being that it was a reality love show and all of them had reunions. I want to see if Mike amd and Michelle lasts or if he chose someone else instead wandering “what if” . Not that i have anything against chelle she wasn’t really my fav like mari was. But hey. Please do the reuinion and we do understand how school can be. Trust me im in college to be an Medical Assistant and its 9 months long i have tests, homeowrk, assignments EVERYDAY so i only have time to read stories than to gather ideas and update my own. Its very tiring tbh. Cant wait to see you update soon.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 87: Episode 19b

Dammmnnn Toya wasnt playing no games with Chelle huh? And i see what you had did there when shit got heated. That gif had me fall backwards into an backflip on the bed lmaooooo 😂😂😂😭😭😭 like i remember that episode but i feel like Mari gonna go home. I hope not. She had more fun with everyone else and she so laid back and sweet. I feel she is meant for Mike. 



Author's Response:

Nope the good sis did not come to play with these hoes. 

 

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Lmboooo, I'm so glad you caught it! 

And yes, our girl, Mari, was definitely the life of the party. With her strawberries&champagne loving self. 

Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts on the update, love!! :D 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 81: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS

Im really gunning for Ava and but more of Mari to win i love Michelle but Mari is more grounded to me and can really hold MJ down AT ALL COSTS. Ava is sweet and i feel she’ll be a good woman to Mike as fir Michelle she would be too but just because mike may love her doesnt mean she got it nor Ava. I feel he’s gonna eventually fall in love with Mari and vice versa very soon.



Author's Response:

Aww, I love when you all tell me who your favorites are. You're right, just because Michael's in love with Ava&Michelle doesn't necessarily mean they have it in the bag. Mari and Michael have had a strong connection since day one, and honestly, if her past relationship with Lionel never came out, I think her and Mike would be a lot further along in their relationship. But it's ok, because they're making up for lost time now ;). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, love.  I love reading your reactions, who you're gunning for, and which parts moved you the most. They help direct me and provide motivation. And you're amazing for leaving comments on chapters as you read them!! <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 56: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

Ok you got me there. 😩😩😩



Author's Response:

*goes back and reads*

 

HA! YES! Lol, I remember writing this. They were everyone's faves at the time, so I wanted to give you all a heart attack for a minute *hugs*. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 69: Episode 16 part b

I'm cackling and wheezing at this challenge. Whew chile.... the SILLINESS.



Author's Response:

Ohh the cooking challenge, LMBO!! Michelle was a mess and a half here.