Penname: Zendaya [Contact] Real name: Breanna
Member Since: Jun 06, 2012
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Age: 18-21
Gender: Female
Real Name: Breanna
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UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27226
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Episode 12d ELIMINATIONS

Although I love Mari and her big ass (I'm not lesbo just appreciate a big natural ass lol) I love Michelle as well and her I don't got time attiude. On the flip side, I just need Valeria and Sasha to go home.



Author's Response:

No, I get it. I'm not les either, but I always have to pause to appreciate her ass everytime I post her banner. Yes, you described Michelle's attitude perfectly. <3

100 Percent by Aaooww Rated: MA starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

 

Isabella Josephina (aka "Joe") is a dancer that has just landed the job of her dreams.  Joe wrestles with the chains of her tragic past and jealous competition blocking the path to her future, all while giving Michael more woman than he's ever had to handle before.  Always a man that's up for a challenge, Michael gets swept away by this talented, wise-beyond-her-years beauty, but is all the while, lured by old vices.  If Joe is to stay afloat on this whirlwind adventure, she must give it her all; especially in matters of the heart.

 

 


Categories: Adult, Angst, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Racism, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41177 Read Count: 4575
[Report This] Published: Jan 14, 2014 Updated: Dec 09, 2015
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Critical Condition

I'm so glad your back. I hope everything has gotten better for you now.

I was getting extra extra nervous reading this chapter. I thought she was gonna slip away forever but Michael is so loving just to never leave her side and make sure she gets the help that she needs speaks tons of volumes on his part. 

I'm just so happy that they revived her and she's back alive maybe not well but she's fought through and came back.

Not sureif you condone in bad language but I pray to God they catch that bitch and Michael fire that blond headed skeezer as well.

 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Eagle Eye

Omg, you're back. Love the chapter you've updated. I hope they catch that witch Celeste. And Eden needs to really stay in her lane. Smh.

And about your dad, I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. I couldn't even imagine how that would feel to lose your father. My condolences to you and your family. Be strong bbg:) <33

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your well-wishes <3.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story! 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Doubt

I had totally skipped this chapter, lol. Smh!!!! I didn't even see it. 

But uhh.... Eden, is really trying to dig up some dirt on homegirl tho when the story Celese told her isn't even true. She just trying to paint Joe out as the bad person when really Joe is the victim. Eden needs to stay in her freaking lane before she is kicked off which I hope and pray it does happen. She is causing too much unnecessary drama and whatnot. 

As for Michael, you don't go off and believe something from a secondary sourse who really don't know what happened themselves just because they were told by someone. Michael should know better. Joe came as a woman who was opened about her life to him, unlike Eden who just wanted some damn 'D'.

And for him to go as low as to say she could have been lying about her father just to earn his trust.... really??? Mike??? Why would she lie about her dad being killed in a hate crime?? His head is really gone now. He is full of doubt when he shouldn't be. If she was being/keeping it 100 with you from day one, what makes you think she wouldn't continue it?

More soon love. <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Who Knew?

This is my first time reviewing for this story and i must say, you're doing hell of a good job writing this. I so love Joe and Michael and the chemistry that they share. I hope they get together soon too. And Eden needs to get the fuck on somewhere like foreal. She really is that desperate. Smdh. And she has some nerve to try and get info about Joe ad call up some chick Celeste to figure out what happen and ruin Joe's relationship or whatever it is with Mike. Fucking bitch. If something does pop off, I hope Mike doesn't ruin what he has with Joe all because of some desperate ass bitch named Eden. Cause if he do I'll be TOTALLY furious. It'll break Joe's heart including mine cause i love them together. They make a very cute couple.

Keep up the great work and please update more chapters really soon. Your story is phenomenal. Im addicted! :)

Summary:

So you're probably wondering who I am, am I talking to you, why am I talking to you, blah blah blah...

Well here's a filler on me...

My name is Jennifer, J, Jen and anything else I'm called...

And I just turned 18...

A lot of unbelievable things have happened in my life, including winning the lottery-but this is by far the craziest. This is my story...whether or not you believe it is up to you...

WARNING: SEXUAL CONTENT!!!


Categories: Adult, Fantasy, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: 9 M's + 1 J series
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60314 Read Count: 50539
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 14, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Off the Wall's day part 2: Dirty Mouth

Please continue the story. I love it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

L I T T L E        W H I T E       L I E S

 

 

 

L O V E        I S        B L I N D,        T H E Y        S A Y

 


Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 279803 Read Count: 40052
[Report This] Published: Feb 18, 2014 Updated: May 06, 2021
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This story is so incredible. Please continue and update real soon. I'm in love woth this story and I hope Tegan and Mike get together. FAST! Sorry TJ but I don't want you with Tegan. Lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I will :)

Summary:

Two Dancers, One Love

Ciara Harris is very passionate about dance. Graduated from the University of California in Berkeley with a bachelor’s in Dance and obtained a choreographer’s license. She still lives in California with her best friend and two siblings nearby. She is a huge fan of Michael Jackson, and when the opportunity to meet and dance for him is offered, she jumps at the chance.

Michael Jackson is known as Mr. Thriller and has sold the biggest selling album of all time. When life gets hectic, he turns to dance as escapism. When he meets Ciara, he is smitten by her beauty and dancing ability. He has to have her, and will stop at nothing to get her.

These two will have you laughing, crying, and pissed. Join them as they endure love, fun, good times, hell, and drama.

 

Ciara  Michael                                                                                  

This story is set in the 80s, but modern technology is used and most artists and songs of today and after the 1980s are used.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48068 Read Count: 9168
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2014 Updated: Sep 21, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Don't Mess With Me

Kml!!! Mike is just plain dirty. Ciara was just so quiet. Poor girl. Great chapter by the way. I'm so goofy I can't stop laughing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks honey!!! Mike is evil; but I love it. He doesn't like anyone getting the upper hand.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: I Gotch You

Thanks for the shoutout lol. It's so. Ute how she stutter around Mike so much. And Mike just can't control his hormones every time he's staring at her ass. Please continue.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. They make each other nervous when they are close like that. 

Mike is gonna get his though. Thanks for reviewing Zendaya.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: I'm In Trouble

Damn! That was hotter than hot. Ooh wee Jesuuuuus! This chapter was on point. But she just had to tease him. CiCi, you did your thang girl. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Zendaya. I'm loving your story by the way. 

I'm so glad you brought it back.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: The Real Michael Jackson

Lord!!!! I'm sitting here reading this with my eyes wide as fuck. Mike was blunt as hell. Damn. He was like fuck it ima be the real MJ now. Kml. You go boooooy!!! And the lines you used from one of his short films was from Ghosts. I love that part cause he scared the hell out of them poor towns people lol. Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

I love that part in Ghosts; especially when his eyes went wide when he said "Game time". 

You'll see more of blunt Mike, cause I like blunt Mike......

and gangta Michael---if you know what I mean Zendaya!!!! LOL

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Appreciation

Mikey and CiCi are like so freaking cute when they torture each other with their pranks. I can't wait til they get together soon too. And thanks for the shoutout. You know I have to have my MJ facts on point, lol. Great chapter by the way!



Author's Response:

Thanks honey!!!! I try my best. When Ciara and Mike get together, you're gonna love the story even more.

Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: First Day

Did I ever mentioned how cute ciara and Mike are? Cause they really are. Lol. He's such a sweetheart and so caring, loving. Ciara really needed to hear those words. She needed to know that her mother was already proud of her even though she's not there to tell her. But I followed you back on Instagram and I didn't know you graduated last year. Great update by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for following me. Yeah I graduated last year and now I'm in college. 

Ciara's mom really is her inspiration to dance and all she wanted was to make her proud.

 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: I Went Too Far

Awww Mikey's in loooooveeee!!!!! And I ain't gone lie, Ciara is kind wrong for that cause nothing at filming went right. Everyone was jacking up especially Mike. But now that he's know what ciara did was all a joke, I wonder what his reaction is gonna be. Hopefully, he doesn't be too mad but hey, I can't blame him. But I just hope not.

Great chapter girl!



Author's Response:

Yes Michael finally admitted it. The feelings were always there. 

Ciara was in the wrong; that's what happens when you take things too far. 

I don't blame him if he was mad too. 

Thanks honey!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Another Part of Me

Mike is known for being and undercover freak. He just nasty lowkey. Lol. I really can't wait for him and ciara to get together soon. They just gotta take things slow but I feel it's time. If not, I guess I can hold out a few more chapters. 

That was very sweet what Chris got Liyah. The braclet absolutely gorgeous. 

Great chapter girl! Scantily  for some drama to unfurl.