Penname: mjsplaything [Contact] Real name: Tianna
Member Since: Feb 05, 2015
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Lose Control by MJstories Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

 

Michael discovers something about his girlfriend Jamie that he never imagined in his wildest dreams.

Not many are used to the idea of a girl being in control.

But she makes him her submissive.

 

This story contains use of bondage and stong adult content.

For the ones that don't want too much plot (still a little ) but a majority erotica.


Categories: Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107602 Read Count: 9874
[Report This] Published: Feb 15, 2015 Updated: Jun 09, 2018
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Her Secret

Yasssss Jamie take control! I am hooked already! Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Hooked from the first chapter?! That's great, thank you so much!!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 On the Armchair

That shower scene tho 😍 I do want one chapter where Michael gets complete revenge on her, turning the tables! Ooh girl, u got me hooked I need me a cool drink n some popcorn for this! loving it! 👌🏾👍🏾🍿



Author's Response:

hahah you're too much XD Thank you!! And you are in for a treat, there is a scene in there where he get's complete revenge, just keep reading ;)

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 In Handcuffs

Damn, poor Mike was going thru it lol RED! RED! She teased him so much, he almost got vertigo lol great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah you are competely right XD Jamie want's him on the edge of his seat ;)

Summary:

Michael is engaged to a very generous woman who decides to share her husband on his birthday. 

 

This is a one shot but will be done in about 3 or 5 parts. The story is pretty long so this is why its giving in parts. If you'd like me to continue posting just let me know! 

 

**this is purely sexual smut and if you havent guessed by the summary, it involves a threesome. Two women and lucky Michael. It also will involve Anal sex. If this isnt your type of thing please just simply not read it.** 


Categories: Adult, This Is It: 2006-2009
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7274 Read Count: 1754
[Report This] Published: Mar 21, 2015 Updated: Mar 30, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dammmmmnnnnnnnn! I am so jealous lol you just made my night, girl! Another cold shower needed! great job!



Author's Response:

thank you honey!! lol glad I could make your night. More on the way! <3

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Girl, I needs me a cold shower! Lol but mmmm mmm mmmmmm! I would never share him lol but I want more girl! Something tells me that their little party is far from over with!



Author's Response:

lmao! I'm not sure if I could share him either. It is a nice thought but when it came down to it, I don't care who she is, I'd probably be hella mad and jealous lmao. Oh no, they definitely arent near done ;) Michael's just getting started. He has allllll night!

Stay tuned ! <3

Summary:

Michael Jackson and Natalya Cane: Two assassins. She has no morality and a low mortality. He’s a young gun, with burnt lungs, and a long tongue. They're here to tear your world apart. But who wants that perfect love story anyway?

Vice (noun): a practice, behavior, or habit generally considered immoral, sinful, and depraved. Vices are usually associated with a transgression in a person's character or temperament rather than their morality. Fault, sin, depravity, iniquity, wickedness, drugs, sex, murder, and corruption.

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2798 Read Count: 96
[Report This] Published: Apr 09, 2015 Updated: Apr 09, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Abduction

WHOOOOOAAAAA! Exciting! I felt my blood rushing as I was reading this. I think Mike and Natalya are gonna make the hottest and most dangerous couple. This reminds me of Quantico/Bonnie & Clyde. At first, I thought it was going to be like the movie Natural Born Killers but this is exciting! Great job so far.

Summary:

“You didn’t have to get me anything, Michael. This must have cost a fortune,” I smiled as I brought my hand up to the diamond choker around my neck, my fingertips brushing against the precious stones.

He grinned and leaned back against the headboard, aimlessly brushing my tresses off my shoulders, “I just wanted to get you something special.” His hand trailed down from my shoulder to my arm and then to my hand resting on the satin sheets. His skin was warm, but I instantly stiffened as the metal ghosted over my skin.

I ignored it and looked up at him through my eyelashes, my cheeks rosy, “You make me feel special just by the way you look at me.”  It was true, more than he’d ever know. With him, I felt like I mattered. That I wasn’t a complete failure.

 

I also could pretend that he wasn’t married.

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77909 Read Count: 23852
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2015 Updated: Feb 02, 2017
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- The Way You Put it Down

And he is running back to Lisa and feels guilty all of a sudden? I love Michael but I wanna punch him in this story, and Dee needs to get a grip on life for real for real.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Happy Birthday to You

I just hope he doesn't flake on her in Las Vegas. But aye, I'm digging this so far, girl!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Fire We Make

Girl,

damn Dominique straight believed every lie out of his mouth. The dick can't be that good lol



Author's Response:

LOL! He really flipped the script on her ass. She wasn't prepared. haha.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Lie to Me

See, girl! I knew it! And damn I don't know who to believe either! Only time will tell but girls, please note that there is no future with a married man. period.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Hot Date

Ugh....he makes me so damn mad!!!!!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-I Should've Known

Oh my god, no girl! Don't do it :-( but hey women, we often know this is bad and we tend to think with our hearts n not our heads. Michael knows he's dead wrong for using the poor girl like this and she is just as wrong for falling for it. I hope they don't end up pregnant when they r not committed. If things r so bad with Lisa, it's not that hard to pack up and leave.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-A Bad Case of Crabs

Shit, Dee might be preggers! dun dun dun! And Trai..he aight, I just wish Michael would get his act together, but girl u got me hooked already! And hey check out my story Remember the Time if u already haven't and tell me what u think!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Speedy,Neverfull,and Artsy

Yes, tear up that black card when he acts up! But he really tried my ass asking her for kids when he knows damn well that she is just his jump-off! boy, bye!



Author's Response:

Michael really tried it. He's just selfish. He knows that's wrong to ask that of her, considering their relationship

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- the W word

Dammmmmnnnnnn! He tore that ass up but yup, I bet he feels real stupid right now. that's exactly what he gets.