Penname: Pytwin [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 19, 2016
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Age: 12-15
Gender: Male
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Summary:

A Love Story of two teenagers that met in Highschool fell in love they basically been threw everything in high school tragic times,happy times,bad times,rumors,lies and most of all trust issues...now they are in college how longe will they stay friends when both Diamond and Michael are seeing different people? 

Final Chapter uploaded!

Epilogue posted

*Michael is NOT famous in this story.*


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166317 Read Count: 19206
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2011 Updated: Dec 03, 2011
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: First Day of School

Still one of my favourites!

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134091
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 the wedding Part 2

Keep writing please! I love this story, I can't wait for the update!!

Summary:

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EVERY BAD BOY NEEDS A BAD GIRL...

 


Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50271 Read Count: 14447
[Report This] Published: Oct 20, 2013 Updated: May 01, 2014
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Omg I'm just scrolling through and I find amazing story again, PLEASE UPDATE!

Summary:

improved

Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62178
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'

LOL the amount of times I've re read this 😂 One of my faves, I love the concept!

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks girl! 

Summary:

Fatima Brown is a young, wild, feisty and smart mouthed teenager who has to leave her home in Brooklyn and move to L.A. because her mother got a job offer she refused to turn down. In the life of Fatima, she is known for being a tomboy, insecure about her looks and not having too many friends back at home all except for one: her best friend Zenobia Carter, who she had to leave behind. Now, she considers herself as a loner without her. But what happens when Fatima meets Michael Jackson, the most popular guy in school, the ladies man, who is also smart at the mouth. Will these two go slashing at each other throats or will feelings get involve and change everything for them both?


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Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51975 Read Count: 5988
[Report This] Published: Sep 21, 2014 Updated: Apr 24, 2019
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. A New Life

Had to search for this again, please update, the story was getting really good!! :)

Author's Response:

Sorry i havent been updating but i finally did. Im so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the love as well💖😘

New Flame by Zendaya Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

Always known as the 'Atlanta Couple', Umika and Michael were once the true meaning of a perfect power couple. It was like they were celebrities. Everyone knew them and knew how much they deeply cared for and loved one another. But everything took a left turn when the unthinkable happened. All it took was two things to end their burning, hot flame they once had: betrayal and cheating. Years later, both Umika and Michael have moved on to better things and, well....lovers too. Haven't seen each other since then, and not knowing if it's fate, they end up crossing each other's paths for the first time since their break up. As old feelings begin resurfacing, things start to get a little heated between the ex-lovers and making them play a game of Pick and Choose. Will they remain with their current lovers and keep their old flame unlit? Or...will they try again and spark up a new one?

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79348 Read Count: 8173
[Report This] Published: Jun 04, 2015 Updated: Apr 07, 2019
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame

I'm really enjoying this one :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liking it So far.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The Sequel To Her Name Was Rose...

 

Read Book One Before Reading This One, It'll Make More Sense :)

It's 1994. It's been five years since Rose was sentenced to 30 years in prison for a crime she didn't commit with the accuser still at large and anonymous. Michael, the love of her life who vowed to never love again eventually went on with his life and remarried, since he thought he'd never see her again. 

 

Because of lack of evidence Rose gets out of jail early, and the mean bitch is back and worse than ever. She hates Michael for leaving her when she needed him the most, and could never forgive him for what he had done. 

 

Can Rose and Michael rekindle what they had ? Or will it be bad blood once again? 

 

Read on as old enemies, and old romances come together once again in Heart On The Line..


Categories: 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Self-Harm
Series: Rose & Michael
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63156 Read Count: 4430
[Report This] Published: Apr 07, 2016 Updated: Apr 06, 2017
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Home

Poor Rose ! 😟😟😟

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: The VMAs - Part 1

Smh come on Mike 😫

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: "Family" Time

Wooooow that was intense 😧 A justified reaction tbh

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Breaking News

I'm so late on this story😩 I'm surprised I missed it. I'm loving the concept already 👏

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: 1994

I like this already !

Summary:

Angelina Jones, a young, beautful, 27 year old college student and make-up magician is dating the sexy Kenny Jackson,a former NFL player, now business man... and their relationship is going toooo strong. What seems like a forever Love, but...something comes up?? What could it possibly be?? Find out...

Michael Jackson beautiful eyes...


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43958 Read Count: 5992
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2016 Updated: Oct 22, 2016
Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The love birds...

Go Angelina ! 😂👏

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Separated I do...

Lisa is getting on my nerves 😤

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: For now...

I'm glad he kicked her out, let's hope this doesn't backfire !!

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Just friendship, new beginning

Aww I hope things work out between them.

Author's Response:

Me too 😢 Thank you :)