Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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"Friendship may and often does grow into love, but love never subsides into friendship."

-       By Lord Bryon.

Can two friends see how much they care for each other?. Wanting to be more than Friends?.


Michael and Amber have been friends since the tender age of ten, spending time together but as they grew and are in High school, can Michael finally admit his feelings for his best friend and can Amber finally see it and care for him as he does for her?


Find out in..

   'I Found that Girl'

Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38558 Read Count: 101132
[Report This] Published: Oct 12, 2015 Updated: Mar 01, 2016
Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Ch. 23

LOL...Marlon the dating expert of the family XD...

I'm just picturing Michael...poor guy...LOL

Author's Response:

The idiot doesn't care and takes on the throne of being the dating expert. Yes poor Michael he can never get a break XD

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Date: Jun 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Ch.24

Sweet interaction between Michael and Amber. Tbh, Michael doesn't need Marlon's advice when it comes to...flirting etc ;)

Look forward to reading more when you're in the mood for writing more :)

Author's Response:

Of course he doesn't but Marlon sees it as his mission to he 'helpful' whatever that can be smh lool. Thanks Mary 

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Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: The End.

Love the ending :)

Can't wait to start reading the sequel :)

Author's Response:

I can't wait to see what you think! See you in the sequel XD

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Date: Jun 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Ch. 27

Yeah, I can see Amber and Michael in LA together... Although I think Amber will try to keep Michael from rushing into things and acting hastily...knowing what she knows about his family...Doing anything hasty would possibly put them in more danger...especially if Joseph were to find out...

Looking forward to the next chapter :D

Author's Response:

I agree Amber will try to stop him from jumping into things lol. But that's why she's there lol. Ooh if he finds won't be pretty tsk. 

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Date: May 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Ch.14

Sounds like Marlon and Michael (and probably the other 4) know how dangerous being part of the mafia is, and they're protective of any woman who shows an interest in any of them.

Good update :).

Maybe this insight will help Amber forgive Michael...

Am curious to see what will help Michael forgive Amber...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

They do understand when it comes to when an enemy would try to use their ladies in their lives against them for ransom or payback. This should help on both sides. 

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Date: May 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Ch.12

Hm...I wonder if Marlon knew Michael would be there, and has his sites set on Amber as well...

Will be interested to see where things go from here :)

Author's Response:

Marlon could have known but he's one sneaky guy when he wants to be lol. 

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Ch.5

Well, put it this way, it was right for Michael...LOL

And at least now they won't be late for school

Author's Response:

Typical Michael Lmao and yes luckily they weren't for now.

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Date: Jun 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Ch26

No, his anger is understandable, wanting to protect Amber & her family from the mafia-ish tactics of his brothers & Joseph.

Hope they won't have to be apart for too long this time...

Author's Response:

Yep I can't blame him either poor guy let's hope the break is temporaily but we shall see next time :P 

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Date: Apr 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Ch.3

Hm...maybe Michael will open up to Amber when he's ready.

I agree with Amber's mother...ijs :)

Author's Response:

I agree too and mothers always know best lol. 

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Date: May 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Ch. 6

I'd always had a feeling Michael got along better with his mom/sisters than with his dad/brothers. Good depiction of that in this chapter...

No errors that I can see...

Love imagining what it would have been like to go to school with Michael in rl :)

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

I agree he might have felt a closer bond to them maybe because they didn't tease him lol. Ah going to school would have been awesome with him lol. Thanks Mary 

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Date: May 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Ch.7

Hm...maybe Michael thinks Marlon will spill a few 'beans' about what's going on in their family...

Look forward to finding out what's really going on :)

Author's Response:

Perhaps so he really doesn't want Amber to know his crazy life behind closed doors and she will find out eventually lol. Thanks Mary <3

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Date: Jun 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Ch. 28

LOL...Marlon making himself the center of attention, and turning on the 'Southern' charm... XD.

Funny chapter...made my day XD.

Author's Response:

Because that's how Marlon rolls smh lool. Glad I did a good job XD

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Date: Jul 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Ch. 29

Omj...Joseph sure seems to be enjoying intimidating his sons into doing what he wants them to do...smh

I think Michael will get Amber to agree...eventually

Author's Response:

That's the only way he will get his way somehow force and intimidation smh. Hopefully he will but how is the issue. 

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Date: Jul 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Ch.30

Have enjoyed Michael and Amber's story so far :)... Am looking forward to their further adventures together :D.

Perhaps together, they can be a 'force' Joseph never figured he'd have to reckon they say 'strength in numbers' :D.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you've had fun reading this story. There is plenty more to read in the sequel. Who knows they might have a chance to away from Joseph 😏

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Ch. 18

Put it this way... waiting for the confession added an element of suspense to the story :).

YAY...and the feeling is MUTUAL :D.

Author's Response:

Thanks I tried even reading back I felt it was cheesy oh well lol. Yes at last they confessed and at least its mutual (thankfully)