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Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2014 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

Damn

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There meeting was a train wreck from the start! Michael just assumed she was thinking negative of him, I bet he would have snapped at anyone tbh. My poor baby, I can understand why, but smh.

I'm glad Lena didnt put up with his shit tho :)



Author's Response:

Yeah you're right, he wasn't having a good day and just happend to take it out on Lena.

And Lena is a little firecracker.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2014 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Well I have a feeling I know this high end client! Not saying in case I'm wrong lmao

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P.S The foot fetish guy sounds good where do I sign up :D

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Author's Response:

I know right, I wish I could find someone like him.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh now this is interesting! I like it ;)

Kam and Mya are so precious, omg I can't believe Jay walked out on them like that what a prick. :x They and Lena deserve so much better. I wonder what exactly made him leave like that? smh

I can't wait to read on. XD



Author's Response:

I'm glad my intro caught your eye. It's gon be a while before you find out why Jay left.

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2014 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

Awwwww! She has a crush and Michael's booty though. BABY GOT BACK! XD I know you have looked at it. I can not be the only one lol. I just can not. 



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Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:38 pm Title: Characters

I'll email you at your gmail. I'm not sure what I want yet. It was just a spur of the moment thought. But I will have it together soon. Thank you so much. Also I will stop posting this on your story haha, Uhhh good luck at the game if your playing, of good luck to the team your rooting for. 

 

Thank you again. Ill get the stuff to you ASAP 



Author's Response:

Okay, I'm not playing it's just some college game I got invited to.

who ever you pick to be the lead, make sure it's not someone who only has one pic online cuz I made that mistake twice lol

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:20 pm Title: Characters

Yay!!!! <33333 I think I love you heehee



Author's Response:

awww lol

Well you could either email me at peaceshanice@gmail.com or send me the stuff on here that you want. I gotta start getting ready for this basketball game I'm going to so I'll probably start on it as soon as you send it.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:11 pm Title: Characters

I would be eternally grateful :D 



Author's Response:

Okay then yeah I'll do some for you

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:00 pm Title: Characters

Yassss I'm excited about the upcoming chapter, but I know how it is wanting to write a brilliant chapter so take your time girl, ill be ri here waiting haha. 

Do you make banners for people too? Cuz I'd probably die of pure happiness if I could get one aas snazzy as yours. 



Author's Response:

I haven't before because no ones asked but I can make some banners for you if you want.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 01:46 pm Title: Characters

By the way, who makes these beautiful banners for you?



Author's Response:

I made all of them

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yaaaaassssss look at Lena wanting to "try horizontal exercises" on Michael, tisk tisk ms nasty ;) I love it 

their family relationship is so wonderful, her crush is so sweet. More more more :D



Author's Response:

haha yeah Lena's starting to feel him.

I do have another chapter mostly written but i wanna more of chapter 10 written before I post it.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Sooo soo cute, look at em becoming friendly and her crushing. 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aww that was so sweet. I like this; he already fits so perfectly with them. Wow I remember reading a biography on Michael and I was like, (in regards to the trial) he had to be making moves on the mom somehow. It's crazy stuff, I never quite figured it out. I see you have the same idea.



Author's Response:

I'm glady you're really liking the story.

Yeah I was doing some research on the trial for this fic, and I came across a story that suspected him and the mother might have been having an affair. I spent like a couple hours looking at a bunch of different articles and it kinda made a little bit of sense. So I just thought I'd run with that idea because it fit so perfectly with the storylines I already had set.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh my god I totally was t expecting that. Michael is a douche haha I love this story. I like how she doesn't take any of his lip no matter how much of a fan she is. 



Author's Response:

lol he wasn't having that good of a day. Lena's nice a heart but she can get very fiesty , especially when she feels disrespected

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ohhh I love Melanie. She seems so nice. 



Author's Response:

Melanie's cool, I need to start writing her into more chapters tho....

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

The nerve of those childcare folks. I used to work in daycare at an elementary during freshman year of college and omg some of those women just didn't give a single eff like fer real, so I totally sympathize with her. 

How you gon let a 3 year old on top of monkey bars, ferrreal tho



Author's Response:

I know, some of them are just there for the check and neglect the hell outta the children. I remember I went to a daycare like that when I was little.

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