Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
“He not lub me no more?” Her little eyes filled with enormous tears that dropped off her cheeks and left dark pink water marks on her shirt. Lena brushed away her tears and pulled her on the couch and into a hug.
that had me in literal tears. I'm still wrapped up in how just so adorable those little twins are, what kinds person jus ups and leaves their family like that. Hahaha guess I should ask my "dad" that lol
But whoa! This fantasy room thing? Intriguing. *smack myself over the head* why didn't I read this story before
Author's Response:
sorry bout that lol I don't wanna tell why Jay left, but it's not at all what you think.
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it sad that the feels are killing me already? Those poor babies, asking where daddy is. TT-TT
Author's Response:
Naw it's normal. My brother read the orignial version of this chapter and cried.
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:20 pm Title: Characters
Those babies are sooo beautiful :3 awwww
Author's Response:
OMG you have no clue how long it took for me to find children that looked semilar and matched my description of them lol I was in google all day.
Date: Mar 08, 2014 11:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh I'm looking forward to reading about Halloween, too! ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2014 09:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww, Michael's relationship with the twins is adorable. I can't wait to see what happens at Neverland! Love is definitely in the air, too! ;)
Author's Response:
You gotta wait for Halloween to find out what happens at Neverland
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2014 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
I like how Michael's kind of like apart of Lena's little family. And she has a crush on him! It was bound to happen.
Author's Response:
Yeah all of them are getting attached to eachother fast lol and of course it was no one can resist those eyes :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
I personally love Edgar Allen Poe lol. Great chapter update!
Author's Response:
Thanks :) !
I had to read a bunch of Edgar Allen Poe in middle school. They didn't scare me but I was soooo creeped out.
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2014 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww so now the real Michael is out
Author's Response:
Yep lol he got himself some act righta and realized he was being a bit of an ass hole
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Damn...he just snapped. Poor Lena. Proud that she stood her ground though
Author's Response:
Yeah Mikey was having a bad day :(
Date: Jan 22, 2014 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you !!
Date: Jan 22, 2014 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
i love that story please continue it
Author's Response:
Thank you !!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 09:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg!!!! I love this! Lol I sound like a perv but this is interesting to me! I hope you update soon :)
Date: Jan 15, 2014 07:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice story! I can't wait to read the next part!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
I'm almost done with chapter 6 so as soon as that's done I'll updateeither toomorrow or the net day lol
Date: Jan 14, 2014 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excited,to see who this high,end person is !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you !!
Date: Jan 08, 2014 02:57 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like this, update as soon as you can plz :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm glad you're enjoing this. As soon as I'm done writing chapter 5 I'll update