Date: Feb 17, 2014 09:37 am Title: Chapter 17
Jamie is so damn dumb and annoying. Girl get the hint that he's just not into you! Damn! Smh. Furthermore, Michael needs to stop being so damn passive and spell it out for her. He doesn't like her that way, so he needs to tell her that instead of acting like he's scared of her. He's annoying me too. How dare he have the audacity the mad at Chris for leaving his ass alone, when that's what he claimed he wanted? I don't blame Chris. I woulda left him alone too. I hope Chris starts dating and hanging out with another handsome guy while Michael watches and seethes with anger and jealousy. It would serve his ass right.
Author's Response:
Lol mike is starting to annoy even me. So I better make him behave huh?
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2014 12:56 am Title: Chapter 16
AWWW MICHAEL PLEASE GIVE CHRIS ANOTHER CHANCE. I THINK THEY'L MAKE A GREAT COUPLE IF MICHAEL OPENED HIMSELF UP TO CHRIS ALL THE WAY, EVEN IF HE NEEDS TO DO IT CAREFULLY. THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME. PLEASE CONTINUE. XD THIS CHAP DESERVES A 10.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2014 12:13 am Title: Chapter 15
JUST LIKE I THOUGHT LOL. XD MICHAEL ISN'T ATTRACTED TO JACKIE. THIS IS A GREAT MOMMENT BECAUSE NOW THAT CHRIS IS BACK HE CAN MAYBE TRY TO FIND OUT WHAT HE HAD TO DO WITH HIS NIGHTMARE. THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING STORY PLEASE CONTINUE. I'M GIVING THIS CHAP A 10. XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
THAT'S WHAT I WAS AFRAID OF THAT CHRIS HAD SOMETHING TO DO WITH MICHAEL'S NIGHTMARE. I'M NOT SURE IF HE REALLY LOVES JACKIE. SO I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM. I HOPE MICHAEL FINDS OUT WHY CHRIS WAS IN HIS NIGHTMARE SOON. GREAT JOB. XD I'M GIVING THIS CHAP A 10. XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
THANK GOD CHRIS DIDN'T THEIR SECRET AWAY, LOL. THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO AWEFUL FOR MICHAEL. AWESOME CHAPTER. XD:):):) PLEASE CONTINUE. I'M GIVING THIS A 1O. XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
WOW I WONDER WHAT MICHAEL'S NIGHTMARE WAS ALL ABOUT? IT SOUNDED SO FRIGHTENING. I WONDER WHO WAS THE PERSON IN HIS DREAM. I'M GLAD IT WAS A NIGHTMARE. XD THIS IS GREAT STORY. XD PLEASE CONTINUE. ANOTHER 10. XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!! XD:):):):) I CAN'T WAIT FOR MICHAEL AND CHTIS TO GO ALL THE WAY. IT WAS CUTE HOW MICHAEL WAS JEALOUS OVER CHRIS AND HIS EX. I THINK CHRIS' HEART BELONGS TO MICHAEL. GREAT STORY. XD THIS GETS ANOTHER 10. XD:):):):):)
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
THAT SCENE WAS REALLY HEATING UP LOL. XD:):):) MICHAEL AND CHRIS HAVE GREAT CHEMISTRY GOING BETWEEN EACH OTHER NOW. I LOVE IT. XD PLEASE CONTINUE. WHAT A GREAT STORY. I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A 10. XD
Date: Feb 15, 2014 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! MICHAEL, YOU'RE MAKING A MISTAKE!!! YOU'LL REGRET IT FOREVER! GO BACK TO HIM! HE LOVES YOU! HE'LL TAKE CARE OF YOU!
Beautiful but painful chapter....
Please, let michael realize his mistake before it's too late... :,( :,( :,(
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 11:07 am Title: Chapter 16
Poor Michael and poor Chris...
another great chapter :) keep it up!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh my.....
I love everything, and I mean everything about this story. Your writing is fantastic, the narrative is superb, the plot itself....amazing! I can't wait for the next update! You've got a loyal reader here!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2014 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaasaaashhhh it's getting more and more interesting one of my favorite story's.
Can't wait for more
Date: Feb 13, 2014 02:04 am Title: Chapter 15
WHOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAA! HOLY FREAKING HELL!! Okay, i sooooooo did not see that coming! What the hell is going on?? Something tells me things are about to get VERY interesting....
God, please dont keep me waiting too long! I've GOT to see what happens! GAAHHH!! X_X
Date: Feb 13, 2014 02:01 am Title: Chapter 15
Gaaaahhh... I love you for updating so quickly. This is my favorite story hands down. Eager for the next one!
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael you make me so made stay away from Jackie you don't need her. Just talk to Chirs about everthing because that's your man.
Love the story can't wait for more