Date: Apr 19, 2014 03:34 pm Title: Your Body is a Wonderland
First off I know what you mean about silent readers..always like knowing how I am progressing..and congrats that you managed to write over 4000 in a few hours..^^
It was entertaining reading when Lily was scared to go on the Zipper..and every time I read about Michael sticking out his tongue it brings to mind the pic during the Bad era where he did it.XD
I love how you write the sex scenes.. Michael definitely knew how to show women a good time. You bet I love it that Lily is breaking free of Mason's control :D
I look forward to all of your chapters and I can see myself reading this fic over and over again. Keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for always reviewing! <3 It actually took me several hours. I hands were cramped by the time I was finished. LOL It was worth it though! :)
Haha, yeah, I don't care how cute Michael is, I don't think he could've ever talked me into getting on that ride. No effing way!! LOL Haha, yeah, I know what pic you're talking about. :)
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like my writing. I'm always a little nervous to write scenes like that because I don't want it to come off like a crappy porno or something. :p Yeah, screw Mason! :D
That means a lot to me that you think it's good enough for multiple reads! <3 <3
Date: Apr 19, 2014 01:11 pm Title: Your Body is a Wonderland
wow!!!!!!!!!!!! sooooooooooooo hot! please keep going!
Author's Response:
Haha, thank ya! I definitely will! <3
Date: Apr 19, 2014 12:22 am Title: Happy Birthday, Michael
excellent!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
Date: Apr 18, 2014 03:58 pm Title: Happy Birthday, Michael
Congrats on the writer's block going away..wish I could say the same for my muse though I have managed to wake it up a little..
Oooh Michael nearly choking on his tongue, not good at all..
Loved this chapter though Michael was so cute being soo lovesick over Lily..was so happy to see this chapter overall..loved seeing Lily and michael be goofballs :D
You're very talented at writing I hope you do more fics after this one is complete! <3
Author's Response:
I'm sure you'll get back into it in no time! :)
Haha, yeah, he was a little stunned by her outfit!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, he's quite taken with Lily, it would seem! ;) I was rather nervous about writing Michael sexiness but I'm happy with how it turned out! ;)
Aww, thanks, love! I certainly will, I promise. I might even take after some other writers on her and do one-shots for people. ^_^ If they're happy with my work on this story and how I write those kinds of scenes, that is!
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2014 08:11 am Title: A Morning of Surprises
Aha, you did a flawless job at it though! This was an amazing chapter xD quite honestly? This is the kind of man us MJ fans are looking for 😂😂. Sweet, patient, kind and loving. I'm in love😍. Seriously though, there is no mistake in this perfectly perfect man. You portray him so well! :D I can't wait for more!
Shinie x
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much! If you of all the writers on here approve, then I'm happy! xoxo <3
Date: Apr 17, 2014 05:13 pm Title: A Morning of Surprises
I for one think the writer's block didn't take away from your writing at all. This was such an awesome sickenly fluffy chapter! I loved it! I love how Lily is already so trusting of Michael so early in their relationship of course they've been friends for longer. I hope the writer's block stays away but I still thought this was an amazing chapter! What a great job you are doing with this story. If you get writer's block again just watch some MJ videos for inspiration! :)
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks so much, girl! I'm glad you liked it! :) I think that is some excellent advice! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2014 04:11 pm Title: A Morning of Surprises
Know what you mean about writer's block it sucks..it's also annoying when I wanna write but feel too lazy to or am distracted by something else..hope you get your creative juices to flow the way you want them to once more..
Such a sweet chapter..I'm so proud of Lily for proving she is stronger than how Mason wants her to be ^^
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks, love! I hope so, too! I'm glad you still enjoyed it. And yes, she is! ;)
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2014 04:07 pm Title: A Morning of Surprises
Great chapter! I always find myself writing something and on a roll, then someone calls me away and I come back with writers block not knowing where th f**k I'm going!!
Author's Response:
I'm quite relieved that you liked it! Haha, yeah, that's how I was all day. So much "fuck this shit" attitude today! I was like
Date: Apr 16, 2014 06:20 pm Title: Candlelit Romance
Awww this was a very sweet chapter and very romantic way to celebrate! An dthe Smooth Criminal outfit is my favorite of Michael's he looked so adorable with it as well as his hair in a ponytail <3..keep it coming, honey..
Noticed you are following me on twitter..thank you very much for following me back..am also on Facebook a lot..
Looking forward to seeing how you like my fics when you get to read them ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you, love! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I definitely will. <3
No problem at all, darlin! :)
I promise I WILL read them at some point. ^_^
Date: Apr 16, 2014 06:05 pm Title: Candlelit Romance
That was so amazing and romantic and it made me swoon! Ah I'm such a hopeless romantic! :) Lily deserves to be spoiled by Michael a bit. They are so sweet together! I can't wait to see where you take them as the story continues! Thanks for another great update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I know that a lot of it was filler, but I figured we deserved to see Lily being treated the way she should be for a bit. ;)
Date: Apr 15, 2014 02:37 pm Title: Be Careful With My Heart
First I'd like to say I love that gif you put up of Michael hugging the fangirl in your response to my previous review..you know something? I feel like we're on the way to becoming online friends..
Now on to the review..
Poor Lily, her self-esteem is still a bit low..but I am sure Michael will gradually help her build it up..
Am so looking forward to seeing their relationship blossom <3 all in all this was a beautiful chapter!!
Author's Response:
Haha, I love any gif with Michael...he's just all kinds of dreamy! ;) Aww, I hope so. I love friends!
Yeah, Mason did a number on her self-esteem unfortunately. :(
I'm sure Michael will make her feel like a princess! Thank you so much, girl! <3
Date: Apr 15, 2014 02:22 pm Title: Be Careful With My Heart
I'M SO HAPPY!! It's so sweet! I'm glad they're together and I know Michael will take good care of her and her heart. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses! Another fabulous update!!!
Author's Response:
Aww, I'm glad it lived up to your expectations! Yes, Michael will certainly handle it with care! :)
Thanks, hun! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2014 02:06 pm Title: Be Careful With My Heart
Great story!!!! They compliment each other so well. :) Update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you!! <3 Will do! :)
Date: Apr 15, 2014 12:58 pm Title: Be Careful With My Heart
Awww. The way they kiss is so cute! I loved every second of it! Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad it lived up to your expectations! <3
Date: Apr 14, 2014 05:01 pm Title: Characters
I'm in love with this story! You're very gifted in your writing skills! <3
Author's Response:
Aww, I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much! That means a lot to me! <3
