[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Nice breakfast scene for Angela. Aww man, it sounds like in exchange for the drugs he supplied her, Angela is a heister in a bank robbery or something of the sorts. I wish she had told Michael and maybe he could help her out of it, but I see why she didn't-it'd be another disappointment to him and something else he could use against her to say, "see"! Sigh. I'm pulling for her to get herself together for her kid's and herself.
Date: Jun 28, 2014 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh God. I wonder what kind of "work" she has to do. And Mike is such a stubborn ass nigga I tell ya. Lol. Please continue.
Date: Jun 28, 2014 07:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Um, what about some flashback chapters?
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 02:26 am Title: Chapter 5
I haven't reviewed for quite a time, and suddenly I see a new update. Yay!...I feel sorry for the children and Michael, too... Great chapter :) :) :D
Date: Jun 22, 2014 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Yari. She's actually telling her father her true feelings. But that attitude she has. Giiiiirl, I could choke her. Lol. I really hope Angela don't screw this chance up. She needs to get better so that she can be with her kids. Her children don't need to see her like that. And Jasmine....idk what to say about her yet. But great chapter Bri.
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter. I feel for them all.I just hope Angela can pull herself together and be there for her kid's. It's obvious why their daughter is behaving the way she is. The little girl wants her mother and to her, Jasmine isn't it. Same for their son. She's a nice lady, and I wish her well, but I'm hoping this story is one where a family who suffers through addiction can pull together and beat the odds together. We all know the stories of the person staying strung out and family being broken forever. Just give me some hope.
I understand Michael's attitude regarding Angela. He has his guard up because he and the kids have been hurt by Angela because of her addiction. Deep down, despite his heartened heart, he still cares for the Angela he knew despite what she's become.
Date: Jun 22, 2014 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's not fair that the kids are going through this and they shouldn't have two mom's, they really should only have one. But, I understand why Michael doesn't want to have Angela in there lives because she doesn't want to get help and clean her life up.
Michael's daughter had some good points. Kids are smart, but they also don't need to know what's really going on. But, I also think it's important that Michael try to tell the truth as much as he can with his kids, because he at least can give them that much. And it not only teaches your kids that they can trust you, but it also can make them feel like there feelings aren't being pushed to the side.
I hope that flashback chapter/ chapters are on there way very soon!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2014 07:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Jasmine aint such a bitch after all 👏👏 Yari needs a little ass whooping i understand u mad but little girl thats yall father michael need to start laying hands on her mouthy ass awwwh Angela like i really feel bad for her i know ppl out there just like her bit she aint have to lie to her children like that smh now they going to be expecting her to be around alot when they dont even know their daddy is getting married , Michael is so damn cold like gessh
Date: Jun 19, 2014 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a very sticky situation for Mike. He shouldn't have lied to Jasmine though; I would expect him to tell her everything since they were about to get married; and he should've told his kids about her. SMDH. He kinda brought this on himself.
Angela comes in and ruins everything and she lied to her kids; got their hopes up that she was better and that she will stay when damn well she needs help.
I feel bad for the kids; they have to go through so much.
Awesome chapter!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Now see, THIS is WHY Michael doesn't want to tell the kid's about Jasmine. Deep down he still has feelings for Angela, despite what has happened to her. Doesn't mean he doesn't have feelings for Jasmine also. Those kid's obviously want their mother home and family back together. It's sad. I just hope that Angela can get herself together and be the good mother she was before her addiction, even if she isn't with Michael. Maybe she'll meet a man who can love her despite her past. Just my point of view. However, please keep going, I'm loving this story.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I know completely what you mean. I have all these idea's in my head for stories but I can't put them down. It's like I have no motivation to write anything. And I can agree with you completely on you putting yourself in the character's shues, I do it with all the girls that have a romantic relationship with Michael.
Please do the next chapters as flashbacks all the way up until this point in the story. So, what I'm asking, take us all the way to Michael and Angela's early days of marrege and all the way to where things started to go bad in their marrege through where this chapter left off.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I know completely what you mean. I have all these idea's in my head for stories but I can't put them down. It's like I have no motivation to write anything. And I can agree with you completely on you putting yourself in the character's shues, I do it with all the girls that have a romantic relationship with Michael.
Please do the next chapters as flashbacks all the way up until this point in the story. So, what I'm asking, take us all the way to Michael and Angela's early days of marrege and all the way to where things started to go bad in their marrege through where this chapter left off.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I know completely what you mean. I have all these idea's in my head for stories but I can't put them down. It's like I have no motivation to write anything. And I can agree with you completely on you putting yourself in the character's shues, I do it with all the girls that have a romantic relationship with Michael.
Please do the next chapters as flashbacks all the way up until this point in the story. So, what I'm asking, take us all the way to Michael and Angela's early days of marrege and all the way to where things started to go bad in their marrege through where this chapter left off.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your welcome and please check out my two stories as they don't really have a lot of reviews. I hope to become loved on this site, someday?
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
I didn't know Mike told Jasmine that Angela was dead. Now he was wrong for that fr fr. And now she's leaving. The kids we're so happy to see they lie mother again. It was just so sweet. Keep up the good work Bri.