Reviewer: RockinItLikeARobin Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2015 04:36 am Title: Chapter 12

Sigh, young love is so beautiful, especially if bae is a flippin 12 yr old!!! This was so funny, and kinda sad... for the girl, obviously, nonetheless, that's pretty hilarious XD Awesome chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Ikr?! Hazel was all ready for that kiss but instead Michael gives her the cold shoulder smh Glad you enjoyed this chap tho!!!!! :)

Reviewer: jhazzyandmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2015 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

Omg good one boo!😂😂 i was expecting him to pour out his feelings good twist keepp up the good work your doing awesome plz update soon😉

Author's Response:

Believe it or not, I originally was gonna have Michael finally confess and kiss her but then I was like.....naaaaaah I still want him to be an ass to her lmfao :D

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:31 am Title: Chapter 11

HWow. That was wow. Spontaneous kiss so hot. I bet money shes right about what his lips feel like😊 so he writes a song about preferring to be alone woth her instead of going out to sone restaurant in the publlic eye, good song choice! Its very cute and freaking adorable. Then he makes out with her but cant think of why he wanted to. Dude grow up. Being michael jackson doesnt mesn you can get whatever/whoever you want so easily. Hes used to not being told no and getting what he wants. Shes totally good for him:). I so knew he picked on her to intenionally piss her off probably because shes cute when shes mad type thing XD hes that confident that hes that good that she wouldnt go back to her dorm after dropping him off. HM SURE. He does know how to kiss well. And you know what they say about dancers in the bedroom... They know how to work those hips! I know im just shocked i hadnt seen the original full version ive seen the full version of bad, ya now i love the video :) she so wanted to slam him against a wall and show him whos really bad XD. Wonder who he wrote TWYMMF about. Hmmmmm. Keep going i so love this. Its one of my fav go to feel good stories:)

Author's Response:

Ikr?! Michael's so full of himself that he can't bring himself to say that he likes Hazel. Instead after he kisses her, he claims he doesn't know why smh he can't bring himself to admit his feelings just yet. I love Lovin You so I knew in someway I'd have to incorporate that song in the story lol

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2015 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow... at least Hazel was right in admitting that Michael was right about Wesley, too.

(Thankfully, this is fan fiction, and that Wesley is quite different in real life from how he is portrayed in this story, and I'm sure Michael loved the way Wesley played the title character in the Blade film series, too.)

Keep up your super-cool, very brilliant and phenomenally beautiful writing... :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm sure Wesley isn't really an ass in real life (I don't think Michael was either) that's just how I wanted the character to be perceived in this particular story haha glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2015 12:07 am Title: Chapter 10

Wow I love it! I had no idea there was a full version of TWYMMF vid it's so much better than the more well known short version, it puts it into context she was playing hard to get and he was advised to just be himself. The shorter version looked like he was stalking her as it as I just found out started in the middle of the action not at the beginning. I love your take on it and that's awesome you had Hazel tease him back by singing his lyrics back to him. This should've been the version they made in my opinion, screw tatiana. I so knew he would be knocked off of his feet by her haha. Loved that she had ahem such a strong effect on her. I love this so much one of my fav stories on here. I now have a new appreciation for that song & vid thanks to you 😘

Author's Response:

Aw I'm glad you've got a new appreciation for the song/video! I've always loved the full version of the way you make me feel. It helps to tell the story of Michael really trying to get with the lead girl and how all he had to do was simply be himself and not put on some front. I never understood why the full intro was never shown (I'm surprised that you never seen it before!!) It's rarely shown but it really helps tell the story because without that intro it sort of does make Michael seem a bit stalkerish (a lot of people had told me they got that vibe the first time they saw it lol) it's always been one of my fav short films of his simply for the beginning because it's too funny! 

Reviewer: jhazzyandmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2015 10:52 pm Title: You're A Jerk, I know.....

First off, phenominal job with the story!👍 i really enjoy your material because you keep it fresh and unpredictable😛 keep up the good job boo😘 your really talented and actually tell a realistic story instead of a story that you can constantly always know whats going to happen next like some stories on this website.... But tht aint nun of my business..*sips tea*a49;a039; Lol but anyways plzz update already ready for somemore lots of d84;a039; ~jhazzyandmj

Author's Response:

Aww thanks you so much!!! I try to keep the stories realistic and unpredictable but it can be tough sometimes lol glad you're enjoying the story :D

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

Michael eyes are gonna pop out his head 

Author's Response:

Ikr?! Michael's gonna look at Hazel and be like daaaaaayum girl you look bad!! (In a good way lol) Rofl :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2015 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow... :) I like this chapter; it is very unique, as well as very well-written too (despite the lack of paragraphs every time a new person speaks).

I also noticed that while Tatiana is shown to not be very nice in this story, Karen listens when Hazel tells her she is nervous and then replies that she will be fine (thus showing that Karen had seen what stage fright was like, and possibly knew how it felt, too). :)

Keep up your super-cool, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks so much!!!!! That means a lot to me, knowing that you appreciate the story :)