[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:57 am Title: Chapter 25: Long way to go
Aw I feel quite sorry for Michael. With each of his attempts she just keeps snapping... However his ass shouldnt have done the dirty in the first place.
I wish she would properly hear him out, even though she's still hurting. When she's ready to talk, she will. Michael shouldnt pressure her.
Gah I love this story ^_^ , <33
Author's Response: Lol! Michael did kind of bring it upon himself. Trust me, she's going to open up eventually. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:52 am Title: Chapter 24: Try a little tenderness
Meli's miscarriage sounded painful. :'(
Michael really has to be there for her now and he knows it.
Now he knew what he must do. He must dry her tears, calm her fears, Squeeze her, don't tease her, never leave her.
I love how you worded that with refrence to lyrics. :D
Awh I love that video XD I love me Jackson era Michael, its my favourite era close to BAD :)) He was so freaking talented, soulful, sweet and beautiful from a young age... And onwards. :D
Great chapter
, <33
Author's Response: Yes, It is definitely time for Michael to step up to the plate and try a little tenderness. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that video!!! I saw it on the Jackson's Vareity Show and I was just mesmerized!! I can't even describe how lovely Michael was in the Jacksons era and every other era!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Much love!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:44 am Title: Chapter 23: Open you heart to me
:(( This was emotional. Its understandable that Meli is mad at him; he can't just be forgiven at a snap of a finger.
Meli is real fragile right now and she feels she can't trust, so she lashes out at him... However she can't just block him out completely which is why she responds.
Perseverance, love and understanding is key here, he just needs some patience. :))
N'aw I can't wait till these two get back, I love them. :3
, <33
Author's Response: Yes, forgiveness takes time but Michael can't give up!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:39 am Title: Chapter 22:" I love Meli"
YAS MICHAEL YOU TELL THAT HOE
I'm so proud of Michael in this for telling her straight, bout time aha
" The baby I've been carrying. It's not even yours!!!!! Yeah that right!! "
Smh this hoe lol good riddance :P
Great chapter! , <33
Author's Response: Lol!!! Your gif is hilarious! It was like a celebration for me to write that scene. Tatiana finally got served! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:33 am Title: Chapter 21: Crossing the line
I've been catching up with this story and omg I can't stop reading, but I'll review the chapters I've just read. XD
I would have reviewed whenever I reached the end of the chapters but once I started I couldnt stop pressing "NEXT" so quickly to find out what happens. Thats how good this story is omg. :)))
Concerning this chapter; aw shit! Tatiana's gonna get the shouting she deserves, she's got Michael hella angry now. ;3
You're an incredible writer. :D
, <33
Author's Response: Lol!! I really thought this story had lost it's pazzaz. I've lost so many readers it's not even funny. Yes, It's time for Tatiana to get it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 08:47 am Title: Chapter 42: Alive
GRRR...Michael was stabbed!! I wanted to KILL somebody!!!
AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
He BETTA be alright darn it!! *takes deep breaths*
Okay...
I'm glad that Meli is safe though... that's a HUGE relief!! YaY!!!
LOL!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the update Hun!
Author's Response: I wanted to kill somebody too and I wrote it!! Trust me he'll be okay. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 32: Everybody's somebody's fool
I love this story... I'm adding it to my favorites! ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!! I'm glad you love it!! Love the gif!
Date: Jun 23, 2013 10:33 am Title: Chapter 42: Alive
Yes! Everything's over! Finally. I'm glad Meli is safe.
Author's Response: Yes!! Meli's finally free!! Thanks for reading and reviewing. You seem like my only reader left. All the rest ditched. Anyway, thanks again!
Date: Jun 01, 2013 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 41: Red
Oh shit! What just happened?! Crap!
Author's Response: The next chapter will tell all!! Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: Jun 01, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 40: Not Much Longer
Get her Michael. By the way, if he EVER cheats again, guess where my foot is going? Up his ass! He better appreciate Meli when he rescues her and more.
Author's Response: Oh yes! I'm pretty sure if Michael ever cheats on Meli again he's going to get a foot from everyone who has read this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: May 31, 2013 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 39: Smooth Criminal
Damnit! I thought they had his ass! Ooh that pisses me off!
Author's Response: Trust me their going to catch him soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing !
Date: May 05, 2013 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 38: Keep The Faith
Pls pls update soon pls this is just ohhh its to good for words
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I will!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2013 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 38: Keep The Faith
Amazing chapter, glad she's still hanging in there.
"Keep the Faith" is one of my favorites as well, couldn't tell you how many times during the Murray trial in '11 I listened to it on repeat. It's brilliant, especially when you need it most.
Author's Response: Yes she's still hanging in there but she won't ave to hang in there much longer. "Keep The Faith" is so empowering and comforting. I just love how it reveals Michael's spiritual side. He bring me to church every time I hear it!!!! Thanks for always reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2013 07:35 am Title: Chapter 17: Best be moving on
Get this Tatiyana chick OUTTA HERE!! *grrr* lol
Author's Response: Trust me she'll be out!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Feb 18, 2013 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 38: Keep The Faith
I HATE ANTHONY! I'm glad Meli's using birth control. I wouldn't want to be pregnant by his crazy ass either! I do hope Michael finds her soon.
Author's Response: Haha!! Don't we all? Anthony's main purpose for existance is to be hated. For Meli to carry his child would be a disaster. Trust me, Michael will get to her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!