[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2011 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 4: Jehovah’s Confessions (My Adorable Mangasm?)
Mikey is so cute! Lol god bless :)
Author's Response:
Yeah ikr? I really enjoyed naming this chapter, thanks for the review:) Oh "god bless" you too dear heart.
Date: Dec 18, 2011 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Love Of My Life
lol! Marlon is in for it now! Be prepared! Michael is going to shove his foot up your @$$ marlon! I love it! Please put up the next chapter! :D
Author's Response:
Haha yeah, hopefully it will be up tonight, I'm working on it! Thanks for the review by the way:)
Date: Dec 18, 2011 06:00 pm Title: Prologue: The Family...Ch 1: The Beat[ings]
I have to tell you, I really enjoyed reading this first chapter here. Your writing style is really something unique and the narrator (Michaels) voice is very fresh and engaging. And it did make me giggle on those certain bits, I like this story very much and I'd love to see you continue it!
(But...You do know that Jackie is the oldest boy right? Or is that one of the things you altered for story purposes?)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I knew that I was gonna mess up the order of birth or whatever, but I tried to get as close as possible haha:) and thank you! I decided yesterday that I should start a new story, my other one was confusing. It's really nice to hear positive feedback:)