Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2012 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 24

Well I just read this whole story in 1 day…and that says a lot! X’D

I really enjoyed every single chapter! Some were rather depressing and made me feel awful for dear Axel, but others actually made me hurt for Michael just as much…if not more, believe it or not..

The boy is obviously a mess and in a big struggle with himself.

Falling in love with Axel was probably the best thing that’s ever happened to him but he’s so keen on keeping her close to him by hurting her, I’m guessing because of his troubled past with his father teaching him the values of ‘respect’ the hard (and Wrong!) way…

I just loved the clarity his dialogues with Janet gave us though…He really has a soft spot for her and looks like she knows him better than he knows himself!

Every time they sit down and have a nice chat, it’s like Michael’s hit with this new, colorful & sensible perspective of life and his feelings for Alex, only for her to react totally differently in ways that he can’t understand and turn him back into the bully every single time…

Leading to the vicious cycle that is their twisted relationship xD

It’s like whenever she finds the courage to stand up for herself and confront Michael about his behavior, the timing couldn’t be worst!!Because once she’s figured out how to do that, Michael was just at the verge of finally exposing his true feelings to her.

Of course her reaction is confusing to him and clashes heavily with his own, which brings them right back where they used to be!

Like now, for instance; now that Michael has finally grown the balls to do something so nice and kinda romantic even for her (the letter & the necklace) she gets the wrong vibe from him again because Janet brought it instead of his chicken self.

And once I started getting the feeling that maybe they were getting close (at last! Lol) This green-eyed French ‘mime’ comes sweeping Axel off her feet, taking right off before Michael’s eyes with  his damsel on the back of his horse before Michael can even get a fair chance to clamber upon his own and come and take her.

I really do believe he loves her though. He just has no idea how to deal with such strong feelings.
And she obviously has no clue whatsoever  that he loves her and that’s the only true explanation to his fairly odd behavior towards her.

They’re both confused, broken people that are actually very similar but they keep confusing things with their own confusion which only makes things more confusing – if that made sense at all, haha ;D

I can’t wait for Michael to just get his whole tough-guy act over with and man up enough to tell her to her face how he feels about her so there’ll be no possibility for her to misunderstand him again.

I can hardly wait for them to make love, too! Like SERIOUSLY; just imagine an overly possessive, almost to the point of obsessed, Michael making love to the love of his life for the first time, marking his territory like he’s longed to do ever since laying eyes on her for the 1st time!

Can I say HOT HOT HOT?!?! Girl, I can hardly wait!

I bet it’ll make up for one of the Hottest, most intense and emotional love scenes EVER!
So time to clear out all the confusion already! Lol, I’m growing so impatient! I’m really digging on this story right now!

Hope you’ll update soon! Keep up the great work!

BIG HUGS!!! x

Author's Response: I think you are my first reader to ever understan any of my stories... :). I'm glad that you are able to comprehend it so well with your own style(and how it really is) Thank you for reviewing(and understanding) and I hope you enjoy the future chapters

Reviewer: Illusion Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2012 09:52 am Title: Chapter 24

*in agreement with 2human4nature* :)

Can't wait 'til the next update! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, 200th reviewer :)

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2012 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 24

Michael can't get mad. What does he think.? Abusing her is a way to make her fall for him.? He needs help.