Date: Jan 16, 2012 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fake Date
This story is interesting please continue
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'll continue soon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2012 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 6/Part 2: Seduced to Love
Damn it's getting hot and sexy!! I love it
Author's Response:
I agree. Thank u
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2012 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Misery
OMJ! I'm really lovin' this! Please update! haha! It's so good! I like the idea of it and I think it's really cool! :)))) I like Nia! loL! She's funny she's all like: DAMN HE'S A SEXY THANNNG! or something like that and Michael is like: No shit. ok, he didn't actually say that, I just pictured him thinking that with the attitude and stuff that you've created for him! I really enjoy how the chapters aren't like 500 words nor are they like 10 000! Haha! It's great! You're doing such a good job with this story! You should have more views and reviews! People are crazy if they haven't checked this story out! BTW you're an AWESOME drawer! Haha, you did draw the cover title right? It looks really good! :DDD Keep on doing what you're doing! GREAT STORY! AAOW!
Author's Response:
Dang u crazy! Lol, but thats alright. Thanks for all the L.O.V.E for the story and compliments on ur fav part, including Nia. Haha! I'll try to update as soon as I can. Btw, I did draw it. Thanks for the compliment on my cover. :)
Date: Jan 07, 2012 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Misery
This story is really good. I'd like the chapters to be longer but then I'd be a hypocrite.
Author's Response:
Lol. It's totally fine. Thank you anyways. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2012 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Misery
Wow! awsome story! I read something simailar on youtube! But realy awsome story! god bless ;)
Author's Response:
Lol. Probably because I posted it on Youtube also. Was te author's name heartfullofMJ? Because that's my YouTube account's name. But either way, thank you for liking it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2012 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: A Thank You
Back again :) I think this chapter was crazy. The situation she was in was horrible, Im glad Michael came along. I saw just a tiny few typos but that doesn't matter. When Michael started hitting her, it reminded me of that other story called My Bully, the newest one. I forgot the name of the writer. But Im sure you had no intentions of copying it.
I think you are headed in a good direction for this story, it's very interesting and I like interesting stories lol The style and details of the story is also good. I think you should update :))
Author's Response:
Thanks for the honet review and reading my story. I promise to correct the typos and i promise i did not mean to copy from another story. I made this story months ago and didnt read anything during it just so i hoped i wouldnt copy anything. Thanks once again
Date: Jan 03, 2012 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Misery
Hey its me! This was the first story I read because you were the first to tell me your story :) When I was reading this; In the beginning I was like how old is that boy?? Then you said he was in the 8th lol I laughed a little too. I think this is very different than other stories I read. I think I like it but to be sure, let me go on and read the second chapter and let you know :))
Date: Jan 02, 2012 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: A Thank You
wow dis is really good i cant wait 2 c what happens next. update
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Misery
good story update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1: Misery
i love the cover and this story all ready michael is so "bad" yea right he just wanna b happy again continue
Author's Response:
Thank you and thank you for the review