[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 56 the wedding Part 2
I just finished reading your story and I love it so far! Congrats on being pregnant and I hope that you update soon!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 56 the wedding Part 2
Keep writing please! I love this story, I can't wait for the update!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2016 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is the first story that I am reading on MJ Fiction and I love it already! There is so much action! I can't wait to see how it progresses!
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 56 the wedding Part 2
I've finally caught up with this story and now I'm in the same boat as everyone else....I want an update! I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story--the plot, Michael's crazy ass, Sky running away all the damn time, the red seven team, I could go on and on. Thank you so much for sharing this story and I hope you can update soon!
Congrats on your pregnancy!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 05:10 am Title: Chapter 53
Michael is such a badass lol. Loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
I am so happy you are liking the story. I just love new reviewers. Please enjoy the rest.
-michaelfan90
Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:51 am Title: Chapter 52
The ex-husband!!! Sky, you in danger, girl. *Whoopie voice*
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:38 am Title: Chapter 50
Okay, I was suspicious of Mouth but not for THAT reason. Hell, I thought he might have had a crush on Showtime but SKY?! He's a dead man. Dis tew much!
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 04:20 am Title: Chapter 49
Well I'm actually kinda relieved that Michael is there! At least he knows where she is. But Sky, that was dumb. She could have run once she got the necklace. Now I'm becoming suspicious of Slick and Mouth, especially the latter. Michael's gonna be so pissed smh.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 44
Well it's about damn time these two confessed their love for one another. I love it! 💚
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 41
I knew it was Antoine Dodson lmao! Love Showtime! Still suspicious of Gunz. Next chapter... :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 40
Tiger's prayer....LMAO!
I loved this chapter. The guys are so great with kids.
How convenient that Sky's tracker messed up. I don't trust Gunz, haven't from the beginning. But I'll hold my tongue for now and keep reading.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 39
This is getting even crazier. Sky has made some dumbass decisions but accepting Tony's offer to go to Iowa was just so stupid. Smh. I thought Tony was the one in charge but after reading this chapter, clearly he's taking orders from someone else. The line about choking him with his own intestines sounds like something Michael would say. Obviously Michael isn't conversing with Tony. I think someone close to Michael is running Tony, and I'm scared that it might be someone on the team. I think I know who it is but I don't want to say. This is so good. Lemme keep reading... ::grabs more popcorn::
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 09:32 am Title: Chapter 22
This scene turned out to be really beautiful (and sexy) even though it began quite violently. I loved it and I love this story!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 11:16 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter so much! ðŸ˜
Michael is so sexy to me in this story, even if he's crazy as hell lol. That sex scene was everything! That was so hot...and that's coming from a germaphobe who would normally be turned off by a sex scene in a public restroom. I love it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 05:19 am Title: Chapter 12
Omg...! I usually have better feedback than this but with this story, every chapter usually ends in me saying no "oh my God" out loud lol. I love this! 😩