[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 05:08 am Title: Chapter 11
This story is getting deep. Michael and Sky are both so complex. Love it.
I love the scene between Guns and Sky. But omg, I really hope she does not fall in love with him!
Date: Aug 25, 2016 04:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for giving some background info on Michael. I'm starting to understand him a little better now. It's clear he has a painful past. Interesting that he says he just wants to be loved, even if that means forcing it. And even more interesting that he said he doubts he will fall in love with Sky. I beg to differ. I think he will fall in love with her...hard.
Love this story!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 04:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Omg! Muscles should have seen that coming. And LOL at Michael tampering with the water. He's crazy lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is getting so good....omg. 😩 ::grabs popcorn::
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
He had me at "....fuck you senseless" in the first paragraph. ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ I love this Michael. He's crazy but mysterious and unpredictable. It's exciting!
Thanks for sharing! Off to the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I found this story after reading your other story, "The Crazies." Just like the other one, this is GOOD! I think I held my breath throughout the entire robbery scene. Michael is a psychopath. I love it lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I found this story after reading your other story, "The Crazies." Just like the other one, this is GOOD! I think I held my breath throughout the entire robbery scene. Michael is a psychopath. I love it lol.
Date: Aug 07, 2016 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
no problem at all hun
Date: Aug 05, 2016 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
@mjsbadbabygirl the girl took it down. She was nice about it. Thanks for lookin out.
Date: Aug 05, 2016 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
The plot is so intense! Every charter is very interesting. Great story.
Date: Aug 05, 2016 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi I just wanted to inform you that someone on wattpad took your story and put Laurent Bourgeois as the main person. It has the same title and basically is the same exact first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for letting me know. Heist is ONLY posted on Mjfiction. If you could send me the link, that would be great.
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5
This story is great! I can't quit reading!
Date: Jun 30, 2016 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
AN UPDATE !!! GOD EXISTS !
Haha honestly I know this story by heart I love it so much I've been reading it again and again and again... I am in love with this !
I am not ashamed to say that Heist is the story that made me want to write my own ! :) it made me feel so much emotions I wanted to do the same thing !
Thank you so much for writing this piece of art ! Keep updating though cause I can't get enough of it !
Date: Jun 25, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I've honestly missed this story so much. I started looking at this site a few years ago and remembered loving this. I came back and created an account just so I could read it again, and it's even better than I remembered it being. You're so articulate, and have great imagery. I love it. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2016 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 56 the wedding Part 2
I am addicted to your story, The Heist. It was absolutely a long journey for Michael and Sky; whom will probably face more challenges in their lives. Also, continue to update please.