[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2011 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
love this keep going :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2011 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw that was SO sweet! I loved it. I loved how Michael actually apologized to her before kissing her, he's so sweet. ^_^ But him and those thoughts though, lol, bad Michael. I can't wait to hear more!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2011 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my gosh! This is an amazing story! I absolutely love it!! I really can't wait to hear more!! Michael's so sweet and I feel so bad for Lily!! I hope you update soon. :)
Date: Dec 20, 2010 12:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I hope you update soon....I'm hooked.
Date: Dec 13, 2010 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Really like this! Update soon please :)
Love Cleo xx
Date: Dec 12, 2010 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwww sad! They're definitly are made for each other :3 I love this :D
Date: Dec 12, 2010 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww that is sad good thing Michael is there to hold her
Date: Oct 19, 2010 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heehee, yeah, not quite I'm pretty sure... I think it was right around... Late Dangerous?
haha, I don't know... I think when it got really bad, it was from the 1993 trials.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2010 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2010 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG i love this please keep updating its awesome
Date: Oct 18, 2010 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow i can tell this is going to be another really good story! i cant wait to see what's going to happen!
Date: Oct 18, 2010 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaw! It's so cute, heehee! Liliana seems like a sweet girl, although I wish her mom wasn't so against MJ...
Um, if you don't mind me saying, I actually think that Liliana dating rock stars shouldn't be the only thing her mom was against. I think it'd be more believeable if she was also against Michael himself, since there were so many people who thought he was a freak.
^^" You don't have to use it, because it's your story, and I can already tell that you're a fantastic writer, but that's what I would do.
Author's Response:
Yeah, don't worry, I was probably going to do that sooner or later XD Even though it is in the late 1980's & people didn't think he was quite a freak YET...i think? idk lol. but yeah, thanks for the suggestion & review! :)