Reviewer: Michael_Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2014 07:57 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

I'm sorry for how my review came off, haha but it's fine, I wish you all the best in your studies, and nice to meet you too girl xxx

Author's Response:

LOL Don't worry, I don't mind even if you were really so very mad at me haha :P You have a right to be mad at me and yell at me! Even I would be enraged if I don't get proper updates of the stories I love and there's no one else to blame but me as an author here :D So you can yell at me all you want alright chika? Gosh, thanks, although my studies been a real pain in the ass lately lol! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: GnRMJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 07:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Hahaha I just seen your reply! & let me tell you when you said your professors are assholes it instantly reminded me of the way Nita and Michael called Hoefflin that! lol sorry just had to get that out there! :p but hmm we'll just have to see about Jermaine or not ;D lots of love back at ya! :]

Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Sorry it took me a while to respond :/ LOL Oh yeah and I MEAN IT!!! Hahaha Oh yessssss my professors are my sole inspiration of Hoefflin, although Steven Hoefflin himself have an infamous I-am-an-asshole history :P Thank you girl!! I really had a good laugh after so long... :( My assholes are sucking my blood right now and lord, I WANT to update! It's just so horrible to leave you guys hanging there, I know... I'll updating real soon :) Haha Love you!! <3 xx

Reviewer: GnRMJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2014 01:06 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

I was missing this story so I came and read the last chapter again lol and I forgot to mention on my last review that I think Mike's secret is telling her about the tour or something like that. And that the baby is probably one of jermaine's cause he goes around a lot lol

Author's Response:

HEY Girl!! :) Sorry it took me a while to reply :P Oh I am so sorry babe this is just hell... my schedule I mean. And my professors are complete assholes trust me! But I'm working on the update... I'm planning on updating this sunday. *Fingers crossed* I have been editing as well ;) LOL You will see ;) I don't want to give you clues of what might happen lol! HAHA everyone's thinking of Jermaine and he got a very good reason for that LMAO but come on 'anything' can happen... xD Thanks so much for the review hun! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2014 07:09 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

I agree on the chesthair thats why in my story he grew facial hair too

Author's Response:

LOL He really is pretty HOT with chest-hair or facial-hair :P Thanks so much for your review hun!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2014 09:02 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

I Said Next Week Lmao I Am So Sorry. But Anyway Maybe The Baby Just Look Alot Like Michael Maybe It Aint His. Cause Would Have Liked To Think That He Would Told Her If He Was Having A Baby By Another Woman.

But Then Again Maybe He Don't Know About The Baby, But Naw How Would He Explain The Way He Told Her He Was Gone Hurt Her Again && He Not Good For Her??????????

Author's Response:

HI Sky!! :) LOL It's alright! Hehe... Mmm... You just have to wait and see ;) Sorry for the confusion... and really sorry for not updating :( My schedule's been annoyingly hectic lately! :/ But Thank You so much for your review, hun! I appreciate it!! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2014 01:20 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

 “Yes you said smooth criminal!” He suddenly exclaimed, making her jump. “Smooth criminal!” he said to himself, a glitter forming in his eyes.

“First step, check the scene for immediate danger. Make sure you’re not putting yourself in harm’s way by administrating CPR to someone unconscious. Step two, assess the victim’s consciousness. Gently tap his or her shoulder and ask, ‘Are you OK?’ in a loud, clear voice. If he or she responds, CPR is not required. Come on, now ask whether she’s okay. Go on like this, ‘Annie, are you ok?’” She demonstrated and looked at him.  

“This is ridiculous.” He told her simply. And noticing her glare, he sighed and patted the doll’s cheek. “’Annie, are you okay? Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie?’ Happy now? She ain’t moving. She’s dead!” he mocked and suddenly stopped. “Did you hear that?” 

“Annie are you okay? So, Annie are you okay? Are you okay, Annie?” he snapped fingers and suddenly sung something. 

I love how you worked this song into the story line. It almost as if Nita is his muse for the Bad album and she has no ideal of how much she's influenced him. Genius, pure genius!

Author's Response:

LOL! That was exactly my aim... hehe to make Nita his inspiration for BAD. :P And of course, she has no idea about it... A successful artist like Michael should really have had major inspirations to write and sing such sensual, romantic songs, especially in BAD and make it all sell-out even when the world thought he was crazy, gay, blah, blah... you know ;) And he must have had such intimate experiences to write such songs right? You can't really sit down and write a sensual or a love song that send a shiver down your spine unless you are an experienced person at that field right? :P Aw, THANK YOU luv :) You keep putting a smile in my face!! :D Love you girl! <3 xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2014 10:35 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

WOW Thats some new year present! I felt, laughed, admired and SHOCKED! in this chapter.I like the way you leave us in cliffhangers but seriously cant wait for more...update plese?

Author's Response:

HEY girl!!! Missed you!!! :D Haha Thanks so much!! I really appreciate it!!! I'm SO sorry for delaying updates... seriously my schedule is so hectic I'm so pissed off!! But I've been working on the update in every little break I could get and it will be up very soon ;) Thanks again, hun!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: VADYID Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2014 02:16 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Oh jeeze! You had me frozen in the last part!! Please update soon I'll die of suspense if I have to wait for an update! Lol sorry for the impatience. But the annie part was hilarious! I love the way you incorporate his songs into your story. Keep it up, you're a flamboyant writer :)

Author's Response:

HI VADYID! :) LOL Ikr? Ok, I'm currently working on the update and I promise I'll update ASAP :D Lol I'm so sorry for the awful cliffhanger, hun, but I really couldn't help it! :P It's alright haha, I can feel ya ;) LOL Thanks! Well, actually most of the Annie part was true. Michael really stumbled onto the smooth criminal lyrics while he was at a first aid CPR class and the doll was called as 'Little Annie' Lol! Aw, Thank you so much luv! I REALLY mean it! Your review made my day :D Lots of love your way! <3 xx

P.S Meet Annie! ;)