Date: Mar 26, 2019 12:55 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Wow
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2018 10:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
Michael with Omer absolutely melted my heart! I love the tenderness and protectiveness, I hope we get to see more scenes like this xx
Date: Sep 29, 2018 03:31 am Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
Omg I truly adore this story! So in love with these characters. The love between them is palpable. And wow, when we almost lost Nita, I almost died. So epic.
And the amount of effort you put into the research is incredible. Please keep writing!!!
Date: Sep 26, 2018 06:48 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
I’m truly enjoying this story. I love the characters you’ve created. I love how headstrong Nita is and MJ here is a complex character. And their relationship seems so realistic.
Can’t wait to read more! But I just wanted to drop a quick note— that line about “the most initimate things in life are not seen but felt by heart...†Deep!!! I love that so much!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2018 09:07 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
I've been reading this wonderful story for years! Please, dobt give up! Will you update?
Date: Feb 12, 2018 10:31 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank You Whitney :) I'm really sorry for my late response. I will <3 xx
Date: Feb 12, 2018 10:31 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Please update soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2017 03:06 am Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
I just finished reading the whole story and it's incredible. So well written, a great storyline and you pay attention even to the smallest little details. Oh, and I absolutely adore Nita! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi there ViragK :) Thank you so much for reading and letting me know! It means a lot :D I will update soon :) I'm really sorry for my late reply! Stay tuned ;) <3 xx
Date: Sep 25, 2017 12:24 am Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
Oh my god! I am speechless ! I have read your story up until this last chapter without commenting, because I was so in awe. I mean wow, this is so intense. Your story is one ride into romance and raw emotions. It is exquisite. I love your Michael character, I imagine he could very much have been that way. This complex person full of secrecy and tribulations. I am impressed of how real and believable your story is even with the health issues he had. You story is definitely keeping me on my toes. I can't wait for the next chapter, though I am concerned about Tatiana ' s disturbing determination. Michael will not allow her to threaten the love he is sharing with Nita, right? There has been so much drama lately. I can't take any more. But as you said he is no cheater and loves Anita with everything he has so we should not be worried, right?
I wish he would introduce Nita to his family already. That would be great. Please don't let Michael develop feelings for T.
Author's Response:
Hi Gigi :) Thank you sooo much for your wonderful review. It means A LOT to me !! :D I'm really sorry for my late response! I will update as soon as I can :D <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2017 03:48 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
It's so good to have you back on here and continuing this story! I have truly missed you! How have you been? How are you doing in medical school? I hope all has been going well for you.
Thank goddess Nita and Michael decided to work things out and move in together. They both seemed to have learned a lesson when they almost lost each to death. Hopefully they will be more open with each other and not hold all their feelings inside. Compromise is important in relationships and both of them need to realize that if they want it last.
I see crazy Tatiana has made her way into the story, lol. I've always thought she was obsessed Michael, smh. Maybe with your research you'll find out more about why she thought they were in a relationship. It will be interesting to read your take on the supposedly relationship she said they had and the different perspectives of Bill, Frank, and Nita. I especially want to see how Michael and Nita work through the problems that I'm sure Tatiana will cause between them in their relationship.
Author's Response:
HEY Vicki! :) Miss you a lot girl! How are you!? I'm really sorry for my late response. Life's been hectic. Thank you sooo much for your awesome review as always!! Medical school is killing me! #hehe :P How am I doing?! Still alive dont worry :P
Yes exactly! I have so many plans for them ;) I just wish I can finish this story soon and not leave you guys hanging for 4 or 5 months. I'm really sorry about that.
Tatiana is my favortie kind of crazy haha ;) You will see more of her. Yes, that 'relationship' as she had always said, you will see more of it ;) I'm update as soon as I can :D Stay tuned. <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2017 08:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
Oh my God, girl I missed you! It's been so long but I'm happy you're back!
I liked this update, a lot, also with adding Tatiana's perspective added an extra element, that I can't wait to dig deeper into.
That's the hideout?!? I never knew! No way that's a condo, though. That's a straight-up house, lol. It's still a beautiful place...
Author's Response:
Hi Miya :) Girl thanks so much! Its SO good to see you all back! Tatiana! Ah! Now thats what we are looking for! Drama and all! I can't wait to start working on it myself! :P And yes, thats the hideout condo! IKR? That place is like a home. A warm home. That got me thinking. Michael liked places like palaces! And this was simple and elegant! I'll update as soon as I can! :D Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2017 08:06 am Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Just wow! I have read this much so far and I am speechless how intensely captivating this is. Just W O. W!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Gigi :) I really appreciate it! Your words encourage me to work on it! :D Please let me know what you think! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:03 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Love it so far
Author's Response:
Hey Gigi :) Thank you girl! :D Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2017 01:47 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 33: The Way You Make Me Feel ♥
OMG, welcome back. I've missed you. I've just re read this whole story for the 5th time. I can't wait for the next update. Please update ASAP is been sooooo long. Michael & Nita is one of my favorite couples.
Dangerous the girl is so Dangerous and that is Tatiana. She better back the hell up. We all want to be Michael's girl, I know I wish I were but, he is not available. As for Michael I know he adores Nita but, he better behave and tone down his flirty ways so Ms.Thing don't think he is feeling her.
I love your chapters cause they are long and very detail. I'll be honest I enjoy very much the love scenes woooo they are spicy, sexy, sensual and loving.
This is best thing that happend today after finally getting my power back on after 3days due to hurracaine Irma. I'm in Orlando, FL
Welcome Back and I can't wait for next chapter. All 4 L.O.V.E..Lummi 🤗💞
Author's Response:
Hey Lummi :) Thank you so much! 5th time! Wow! People like you keep me going, thanks girl! True. But Michael was famously known as a flirt, whether he was in a relationship or not :P Your words made my day! Thanks again! :D Oh I'm so sorry. I hope you are alright. I'll update as soon as I can. Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 13, 2017 11:09 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I didn't know you posted this one here, I was reading on another site, but is has since closed, sadly as many of the forums have. Looking forward to starting back from the beginning!
BTW I was mjj4everinourhearts on the other forum!
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy! :) Happy Reading! And thank you so much for your kind comment! I know, its sad that most of the websites are closing. But don't worry, you can download this story as a pdf from this website and I got a back up of this story as well. Oh I remember you! :D Nice to see you here girl! Lots of love <3 xx