Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

😳 you just made my day with this!!! I just started reading a few weeks ago...haven't finished reading yet. But I am glad you've updated. I'm loving it so far. I am currently on the road and look forward to catching up! Thanks! 

Author's Response:

Hi there Gabby! :) Wow you got a story yourself, I'm dying to check it out! Thanks so much girl! That really means a lot to me! Please let me know what you think! :D I have noticed that half of Chapter 8 had disappeared so I have uploaded its other half. Do check it out if you have missed it! :P Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Spectrum Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 02:17 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

I saw you responded to a review submitted this year in March, I got so happy - thought this profile and story was abandoned and I was the only one coming back to it! 

I love this story, it's passionate and true to Michael's character and I see a lot of myself in Nita. 

Ill be right here to follow up on anything new. 

If you have stories on wattpad, please let us know! 

Xoxox

 

Author's Response:

Hi there, Spectrum :) First of all I'm sorry for the late reply! Thank you so much! You have no idea how much your words mean to me! I'm continuing to write only because of encouraging words like yours :D I don't currently have anything on wattpad, I mean finishing this story is hard enough for me right now. But I sure have thought about it, and will let you know ;) Lots of love! <3 xx

Reviewer: HERstory Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2016 01:22 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

I knew Nita could not have cheated on Michael. She would have to be crazy to do that! I am glad both her and Michael have finally admitted their true feelings. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank for your comment :) More to come. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: HERstory Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 03:05 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥

I love that you are using song lyrics as dialogue. It's a great concept to imagine what could have inspired the lyrics for "Dirty Diana" and " The way you make me feel". This story keeps getting more and more interesting.

Author's Response:

Haha! At first I wasn't sure of using them right. But then it happened on it itself :) Thanks so much for kind review! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: HERstory Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2016 06:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 3: Midnight Storms ♥

I love the sexy way you are portraying Michael in this story. Showing the manly side of him over the child like side that is more often used to describe him. In life he was definitely shy and reserved, but in his music there was bold and deeply sensual man. I keep thinking of his song "Give in to me" while I am reading this. I am interested to read more.

Author's Response:

I researched as much as I could. He couldn't have been the same way 24 hrs right? He lived as a man and to his closest people he was constrastingly different than when he was before the cameras... I really really glad you liked it!! :D Yep, you are absolutely right! Only a sensual and powerful man could have written give in to me or dirty diana and probably every other song he wrote :) Thanks for you review! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2015 10:34 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥

Yay I finally caught up!!

This is a wellwritten fic..however I had my doubts about Michael's relationship with Nita and couldn't help but think it wasn't healthy..I mean it seemed like they couldn't really get along well. and reading his reaction to the news about his lupus I was dumbfounded..many a times I think of how proud of him I am for handling it so well but you know what? a fraction of what he went through is enough to make anyone  go insane and so it seems like a way he would have reacted if he wasn't as stoic..so very realistic. There were times he was being such a stubborn idiot but the part where you asked whether to be on his side or Nita's side, chapter 30 I think it was, I saw his point of view and understood it..felt both him and Nita were wrong in the sense that she can't accuse him of cheating and expect him not to react yet he should remember she forgave him when he accused her and when she got hit I was like "oh no this can't be happening!" since their last words would have been harsh words if she had died..I am so happy she made it!!

Also like to point out that you wrote Mike's height as 5'10 in early chapters (which was how tall I thought he was although autopsy and '89 driver's license, Karen Faye say otherwise and she would know) and you have 5'11 in chapter 28 or 29. Was it a typo or you meant to make a correction of the earlier one you had listed?

I hope your progress on chapter 33 is coming on well and you get a nice breather during spring break! <3

Author's Response:

Hey Christy, I'm so sorry for the late response, well you know me ;) 

Thank you!!! It can't possibly be. She's after all in love with Michael Jackson. And we all know there's a dark side in everyone's life. It's inevitable, no matter who we are. The patients who go through this kind of transformation are never okay with it. They suffer more than the dying ones because these people have to live with it for the rest of their lives and just simply accept it whether they like it or not. I have witnessed their reactions so many times before when the news's delivered to them and I used it to generate the scene, hope I did the best I could. Michael was a normal human being. And his every step was watched 24 hours a day. Always under the media's scrutiny. He must have gone through more pains than everone else must have but he kept that all in between his four walls and came out with his ever-present smile, that's what we are pround of, arent we? :) I completely agree with you. I would be out of my mind if I woke up one day like that when I had done nothing wrong. And the media bullied him till his last breath, yet he showed up with that smile :) HAHA!! You're right. I know all the hitting was a bit too dramatic but I had to express in some way about how much they love each other despite all the odds. Sometimes, it's just that way. We don't see myself being with someone, who's just not our type, for the rest of our life but we only feel 'that' certain kind of spark with them, it's so confusing and mystifying. Nita and Michael's relationship is of that kind.

LOL. I'll check into it. I got a perceptive reader :) I'm pretty sure it must be something I just did not pay much attention to, because he's said to be 5'10 in some places and 5'11 in some, but I'll edit it, thank you for letting me know :D

My god, that chapter is half-completed and it's been that way for the past couple of months, and I apologize again, but school is getting in the way and I swear I haven't even had a break since Christmas and it's SO DAMN ANNOYING! But I'll work on it now and try to finish it asap. I have to complete this stoy at least in 2015 *fingers crossed* :P

Thanks so much for the review hun, you had pointed out my mistakes, honestly told what you felt and those are the reviews I appreciate the most!!! :D Lots of love <3 xx Have a wonderful day!

****Oh P.S You are my 500th reviewer!!! XD****

 

 

Reviewer: MissMichelleJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2015 07:14 am Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥

Hey. 
Why don't you update anymore? I was soooooooo excited because I thought you'll continue with this. And now I am waiting for weeks and  nothing yet :'( I love this one, it's my favourite!! 

Author's Response:

Hey Michelle :) 

So sorry girl :/ Ah, I'm back to my 'sorry' mode. :P Seriously though, I have completed half of the chapter, I'll update it ASAP! I'm continuing with this don't worry about that! And if I want to finish at least this year then I need to work! Thanks so much hun! I'll update soon! :D Lot's of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: fjoseph Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2015 06:56 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥

great story , i like it!! is that the end?  i hope not, i want to know what happen next. great job !!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

HI there, Fleurette :) Unique name! Thank you so much! Oh no, its far from the end :P I'm working on the update, it should be up as soon as it's ready! Thanks so damn much, for leaving your review! :D It means so much to me! Have a wonderful day! Lots of love your way <3 xx