[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2019 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 2: A Narrow Escape
I just read the first two chapters and I'm hooked! :D Very well written and I like the additional challenge of Serena being homeless - makes for such an interesting contrast compared to Michaels usual world. I'm very much looking forward to reading the next few chapters! :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 49
I had a feeling she knew Karen somehow. There's no way it's a coincidence!
Yes, she should reply! I don't know what "it" is, but I can't wait for her sister and Karen to get what's really coming to them!!
Author's Response:
Hah yeah her sister and Karen definitely seem like the kind to hang around together
Hm so looks like next chapter Seena will be doing some snooping >:) Thanks for the review!! xox
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2013 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 49
I bet she's talking about getting the D from Michael.
Serena should pose as Vicky and investigate. Then she needs to tell Michael, and proceed to beat the tan off her sister's skanky bleached hide. In that order.
Author's Response:
omg the d lol
well who doesn't want Michael's d, you know what I mean? ;)
haha thanks I'll keep your order in mind when I write the next chapter :P lol
Thanks for the review! xoxo <3
Date: Sep 12, 2013 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 49
She needs to reply and find out what the hell is goin on. And once she does, she needs to beat Vicky's trifling ass! I just can't. That's probably the same Karen Fake we all know and hate. With her amateur makeup artists skill havin ass. Serena needs to stop being so damn nice and read Vicky her damn rights! She most definitely needs to reply to that email AND tell Michael. Restraining orders, gag orders, etc and the whole nine need to be put forth immediately. Along with some ass beatings.
Author's Response:
Lol someone really doesn't like Karen! Haha yeah I guess Serena should stop being so nice, or else Vicky will get even worse. haha thanks for the review! love xoxo :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 11:40 am Title: Chapter 48
Oh for fucks sake, Michael! TELL HER!! She'd be a whole lot more stressed finding out some other way! Vicky needs to keep her stank ass to herself and lay off Michael!!
I would LOVE to see a pic of what Vicky looks like. I'm very curious to know who you have in mind playing her...she is ghetto as hell! LOL
Author's Response:
LOL!
I envisioned her something like this...
You know, fake-looking, too much makeup, bleached hair, fake hair, too much skin showing... the kind of girl who essentially look like she's trying too hard
Thanks for your review! <3 love
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 48
I can understand Michael not wanting to cause a scene while they are staying there, but he needs to tell Serena what her sister did as soon as they leave. She needs to know that Vicky is not to be trusted otherwise she'll invite her over to Neverland. I'm not convinced that all she wants is to seduce Michael. She'll probably rifle through his drawers, steal his dirty underwear, and auction it off on eBay after telling the tabloids she slept with him. Or she'll set up a camera in their bedroom and make a sex tape of him and Serena. There is NO WAY that bitch should be allowed within 50 feet of the front gate. I hope Michael realizes that by telling her the truth he'll be protecting Serena more than if he remains silent.
Author's Response:
That's a good idea- telling her once they leave. And you caught onto my plan, she's definitely not just after Michael, but rather the money she could get :(
Thanks for the review! xoxoxo
Date: Sep 07, 2013 10:36 am Title: Chapter 48
Yeah I'm bout to hop through this screen and slap this bitch. She is beyond trifling, thirsty, all of the above. Girl that man don't want you nor is he thinking about your lame, attention whoring ass. I definitely don't like or trust her. And I wish Serena would slap the piss outta her. In fact, I think Michael needs to tell Serena what happened. He definitely should not keep this from her! She needs to know because that will for sure seal the fate on her relationship with that little cheap slut.
Author's Response:
I know! desperate! but lol he doesn't want to stress her out. Theyre leaving the next morning anyway, so he wont see Vicky again, or so he thinks :P Thanks for your review!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2013 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 47
Yeah....Little Miss Vicky is feeding information to tabloids or something. That bitch is shady as fuck!! >;(
Author's Response:
She's definitely up to something! lol! xo
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2013 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 47
Dear Vicky,
Author's Response:
omg lol! I'm going to print this off and give it to someone in real life haha (as a joke of course) hahahah
Date: Sep 06, 2013 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 47
Like I said before, I don't like Vicky and I don't trust her. And hell no she's not coming to visit Michael and Serena, let alone stay with them. No ma'am. What is she, talkin to tabloids and all that? Nah. I'm not feeling her at all and I actually can't wait til they leave. I hope Michael stays away from her. And if she gets outta line, Serena needs to put her ass back in check. She's overstepping her damn boundaries already.
Author's Response:
Your feelings are correct- something is up with Vicky. I'm working on the next chapter and it just makes me dislike her as a character even more. Serena better be careful! Thanks for your review :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2013 05:44 am Title: Chapter 46
I smell bullshit!!
Author's Response:
Lol!!! xoxo
Date: Sep 05, 2013 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 46
She should've told her sister none of her nosey ass business!!! Why the fuck is she askin questions about things that are not of concern to her? I don't like her already. I actually wish Michael weren't going. He's only going because he's trying still so hard to mark his territory like its gonna erase the fact that she's carrying someone else's baby. Speaking of which, she definitely needs NOT tell her family that she's pregnant. Hell no chile. In fact she doesn't need to tell them any of her business. I feel like she's said too much already. Her and Michael's relationship, her love life, etc is totally off limits to her "family". They must want something. And I hope it isn't money.
Author's Response:
Lol yeah but she didn't want to be flat out rude! lol we'll see how it goes at the reunion
and omg no that would be the worst idea ever to tell them she's pregnant! especially since it's not Michael's!
Thanks for your review love! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox <3
Date: Sep 04, 2013 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 45
Lol yes it's very safe and I hear it even better. I just know it'll be a bit weird at first tho because she's pregnant by someone else. Lol
Author's Response:
Yeah haha seems weird. For some reason I thought for a second it might be unsafe because the man in that movie Knocked Up like was afraid of hurting this pregnant girl's baby during sex. Then again, it was a really stupid movie haha so figures it was wrong! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 45
LOL...a water balloon fight?? I was way off...MJ works in mysterious ways
Author's Response:
I laughed when I found that out! Gosh, it sounds like such a love song, and it's about a water balloon fight. Interesting...
Lots of love xoxo!
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 45
They're so cute!
Michael was marking his territory I see......
How is the media going to react when they find out she is pregnant? They're gonna think it's Michael's kid. This will only torture him more.
Poor Michael, Karma really did a number on his ass LOL.
Author's Response:
Ahh I know, Michael's adorable! Ugh lucky Serena
Yeaah it'll definitely be a big mess once the news gets out... I feel bad for Mike, but I guess it's what he gets! Thanks for reviewing! LOVE xo