Date: Sep 04, 2013 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 45
Awwwww this was so cute!!!! Lol at his overprotective ass. That man will do anything he can to prove to the media that Brett isn't her man anymore. Lol. They had a really nice date though.. But I am wondering. We all know she's pregnant and Brett is the dad but she's in a relationship with Michael.. Are they gonna be having sex? Lol I'm just curious to see how that would pan out.
Author's Response:
Yeah, wait, is it unsafe to have sex when pregnant? (I've never been pregnant ha so I don't know)
Ok let's just pretend it is safe. Mmm I guess it would be kinda weird though to have sex with someone who's pregnant from having sex with another man..
Ugh whatever. I'll see, maybe Michael will be a bit jealous?
But thanks for your review, and lots of love to you!! xo :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2013 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 45
Aww, that was such a sweet chapter! And Speechless is actually one of my favorites! <3
Author's Response:
Me too! It's such a beautiful song... I love the harmonies, and especially the a capella parts <3
Thanks! lots of love xo
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 44
YAY! I'm glad they talked about it and changed their arrangement! And the L word has come back into play! <3
Author's Response:
ahhh yeah the l word! My favourite word haha :)
Thanks for the review! <3 xox
Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 44
I love Michael's jealousy! Lol. He's gettin a lil big for her britches with this whole "I wouldn't have approved of it" business. Selena is a grown woman and this is NOT his child. Anyway, she's gonna stay at Neverland during her entire pregnancy? Oh lawd. That's gonna be really a mess because I can see that Michael is gonna get attached to that baby and love Serena being pregnant and fantasizing about that being his child he's carrying, and it's gonna be a harsh reality when the baby comes because Brett is the father. I am curious to see how it will pan out. But I am here for Michael's jealousy though. Lol. And awww at his insecurities comin through. Is he really that scared to lose Selena to Brett?
Author's Response:
Omg I know imagining Michael jealous is so cute! Psht that probably sounds bad but ugh he's so protective and aww
Yeah he'll probably get attached, and then even more jealousy. poor mike :(
Thanks for your review love! xox
Date: Sep 02, 2013 10:37 am Title: Chapter 43
And I don't think she needs to be living with Brett either.. That's a bit much. In fact, the while situation is a bit much and her living with him is only going to complicate things. She needs to get her own place. She can't be with Michael and live with Brett. That's just not wise IMO.
Author's Response:
I know... lots of other people have been saying that. I'll fix it- somehow haha. Thanks for your review! xox
Date: Sep 02, 2013 10:34 am Title: Chapter 43
Lol at Michael's thoughts and him being a crybaby!!! It was just a wee bit funny. Not gonna lie. It is the ultimate karma I must say. He's gonna have to be strong if he really wants to be with Serena. That's really all there is to it. He's still gotta prove himself anyway. This will be a huge test for him and his feelings for her. So far Brett is taking it really well. Michael is foolish to think that man wouldn't want his child. That's selfishness talking. Anyway, Michael is gonna have to deal. He claims he wants her so bad, well now she's come with baggage. He's gonna have to man up or leave her alone.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2013 09:11 am Title: Chapter 43
Well this is certainly a test for Michael. Hopefully he can handle it!
I can see why she would want to keep her relationship with Michael secret for now but this whole 'living with Brett' thing is kind of iffy. I dont see how she can live with Brett if she wants to be with Michael. Maybe for extra help when the baby is really little but the child is going to have to eventually split time between the two parents. May as well get the kid used to it before he/she can form memories of mom/dad 'splitting up.' Also I'm sure that if she were living in a separate place both with or without Michael that Brett would be welcome over there anytime. Also, is she staying there only after the baby is born or while she is pregnant too? Because that's a long time!
I'm starting to feel bad for Michael now. Just a bit..........
Author's Response:
Mm yeah I'm kind of regretting writing that now. And actually, now that I'm reading what you said, I did not think this through very well at all (oh no). She probably won't want to live with him for like eighteen years until the baby will be old enough to handle them splitting up. Ugh I need to figure something out :S
And I guess she won't be staying there while she's pregnant, no point really. I'll make her rent an apartment or something haha
I know! poor mikey :( Omg I would KILLLL if I was with someone and they were fathering someone else's kid UGH
Thanks for your review! xoxox
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2013 09:10 am Title: Chapter 43
As much as Michael deserves to feel how she felt, I think the way Serena and Brett want to go about handling the situation in the public eye is wrong. :(
Author's Response:
Ahh! But what should they do? I don't know, it's quite a situation haha
Thanks for your review! love xox
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2013 11:54 am Title: Chapter 42
CONTINUEEEEEEE PLEASE xD
Author's Response:
Ahaa sorry, I know I'm so slow a updating this one >.< I'll put a new chapter soon, I promise! xox
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 42
I don't actually feel bad for Michael at all, not even the slightest bit.....am I a cruel person? Who I really feel bad for is Brett. Brett seems like the nicest guy in the world and Serena didn't even have the decency to tell him about his impending fatherhood before she told Michael, the man she left him at the altar for. Brett has every right to be hurt and pissed off yet he is taking it in stride, so Michael had better suck it up and fast. I'm all for Serena and Michael being together but he is not the victim in this situation and never has been.
Author's Response:
Really? Not even a little bit bad? Although what you say is very true, and I actually never really thought of it that way. I always kind of think of Brett as like a more minor character so WHO CARES BOUT HIM but now that he'll have a larger role in the story, I never thought of how he feels... Yeah I guess Michael should'nt feel so sorry for himself!
Thanks for your review and your refreshing point of view (it rhymes ;))!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 42
Haha, you're note about payback for sleeping with Karen makes me feel a bit better. But I still feel bad for him. :p
Author's Response:
I know, me too!!! I feel like a cruel author for this :P But I will make sure he is rewarded if he's patient
Thanks for your review!! LOVE
Date: Aug 27, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 42
Wow.. Just wow. Shit is about to get real! Brett and Serena are having a baby together. Michael is seething. I just want him to have an outburst so Serena can check him and throw that Karen catastrophe in his damn face!!!! Karma has come back 10 fold for Michael. The jealousy is gonna be so entertaining. Lol
Author's Response:
I know!! Hee hee I'm glad I thought of this, because I find it so cute to think of jealous Mike (as bad as it is for me to say..) But really, I'm sure he and Serena will stick through it, so it's not too cruel of me :P
Thanks for your review! <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 41
...or not. :p
I'm glad Michael is being understanding about the situation.
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 40
She should've said she MIGHT be pregnant. Stress can for sure do that to you as well...
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 39
I'm glad we didn't have to wait long for him to wake up.