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Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 38

It's been so long since I read the last chapter and I've been trying to get caught up with all my favorites. Easily reminded why I love your story so much! But this chapter was so sad. :(



Author's Response:

Haha I know, I stopped updating for a while too, but now I am back! And thank you!

It was sad, but it gets better, you'll see ;)

Thanks for your lovely reviews! xox

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 41

KARMA! That's what Michael gets for banging that slut Karen all those years ago.....

Not sure that I'll totally believe it until she gets the blood test results back. But it isn't the end of the world and I think it will get easier for Michael over time not more difficult. She isn't getting back with Brett, and even though Michael isn't the biological father I'm sure he will grow attached to the child as if he were. Brett seems like a nice person so I doubt he will cause problems or have territorality issues. I can understand Michael's initial reaction of being jealous, but he should remember he has no reason to feel threatened by this information. Selena left Brett for him, and she wouldn't have been with Brett in the first place if Michael hadn't fucked up.

And if she turns out not to be pregnant after all, at least Michael will be one step closer to proving himself. 



Author's Response:

Haha what goes around comes around. Thank God Karen didn't get pregnant or anything ugh. Actually now that I think of it that would have been a really good plot twist..

Michael will definitely become attached to the child, he loves kids! <3 And what you say is very true, it's kind of Michael's own fault for screwing it up :/

Thanks for your review! <3



Author's Response:

Haha what goes around comes around. Thank God Karen didn't get pregnant or anything ugh. Actually now that I think of it that would have been a really good plot twist..

Michael will definitely become attached to the child, he loves kids! <3 And what you say is very true, it's kind of Michael's own fault for screwing it up :/

Thanks for your review! <3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 41

Wow.. She's pregnant?! I still say she needs to see a doctor, it can be a false positive. This is really somethin though if she is. Brett will most definitely stay in the picture though. Michael may be trying to cope now but when this baby comes and him and Selena start to resemble a little family, Michael won't be happy. He's gonna feel threatened and left out because Brett has a child with her and he doesn't. Brett will forever be connected to her now.. Wow. Michael can't compete with that. But I think deep down he's gonna try.. 



Author's Response:

Indeed he will! It sucks a lot for Michael though, being left out and all :(  Well, hopefully their relationship will survive 

Thanks for reviewing! xoxox

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 12:25 am Title: Chapter 40

Ha!!! That would make things very interesting if she were pregnant. Michael would be a jealous wreck and that would be the ultimate karma! I don't think she is but it's gonna be fun letting Michael go through the various emotions of her believing she is. Lol. Hey, what can I say? He's still on my shit list for cheating on her and being an asshole so karma is a biotch Michael!! And how dare he ask her if she had sex with her fiancée? Duh! Of course she did. The fact that she thinks she's preggers definitely cements that. Michael has no right to feel any kind of way about it since she caught him in bed with that damaged haired, dry desert thirsty ass Karen. Ugh! Anyway, lets see how Michael reacts to this news. But I don't think she's pregnant. 



Author's Response:

Ooh, still a little sore about Karen, I see :P

And yeah, this is pretty much THE ULTIMATE TEST for Michael, I'm not sure yet though if it would be better yet to make her pregnant or not tbh

Thank you for the review! I love reading yours, you're always pretty intense! hahah xoxo

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 40

Oh boy. She could be, but she won't know for sure until she takes a test. Her being pregnant with someone else's kid, if she is, shouldn't hurt their relationship but in all honesty it probably will. I don't know, that's a lot to take in; hope you can update soon. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

It'll definitely  be interesting! Thank you, I plan on updating later today :) xox

Reviewer: rahelicious Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 11:47 am Title: Chapter 39

PLEASE CONTINUE!! THIS STORY ARE AMAZING!

Author's Response:

Ah thank you!! I am planning on continuing, just taking a little break to get some new ideas :) Don't worry, you will see more of it! Lots of LOVE xox

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 39

Brett is such a sweetheart! I actually hate that she didn't marry him, just a little bit. As usual, Michael has it so easy. He damn near kills himself just so Serena can come to him. Smh that is a sore loser move Michael. And he could've paid the ultimate price and Serena would never be with him then. I really hope she makes him prove himself to her. He's not off the hook yet. I hope Serena and Brett will still be friends. At least he didn't cheat on her with an amateur, lousy, peroxide headed make up artist. Ugh. I'm still mad about that. I hope Serena brings it up again too. 



Author's Response:

I know, I think Brett and Serena would've been a good couple, if it weren't for Michael haha. And don't worry, he'll prove himself! This incident didn't put them back together for good, now he has to work for it :p xoxo

Reviewer: mjsminipyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2013 08:16 am Title: Chapter 39

That was a beautiful chapter. (Almost had me crying) I'm glad Serena and Michael are back together. I did feel a bit sorry for Brett, but I'm sure he'll find his significant other. Great job!!!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, Brett's a good guy, he'll find someone :) xoxo

Reviewer: MJIsGoneButNeverForgotten Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 38

This is so good! Update fast! I love it so damn much!



Author's Response:

Haha thanks! Just updated :) xox

Reviewer: MJIsGoneButNeverForgotten Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 38

This is so good! Update fast! I love it so damn much!

Reviewer: MJIsGoneButNeverForgotten Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 38

This is so good! Update fast! I love it so damn much!

Reviewer: mjsminipyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 06:16 am Title: Chapter 38

Drama!!!!!!! Serena the run away bride. I'm surprised the media didn't follow her when she was driving to the hospital. Damn it Michael! You just had to od! I hope he's ok. Thank you so much for updating and yes, I enjoyed it! :)

Author's Response:

Lol yeah, as I was writing I was thinking there should've been paparazzi following her, but I thought it would complicate things too much so  I just noted that people stared at her or whatever. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2013 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 38

Wow. This is pure chaos. Somehow I knew somethin would happen though. What was Michael thinking? Was he purposely trying to overdose? Smh. 



Author's Response:

Of course, something had to happen! Gosh, even I was mad Serena was about to marry Brett, and I'm the one who made it happen hahah. 

Reviewer: marieland_ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2013 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 38

I'm speechless. Gosh you never disappoint me.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad! I am a fan of drama, you see...

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 37

Holy shit...she's got to leave this guy and get back with Michael! No other way around it girl - she has to. They've been through an incredible journey together, it would be criminal to keep them apart any longer.

 

She should let him back into her life, make him prove how much he loves her and woo her all over again. Oh my God hurry up and update!!!



Author's Response:

Haha we'll see... ;) Most stories have happy endings

And I just updated tonight, (sorry for the wait). Thanks for the review! xoxo

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