[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2012 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG Hun...what an update ....I feel so bad for Vivian....I wonder if he truly wanted to keep her and if it was his plan like she had suggested...I guess I will find out soon enough lol lol..oh and I wanted to tell u I loved the photo u had before of the blonde but I like the dark headed girl so much better she meshes so well into the picture in the story...I love it Hun and I can't wait to see what happens next:-)
Author's Response: Yeah I know! There are so many questions to be answered. And it was real tough work getting this chapter together! The more mystery in it the harder it gets to write it! *sigh.....* And yeah, even I thought that a brunette would go much better with Michael than the blonde. And Nina Dobrev fits the part perfectly!!! She has that vibe in her. Wish me luck for chapter 7! Much L.O.V.E. xoxo
Date: Nov 27, 2012 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
With every chapter you write, I learn to love this story more and more than I already do!
Master Jackson is SO intriguing. We can all indentify in Vivian whe she's eager to know more about his paranormal abilities. And not only! Why has he become immortal? How? Why did he choose Vivian? I'm sure it was him who intentionally left the necklace in there so that Vivian could spot it. And we all do know what happened when it fell into the fire; it returned right in Vivian's hands! I'm sure Master Jackson has full power over it, so it was all because of him once again.
He denies it and maybe has the right to do so. But we'll find the truth right?? haha!
Giiiiiiirl, I love you! You're great, as always! <3333333
Author's Response: I'm so glad you girls like thia chapter becuase writing it completely drained me!!! It was so hard to get all those little details right! It was maddening! And I was really frustrated with my progress cause I havent even started on chapter 7!!!! Le sigh.......And I know too many questions to be answered! Way too many! ! And figuring out the right approach to solving every mystery is what's killing me! And I just love portraying Michael as a complex character!!!! Hee hee hee. Thanks for the review darling as always! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Nov 24, 2012 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!! I can't wait for more updates. :)
Author's Response: Aww... thank you darling... and thank you for the review! I'm so happy you like my story. Chapter 6 underway! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2012 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. That was interesting. I really love this story. It's unique and intriguing. I wonder what Master Jackson is. And what will they do with her?
Author's Response: Oh I'm relieved! I was worried this didnt get good reception as much as my other stories. Thank you for convincing me otherwise. Your reviews mean a lot to me. I'm working on chapter 6 now. Would be uploading real soon! Thank you for reviewing. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2012 04:44 am Title: Chapter 5
THIS IS GREAT! please do continue this. Every story you write is interesting and awesome and you get better every new story you start :) you're a fabulously amazing writer, you should write a book in real life, heaps of them, seriously. They would become hits, I would buy it myself. I think your talent deserves to go beyond fanfiction :D
Author's Response: Aww..... really???? I am considering writing as a serious profession. And yiu guys motivated me into it even more! I just L.O.V.E. my MJfam! You guys are the best!!! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Damn i love this :D
Author's Response: Hey darling!!! Thanks for the reviews! I'm always excited to hear from a new reader. Glad you are enjoying this story! I really appreciate it that you took the time to read rate and review it. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
What happened?? D: Michael is up to something...
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am enjoying this :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting :) I like it
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh PLEASE!!! UPDATE GIRL!! I'm dying to know what happens next!! Ugh!! I love this story....
Cross my fingers that EVENTUALLY these two fall in love.... ((: Lol
Author's Response: Lol isnt that always how the story goes? I know you want me to update and I've been getting rave reviews but the thing is not many people are into reading this story. You saw the statistics? Makes me sigh everytime I see it low down below numbers. So I'm afraid you'll have to wait. Sorry. Thank you for the review darling. I really appreciate that you've taken a liking to my story. Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow hun what an update I loved it...I am glad Michael got Lisa to stop...I wonder what he thought about the necklace and will he rip it from her neck I hope they dont hurt her to bad .... thanks hun I cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved this update too! I had the time of my life writing it!!! Oh yeah, the necklace holds a mystery! But of course, that is nowhere near chapter 6! Lol wish me luck writing it! Thank you so much for your regular string of updates! I don't know what I'd do without reviewers like you! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your welcome. That's awesome. I watched an ghost show and the woman bought an souvenir that was an heirloom to the titanic and the ghost of the titanic started haunting her. It got bad til she returned it and the ghost stopped haunting her. I don't know if it happens in real life that's why i said it's my opinion to be honest. What's the vampire diaries? I never seen it. Is it good? I finally seen twilight saga new moon and i loved it. :) i can't wait to see more vampire movies. I can't wait for chapter 6. Update soon when u can. Much Love
Author's Response: Really? Is that true??? That is soooo freaking COOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!! Wow, who knew things like that really happen! The Vampire Diaries is one AMAZING TV show!!! They telecast it on Thursday on the CW. But you can catch the previous three season on Warner TV. Or else you can conviniently watch it online at OneTVshows.com And this is coming from someone who loves vampire but hates twilight saga. Sorry, but I honestly don't like that plot. It isn't my type. If you want to experience real vampires in movies, try An Interview With A Vampire, starring Brad Pitt, Tom Cruise, Antonio Bandares, and Kirsten Dunst. It's an old movie but it's simple AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! Wish me luck with chapter 6! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
This so chilling the bone and intense. When she bite Vivian will she turn into an vampire? Im an scaredy cat too. Lol i am new. My friend told me about this site and i checked it out. Im glad that i did it. I love to read. :) anyways i love how it goes into detail and greatly written. I love reading about Vampires and many things that involved Michael. Is Michael living or an ghost?
Author's Response: Aww... thank you thank you so much darling! Reviewers like you make my day!!! Love you for that!
No Vivian would not turn into a vampire from just one bite. Its more complicated business than that. Lets just say I researched a little into the matter. And hell yeah, I LOVE reading about vampires too! Vampire Diaries fan over here! Its all Michael and vampires in my life! Lol And no, Michael is not a ghost. If thats any relief! Lol thank you for your review once again! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! Chapter 5 is finally here! Hmm, you've left me with so many questions too! All I can say is, a fantastic, flawless chapter! I wonder what kind of immortal creature Michael is going to be, since you mentioned in the story that he isn't a vampire. I really thought he was going to be a vampire though! Lol, but that's what I LOVE about this story, it's full of suprises! :) On a side note though, Michael (in my opinion) totally looks like a vampire xD He could've totally have starred in a vampire movie! He would've been perfect! He's so handsome! ^.^
But anyway, I'll be on the lookout for chapter 6! I can't wait! Much love to you!
Author's Response: Hello love!!! Thank you once again for a wonderful review! I dont know what I'd do without my loyal reviewers!!! Trust me girl, no one would ever guess what happened to Michael. Just a hint, its a story dating back to 1692. And tell me about it! Michael totally does look like a vampire!!! I keep thinking about how great it would have been if he had a feature of his own starring as a vampire!!! There are some photos from the HIStory era that totally gives that vibe!!! I LOVE IT in him!!! *sigh.......* And I know he would have rocked the story as a vampire but there were too many Michael as vampire stories based on the Ghosts short film. So I wanred to try something different. But that doesnt mean I'm not currently writing one with him as a vampire! Lol lol lol lol Every time I rad vampire novels, my male vampire protagonist would always be Michael! Talk about obsession! Just started on chapter 6. This is one difficult plot to write! Wish me luck!!! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Nov 20, 2012 10:21 am Title: Chapter 5
I was longing for this chapter so bad! XD
Finally it is here... great, as always!! Pure emotion.
My head is full of questions that need to be answered... for example, now that Lisa bit her, will Vivian become a vampire too? And Master Jackson obviously already knows her name, in the shock of the moment Vivian didn't seem to notice it!
Michael is quite puzzling, gosh!! He's immortal... for now he behavead with unnexpected politeness but still, if he somewhat cares for Vivian why did he let Lisa bite her? It must be part of their plan or something... OMGGGG this story is so interesting and catchy!!! *-* You did an excellent work!! A great author knows how to extricate in various kinds of stories.
I really hope we won't have to wait too much for the next chapter *-* Are you inspired, hun?
THANK YOU for brightening my days with your wonderful stories! I love you!
Author's Response: Aww darling... you brighten my days with your wonderfullh warm and genuine reviews!!! A creator is nothing without an appreciator for the created!!! Writing chpater 6 at the moment. But honestly speaking, I've been out of it lately for sweet deception. You would have notoced that there have been no updates since November 1st! I feel so horrible when I see the statistics! Just a hint on ROMH: converting to a vampire is more complicated business than one bite in the neck. Speaking of complicated business, you have no idea what I go throught trying to build up Michael's character! Lol lol lol I want this character tonbe nothing like any paranormal creature you've ever read about before! Wish me luck with chapter 6!!! And sweet deception! Thank you for your review darling. Much L.O.V.E. fro m my heart to yours!!!