Date: Jan 30, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 1
Well, they are really trying to make a fresh start with their relationship as husband and wife. Good Job!
Date: Jan 30, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Get a nanny, please save your marriage. Sometime you have to save it by any means necessary. Not meaning too interference can and will destroy a relationship no matter how strong you think it is...
Date: Jan 30, 2016 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
They need to make time for each other...
Date: Feb 22, 2015 06:21 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
Even though my eyes are watering something terrible, in my head I'm clapping my hands off..because this was a beautiful story. :,((( now I'm crying
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2014 01:44 am Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
I dont even know where to start. I started reading from where I left off at chapter 20 around 10pm, its now 1:36am and I just got finished with the story. Omg I'm honestly in tears. Like this story was nothing short of perfection. I was really saddened once I know the allegation had come out. I already knew that was going to send them down a downward spiral. I know in Japan things weren't right but I didnt even connect the two. When you introduced the allegations I seriously screamed, I was surprised and saddened by all the events that took place following the allegations. I feel like Michael really wasnt fair to her, wanting her to be there but keeping her in the dark. When he just told her to leave I couldnt believe it, i was like no this cant be real. I was so saddened by how quickly they were willing to give up. I knew faith would bring them back together because they had a love that was extremely strong and they seriously couldnt live and properly function without each other. This story was wonderful, youre honestly one of the best writers on this site. I dont think I've ever felt this emotional after reading a story, amazing job.
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you so much! Your kind words really mean a lot. I hope I did Michael justice. I write for him, after all. I remember when he used to say that his love, his feelings were in his music...and I feel like my love and my feelings for him are all in my stories...if that makes sense.
Oh, if only I could rewrite history...*sigh*
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2014 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 33--F**k The Pain Away
I'm finally starting to catch up on this story and my lord was I missing out. I almost forgot what a masterpiece it is. Loving everything in this story, amazing job
Date: Jul 05, 2014 10:27 am Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
Soooooo Rocked Worlds 3 is out of the question right? lol wonderful story, hate to see it go
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2014 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 55--The End
I soooo did not want Michael to die in this story. I was hoping for a happier ending. Tears... As soon as I read the heading for this chapter and the first line I knew what was to come but as I kept reading I was still hoping that it wouldn't be.
I tilt my hat to you sis! Gemini_Gifts! SHE DID THAT!!! Brilliantly written story!
btw, I forgot to mention that I love the Keisha Devin character! She is the type of woman that I wish MJ could have had in his life. I hope she's in future stories.
L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2014 11:07 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
I'm so devastated. In the midst of all the fireworks going on at the moment outside of my house, here I am readng the ending to this story and I am extremely saddened. :(
I definitely was not expecting for it to end like this but then again, it has been in the back of my mind if you were going to take this route. I guess I wanted to imagine them living in a nice house in New Orleans away from the drama with their children. Sigh. But the ending is beautiful none the less.
This journey has been long and troubling but it still didn't take away the beauty of the love they have for each other. such a beautiful couple indeed and such beautiful children. You've done such an incredible job with this and I am looking forward to reading your next work of art.
Date: Jul 04, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
You fool. You trusting fool, Michael. You trusted far too much. I am hurt. I am hurt beyond words. You left your children. You left your Angel. This has me in tears. June 25th all over again. Thank you for gifting me with such a wonderful story. Now, I shall lay in a corner and sob in the fetal position. You are loved, Michael. And you are missed.
Date: Jul 04, 2014 10:46 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER!!!!
Des, I can't believe this. My poor Keisha and Mike!!
Love, the ending was beautiful. Though, a part of me may wonder about the in between years, you do an amazing job of quieting it and letting them rest peacefully. I've told you time and again that your writing is so passionate; it has a way of making the characters and each moment they endure timeless. That is how I know this story and its characters will always live on. Beautifull
I noticed that you published a new story. I happened to take your advice and found SD. Judging from the summary, I'm really hoping that this will be a continuation of Michael and Ebony. What I've already read of that story is breathtaking and I can't wait to see what you do with it. But lol if it's not, I know that I will love whatever you write just as much.
I am so excited for what's to come from you in future. Please do keep writing! We need writers like you in the mjfanfiction community. In my opinion, you're the ones who truly keep Michael's image and legacy alive for the following generations.
Again - Beautiful.
Jazz <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2014 10:25 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
I'm on the floor crying right now. Damn, the last chapter was beautiful. The epilogue hurt my heart. I so wanted them to have a happy ending and become old together...I'm glad they have those last few years together though, so that was a blessing. But ughhhh WHYYYYYYY!!!!
Ok *wipes tears* I'm so sad their story is over. This was/is my favorite MJ fiction story ever. So beautifully written. So real. I don't have the words to express how much I love this story. That last line though when he said "I'm your angel now.." oh my gosh!!! Whooo Lord Jesus that was so deep. Beautiful!!
Ok I should cheer up because you cookin up Family Values! Yay! (Have you decided on reviving Keisha and Michael for that, btw? ) I'm excited to read that...Then after that I Was Made to Love Her the epic love story may be continued :)
This story was filled with so much passion and real-ness...such a beautifully written story. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! *claps*
Date: Jul 04, 2014 09:29 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
You are one of the greatest writers on MJfiction! I just love Keisha & Michael's relationship. I would love to see different scenarios of their relationship like them meeting as professor & student etc., Hopes there is more Keisha & Michael stories!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! I'm about to post another one in a few...
Date: Jul 04, 2014 07:05 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
Oh my gosh that was beautiful. Brought me to tears. So sad to see this end. You're an amazing writer I love your work.