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Date: Oct 31, 2023 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 39

I was about to go to bed but then I saw there's a surprise so I have to keep reading XD

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 38

Ahh that's such a cute picture :3
CHOCOLATE THUNDER!!! AHHHHH!!!

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 35

"No I want to unwrap all my presents" is such a cute Michael thing to say
Ahhh feeding elephants is so cute
XD lol @ Jake's choice of wallpaper

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 33

Allison is low key my favorite character :D
OMG they did it on the couch X_x

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 32

His interactions with Alison are so precious. I love it!

Regarding your questions - I won't comment on the sequel vs long story as I think you've listed this as complete. But I just wanted to say that it's not becoming boring. I love seeing Michael fall in love :3

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 30

Ahhh this was so cute ;_;

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Date: Oct 31, 2023 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 28

his dad is scum >:(

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Date: Oct 30, 2023 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 26

aww :( this is very sad, but they're very cute at the end.

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'm tired enough that I can't read anymore, but I can't wait to come back and read more tomorrow (well, technically later today ;_;).

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 23

I typed this comment for a previous chapter I think, and I can't remember if I pasted it already or not. But just in case I didn't:

omg YES he gave him the Pretty Boy treatment :D I love it
This is the crossover I never knew I needed XD

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 22

HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO SLEEP WITH END NOTES LIKE THIS alskdfjaodsfjl;askdjfoaeijfladkjfaosdfjaljdk

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 21

lol the story is not boring! I do want them to have sex but I'm enjoying the story even without the sex for now.

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm so tired ;_; but every time I'm just like 'I will just read one more,' the chapter ends in such a way that I have to keep reading. T_T I have to be up in 5 hours.

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

I know that you said this was HIStory era but I can't help but imagine a young Thriller era Michael as I'm reading this. Either way, it's so precious and I am probably not going to sleep any time soon because I'm so interested to know what happens next ;_;

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Date: Oct 29, 2023 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

ahh, Lisa has the same concerns I did about them seeing a therapist…
When I read "Dr. Taylor" I was imagining Elizabeth lol
?? not her mentioning Jake while they're talking about sex

???? not the doctor prescribing them sex lol

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