Reviews For The Delivery Guy
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: April Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2013 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loving it guys! :) please keep going! I'm interested now lmao!



Author's Response: Aw thanks & we appreciate! :)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 9

i think thay will be together at the end but i think he will kill her at the too i don't know i love



Author's Response: Will see how this turns out in the end. & thanks Karoll84!

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh my god..he is fucking CRAY! 😱

I love this 😁



Author's Response: Ikr isn't he? XD

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 9

Voices in his head? See now he on that bullshit and Cynthia ain't so good herself i mean he did say he had a girlfriend so she could've respected that...those two crazy ass humans were meant to be.



Author's Response: LMAO you think there ment to be?? You got me dying here when you said that. Thanks 4 your review!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Good! It needs to get crazy. Cindy is a bitch for NO reason. Yes Michael is cray but at least he's honest. This funky bitch is in denial about who and what she really is. I hope Michael wears her ass out! Get her Mike!!! 



Author's Response: Woo yeah that's true he is honest & can't knock him 4 that either. Maybe he will change that little attitude of hers up. & thanks!

Reviewer: Blueprint Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

Why the hell is this girl so grumpy? Michael isn't all there but he still trying to be nice to her in his own way. What she got a death wish or something? She must don't know how sick enough he his to tick him off. She already ticked him off enough. Looks like she is in for it now cause she can't keep her mouth shut. I'm actually sort of siding with Michael on some things he should teach her not be such a bitchy person. I loved this update everytime you update i keep wanting more!!!! Haha

Author's Response: Yeah true i guess after such a bad night she takes it all out on the weird delivery guy. XD Don't worry you'll see how this goes. I just updated & thanks!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

Well damn, Michael thinks he owns her!

He's right about one thing; Cindy must be deluded to think Craig wouldnt stick up for his girlfriend over her. 

Oh gosh, it sounds like her punishment for being so difficult with him will be baaad, :P.

I can't wait for more Honey. XD , <33



Author's Response: Yea he sure does LOL yes Michael is right on certain things whenever he has a point. Yep she is in for it & maybe it could get better or worse. ;) xD just updated & thanks Girly! <3

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Lol more!!

 



Author's Response: Just updated LOL

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

ooh shit!!!!!! he about to get nasty!!!!!!!!! lol



Author's Response: Yep it is!!! LOL

Reviewer: MJsGirl345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 8 Oops xD

Love this!!!!! MOREEEEEEE MOREEEEEEEE MOREEE!! This Story is Kinda Funny, Lol Well The Last 2 Chapters Were!! ^__^ :P



Author's Response: LOOOL I just updated so i hope you enjoy this chapter & more 2 come soon! & thanks! :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 8 Oops xD

 More!!



Author's Response: just updated & thanks!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 05:42 am Title: Chapter 8 Oops xD

More story! More story!



Author's Response: Just updated & thanks!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 8 Oops xD

Yes i noticed you got the names mixed up. Don't worry it happens like that sometimes. Lol I really didn't pay attention though cause i was to distracted by this amazing plot.

Author's Response: Yeah that was a blooper xD

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 7

Give up Cynthia he got ya lol

This is getting better and better darling!

GO GO GO!

Author's Response: Lool yep & stay tuned! Thanks! XD

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 7

lol! Yeah, I'm already directing a movie, with home cameras. It's awesome, it's a mix of the 007 James Bond movies (Skyfall), Transformers and Taken (yeah I watch too many action movies cx ) & I'm also directing a horror movie. I star in both :)

I'm actually working on a script for this story to be a movie xD



Author's Response: Oh i see you could start off as an independent film maker & then work your way up to the big guys like we cravens which my favorite scary director lol & if you get with right management you stuff could be netflix cause i see a lot of good scary movies on netflix the independant film makers starts from there & works up to the big screens. I have seen this movie called the wisher or something like that it didn't come out in theaters but it was a popular & fivestar rated independant film I was like dang this directer my hit it big soon cause the storyline on down to characters was good. Hope to see your work get big in the future i wish you best on on that & i'll catch u on netflix to. LOL ima netflix fantic that's where i get the creepy idea's from i have something else creepy i wanna write but still not 2 sure about it. It maybe to lame :/ xD

You must login (register) to review.