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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 08:59 pm Title: Lily's sessions

Blah blah blah. I'm glad she saw a therapist but I'm honestly over Lily. This was just too much. She took somethin beautiful and made it annoying as hell. She's actin like this is her first time being a mother. This time she has a husband who is the father and many more resources than when she had Giselle. Whatever. I'm sure the boys will be cutie pies though. I'm ready to see Michael's sessions and how he will be parenting his two new baby boys. Lily is on my nerves again. 



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HAHAH! I'm sorry I made you hate Lily LOL! But I guess she is annoying and there is nothing we can do about it :) Next chapter soon! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: BitchesLoveMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 08:21 pm Title: Lily's sessions

I forgot about my little Giselle :/. I feel bad now >.<! I wanna know how she feels about the pregnancy too :]



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Thank you for the review and the rate BTW ;))

Reviewer: BitchesLoveMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 08:21 pm Title: Lily's sessions

I forgot about my little Giselle :/. I feel bad now >.<! I wanna know how she feels about the pregnancy too :]



Author's Response:

Don't worry there will be a "Gisele's session" too! ;)

Reviewer: BitchesLoveMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 06:51 pm Title: Lily's sessions

Twins :0??? I'm so happy for lily and Michael both :)!!! I think it would be good if they had a few sessions TOGETHER ;). Great update :]



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I'm going to think about it ;)

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2013 06:34 pm Title: Lily's sessions

OMG im so happy for lily and yes I need Michael sessions lets see what going on in his head too right.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the rate! Michael's sessions soon ;)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 06:58 am Title: Chapter 40

Yeah, see this is what happens when you are dragged into pregnancy. You start hating everything about it. My sympathy is solely with Lily, not Michael. Pregnancy is no cakewalk. 

In my head, I came up with two what if's that still don't end well:

I know people have a lot of opinions about abortion, but if she had known early enough, within the legal timeline, it could have been a better idea for her to let Michael know that she wanted an abortion before the mass of cells grew into a fetus. Scientifically there is a period where it's nothing but a pierced egg, a mass of cells that COULD be a fetus, so the worry of "hurting" anything is dispelled. 

Or she could choose to give it up for adoption. Although I think she'd grow too attached by then to let it go.

For either scenario, Michael would have hated that, because Michael wants 100000 children. Yet he knows nothing about what a woman has to sacrifice for another human life. So there's no real winning situation here.

Lily and Michael should have just NOT had sex. Pills and condoms are not 100% fullproof.

But now the deed is done, and if they can get counseling, maybe they can find an agreement, like--Michael has to take complete care of the baby for the first year all by himself. lol

Jesus I'm so pissed at Michae though! Ugh, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Lily loves children and she always wanted to have other children with Michael, so even though she doesn't feel ready, she never think about abortion because she thought she would be ok. I don' think adoption is an option for them LOL. You're right, Michael is already attached to the baby and she is probably going to be at some point. LOL, I swear, they should have stop having sex during the entire tour. LMAO! This idea sound good though. Michael will know how it feels to take care entirely of a baby!

I'll try to update soon, thank for teh review and the rate Love ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 40

This is ridiculous. It's not all Michael's fault. It takes two people to make a baby. Bitch please! If you didn't wanna get pregnant, your punk ass shoulda been takin those birth control pills religiously, and/or you shouldn't have been fucking. Period. I'm sick of this. It's not this fuckin serious. She should be glad she was able to conceive. Most people aren't so lucky. It doesn't matter if her tour wasn't over. Things happen for a reason. It's not all Michael's fault, she will not put this solely on him!!!! She should've kept her funky ass legs closed then. The baby didnt ask to be here but it's coming. It's time to stop being a selfish childish bitch and DEAL WITH IT. This shouldn't be a time for all this stupid ass dramatic shit and unnecessary fighting. This should be celebratory and happy. They're acting like somebody died. This shit is fucking STUPID! 



Author's Response:

True, true, true and true! This is almost the end of the story so things may get better... Or not ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 39

My whole comment got deleted cuz of my damn Internet! Pissed. Not even gonna rewrite all that. Bottom line, fuck everybody. Lily and Michael are grown and don't need approval or permission to do any damn thing in their lives. And if Lily's ungrateful ass didn't wanna get pregnant, she shouldn't have been having sex. Period. Totally over this. Fuck Eric and Rick's dead beat ass too. They don't need an elaborate ceremony just for everybody else's approval and commentary. Lily and Michael are grown. If people don't like it.. Too fuckin bad.'



Author's Response:

Oh shoot! LMAO @ your comment not to have sex if she did not want to get pregnant. Well, it happened so she has to dealt with it. They are adults and indeed they should do their own thing! From now on I think it's going to be Lily Michael Gisele and the unborn baby only :S

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 39

Work your blue ribbon, hunny!

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Now, for the story...

"if getting pregnant from Michael is what she wants, they should all agree and keep their hurtful word for themself."

that's the thing; she didn't want to get pregnant, and not s single word except for Joe's was hurtful. They're voicing the simple facts--I thought you were on the pill, it wasn't a choice, and they did keep them away from the wedding. What, Lily? WHAT?? Where is the pain? IN THE TRUTH? The only one who is unwelcoming of the baby, really, is YOU. How can we be happy for you when even YOU are not happy about it? 

As for Michael, I've had just about enough of him. Eric is so irrelevant, he's not even my problem. From the start, Michael wanted Lily pregnant. Now she's pregannt and all I hear is how happy Michael is about it. Jesus, her own PARENTS are aware of how unplanned and clearly unwanted this baby was MORE than Michael! He's such a fucking child and it pisses me the fuck off. 

An unwanted baby is traumatic for both the child and the mother. If Lily got some sort of Post-natal depression over it, I wouldn't be surprised. Michael will eventually have to deal with the consequences of this clearly unplanned, unwanted child. The two of them need to have talk this shit over ASAP.



Author's Response:

I will work my ribbon like that

 

I'm glad you noticed that. She was hurt about hearing the truth just like she got mad when Carmen told her she was wrong for hiding the truth to Michael about Gisele years ago. She can't take it. HAHAH! The only thing that matter for Michael is the baby now and Eirc... God, only Lily has crazy exes who still wants her back after 10 years. Oh my, if they don't talk about it like adults it might happened :S.

 

Thank you for the review, the rate and the AMAZING Tyra's gif babe ;)

Reviewer: BitchesLoveMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 39

I'm so proud of you for getting a blue ribbon! I don't know what it symbolizes, but that's still awesome. I'm glad lily finally told Michael that she was pregnant! I really hope she quits talking to Eric. I want it to be just her, Michael, Giselle, and the baby :) <3! I hope the family will realize how childish they're acting, and just support them and their decisions! Great update. Please update again SOON :)!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank youuuuuu! I don't even know either LMAO! I thought it was in relation of the views but no... Gotta find it out ;)

Yeah, it was about time she acts like a real adults. It's deffo going to be Lily, Mike and G since everybody is so pissed about her weddng and pregnancy! I'll try to update ASAP! Thank you for the review and the rate babe ;))

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 38

There's no way another man should know about your pregnancy before your fuckin HUSBAND. Lily needs to grow up and get off the bs! I swear she irks my nerves and her husband does at times too. Fuckin tell him you're pregnant!!! NOW! Smh. This isn't difficult. And wtf does Eric mean by he begs to differ??! There's nothin to be frustrated about. If you're having sex, there's ALWAYS a chance you will get pregnant. No birth control is 100% effective. Not tryna hear the bullshit. She better tell Michael she's pregnant.



Author's Response:

I have to admit that was twisted and so damn wrong! Thank you for the review and I promise it gets better :)

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2013 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 38

Lily and Michael are two very head strong stubborn people who have gone through a lot to be together but everytime they make a move forward they take three steps backwards and frankly that's getting very tiring. As adults they need to ge their shit together for themselves and their daugther. I would like to see this story progress past them keeping secrets and hurting each other every other chapter and start truly making progress in their commitment towards each other. Please let the story move forward with out them or someone else coming between them. 

In reality there will never be a "good time" to have a baby for these two so Lily's actions really disappoint me and she needs to stop being selfish but Michael needs to man up make Lily understand that things won't be the way wore in the past.



Author's Response:

Hello new reader! First of all I wanna thank you for favorite'd me, means a lot :')

Indeed, it seems like they are never going to be really happy. They need a happy time to breath! I hear you Vicki! I'm actually writing another chapter and you inspired me ;). See you soon ;))

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2013 11:31 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh, no....

no, no, no, no, no....

And I know there are some here who are wodnering why I'm so upset about her having a child, and the reason is this:

she's not fucking ready to have another child. all the shows and the stress and Michael and Eric's triflin' ass...she's just not ready. And she didn't want one anyway! Shit, this is fucked up.

And now she's gonna keep it from Michael till the end of the shows....a baby she doesn't even want yet while Michael wants it right now....

Oh lord....

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Author's Response:

First of all, lemme say I love you! Your review are always accurate and true! And your gifs make my day LMAO

I understand why you are upset about Lily's pregnancy; now there is no turning back they TRULY needs to act like adults because a little baby is here! I swear this is so fucked up, I have to do something about it. They need a real happy time! Michel finally got what he wanted!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2013 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 37

Its a good thing that it didnt turn ugly with Eric and itr was a simple friends having a good time. It would of gotten nasty if Mike woulda walked in on them or if she had slept with him. Which im SUPER glad she knew better than that. Things are good...for a sec lmao

Humm “Don’t take a birth control pill tomorrow, please” he whispers in Lily’s ear Thats cute but come on dude try to understand AFTER the tour. You just got back from rehab 'we' (lol) gotta make sure you are gonna stay clean. YOU BETTER!!! They really need to sit and talk about this.

P.S. That gif uffff smh xP

Author's Response:

I know this GIF is so azakxqofbzeged....

LMAO, so true, Michael is trying to be cute but damn can't she have a break for once? Poor girl! Yup they really need to sit down and talk about IT

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2013 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 17

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