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Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 11:20 am Title: Chapter 33

Dear god, Michael, come the hell ON.

You see the big belly and bare feet and the "beauty of life" and you like it because you're not the one expereincing it. Shut up and sit down somewhere. I've witnessed pregnancy and lemme tell you the only thing beautiful about it is when you give the final push. Do you know how many sensitivities women get during prgnancies? Birth can put a strain on the organs like you wouldn't believe....do you even consider the posibility of death during childbirth?

Lily's been through it once before, and even if you were there to see it happen, it wasn't happening to you, so SIT YO IGNORANT ASS DOWN SOMEWHERE!!

(deep breath)

on the other hand, obviuosly Lily and Michael are at a stand still, and Michael does get to have an opinion on her birth control, though he doesn't have the final desicion. Why not talk about adoption? All those children without someone to love...wouldn't that be nice?

(sigh) couple drama. that's why i'm single. lol 



Author's Response:

Hello! Oh my I was starting to lose faith. I thought all my readers was on Michael side. Lily is the ne who is going to carry the baby and push during our to give birth. The best Michael would do is hold her hand. PREACH RhythmChild! You're telling the truth, it so easy for Michael to ask for it! LMAO! I'm sure you will find the one, seriously your review gave me hope! You go girl ;)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2013 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 33

Ohhh no no no.. They have grown right? They need to handle this like adults. They can't go back to arguing and walking out. Specially not now that they are engaged. Was it too soon? I hope not. They need to work it out. At least he gave her till the end of the tour.

Author's Response:

Yees, they always argue and walk out instead of talking like grown adults. This has to stop because they are getting married. Thank you for the review and the rate!

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2013 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 33

Man Im speechless but happy



Author's Response:

Haha! Glad I can make my reviewer speechless haha!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2013 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 33

Oh boy. These two wear me out. Smh. Well I'm glad they've finally decided to make things work and Michael did the right thing by proposing. That is the next step and he needed to take that. They're both too damn old to play house and be bf and gf. Husband and wife is what needs to be happening! So kudos for that. And I knew this pregnancy thing would be an issue. I can see both sides of it but honestly, Lily is being a selfish bitch yet AGAIN. She's not too old to where she can't have another baby. When you agree to be a man's wife, he does have a say so about you taking birth control. Now they aren't married YET, but when they get married, she needs to get off that shit. You can't be selfish like that. If Michael wants more children, then she needs to have them. I'd hate for that surrogate shit to happen, so Lily needs to get over herself and tell that man when they get married, they can and WILL have children! She needs to meet him halfway. If Michael has finally tried to grow up and do the right thing by making an honest woman out of her, then she needs to tell him they will have kids after they're married and need to do it! Cuz as soon as he says somebody else will do it, she's gonna be pissed. Stop being a selfish rude bitch Lily and tell that man you're gonna have his babies. Damn she makes me sick. 



Author's Response:

Yes! They are not teenagers but adults so they have to do what adult do; get married! Yeah! We all know Michael wants a lot of children but Lily, not so much... I'm glad you see both sides though! Michael has the right to disagree about he taking birth control pill but he doesn't have the right to tell her not to either! Oh my, Michael hiring a surrgate mother again would be HELL! Thank you for you review love ;)

Reviewer: believesjackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 32

If they can make it through this they can make it through anything d84;! Michael is gonna need Lily so much. I hope they can make it through, and get married and have babIRS after babies after babies. They've been through so much already, they deserve to be happy!!!!



Author's Response:

YES! This is the roughest past, after it everything is going to be fine! Thank for the review and the rate ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 32

Damn.. Here comes the shit storm. Smh. Man... I hope Lily and Michael both stand strong durin this foolishness. I really hope for some consistency from BOTH of them. The hot and cold, on and off shit needs to stop. And Michael needs to stop being so damn naive when it comes to people! I'm glad Lily told him that when he calls himself trying not to hurt somebody, he causes MORE damage. Get it together!



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Yes, it's going to be bad from now on.  Michael will need Lily to be his rock and she better be here for him. Thank for the review ;))

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 32

damn it i need the next chapter iM glad for them



Author's Response:

Hello! I'm actually writing the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 32

Ahhh shit almost perfect, now is the time for Lily to be there for Michael and to lift him up. I hope Michael doesn't push lily away but that he embraces her love and let her heal him.

Author's Response:

Yes you're right! It's now Lily's time to show she is the woman he needs in his life. We can all agree that Michael did his best to man up and now Lily as to support him and be here! Thank for the review and the rate ;)

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2013 08:29 am Title: Chapter 31

Michael came at june with that accusation.....but what gets me is....she never denied it. Thats strange to me. Even though lilly checked out ok, why didnt june deny that she poisoned her? 



Author's Response:

Ooooouh, got to use that in another chapter! Thank you ofr the review the rate AND the idea LOL! New chapter BTW

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2013 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 31

Lawd and so it begins... Smh!!!!! 



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Unfortunately...

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2013 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 31

Okay NOW I'm on June's side. 

We can talk about fake smiles and side looks all day long but June never did anything to physically harm someone. Lily let her selfish jealous ass get in the way of whatever good or bad was happening between mike and June. That is so TRFILING. I hope he finds out. All the crap they been through and she wants to play dirty just to get him back after SHE dumped him?? And put June under the bus like that? Man EFF that. 

A confrontation needs to happen. 

 

Great chapter!:)



Author's Response:

I truly never expected to have someone on June's side LOL. I guess the fact that we all know what will happen make readers hates her from the very beginning. But I got your point; she looks evil but didn't do evil things. And yes, it's quite trifling  from Lily's part to hide from Michael just because it easier to have him back like this! You are absolutely right and I'm certainly using this in a folowwing chapter! I really want to write nother chapter but it's awfully late in France and I have Uni tomorrow. Be back really soon with some drammaaaa.

Than for the review

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2013 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 30

Lily is fuckin stupid to eat anything that bitch made. Even Giselle was smart enough to know that. I don't even feel like leaving my usual long commentary because they're all annoying me at this point. Same shit, different day. Michael's a damn retard, Lily don't know wtf she wants and she goes about it so weak and childishly, and June is a trifling bitch. The end. Only person I can tolerate right now is Giselle. Whatever. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! I just can't with Lily, she sometimes can be so stupid. I mean, from June? Even a chicken soup from Zooey or Tatiana would be better! Don't know what came to her when she ate it! Thumb up @ Gisele. She knows not to trust this with June. I'm sorr they are annoying them, I'm actully trying to make it right LOL. I looooove your long reviews because it always inspires me for my following chapter. When I started the story I had a different end but with your review, it made me change my mind and tries to make it less easy for Michael to get Lily and to portray Lily less like the sweet girl she was at the beggining of the story. Thank you for the review ;)

Reviewer: believesjackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 30

Michael better quit talking to June soon! I can't believe she contaminated the chicken noodle soup like that. I'm glad G had enough common sense not to eat the soup. I can't believe Lily actually still ate the soup. Great chapter :]!!! 



Author's Response:

Hey you new reader! Glad to see I have new even after 33 chapters ;)

LMAO! Thank God Gisele did not eat it! Little G knows better than her parents when it's about judging people! Lily, stuid Lily. On this one I can't defend her LOL! Yeah, let'shope after this Michael will stop talking to June. This woman is evil and she is waiting for the right time to provoke troubles around her. New chapter up BTW :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2013 08:35 am Title: Chapter 29

Children are very perceptive! They spot bullshit a mile away and this bitch June and her kids are going to make Michael's life a living hell. First of all, she's too damn invasive. All in his business, askin is everything alright? Bitch it's NONE of your concern!!!!! Michael is so damn dumb. He's about to have his world turned upside down. June is married and married to a snake. Smh. I'm glad Lily and Giselle decided to leave. Michael always gets in these awkward ass situations and then acts dumbfounded when shit doesn't work out. Just dumb as all hell, it's ridiculous. He should've told June ass to go to a guest room or something because he's talkin to his child and his child's mother. He's so desperate for friendship that he's not even thinking clearly and we all know the worst is yet to come. The one person he needs won't have anything to do with him cuz he's so fuckin stupid. Lily would've been the best woman for him but he's still not deserving of her. Sad. Big dumb ass. And the only thing he's right about is understanding why Lily is the way she is with him. He knows he caused that behavior so he deserves it all and he should be on his knees fighting tooth and nail for her even if she won't take him back. I just can't get over how dumb he is, it's pathetic. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Yess, Gisele saw the real June Chandler in a minute. LMAO! So true! Let's hope that this time he won't be blind. Yeah, unfortunately, we all know how it's going to end :( Michael needs to open his eyes and act before eveything goes out of control

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2013 03:05 am Title: Chapter 29

Awwww G is JUST like mommy. I hope that this time around (no pun intended) Michael is smart enough to see what its going on and that he fixes things the right way. Just for once and the sake of G and Lily.

Author's Response:

Hey you! Yes, Gisele looks like a Jackson but she definitely act like a McCune ;)! Hahah! Yes let's just hope Michael opens his eyes!

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